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Animations of a newbie.
April 18, 2016
12:57 am
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Hello everyone.
First of all I have a bad english like what I'll post here hahaha.
You guys can know me be the "editor" of ARIA(or something like this), but I do not just do edits, I do animations too(surprise), but is not good haha.
well, i'll make some post of my animation here for a time, well see if it goes well.

all loops are in links to newgrouds, so if you want to see the loop click on the link XD, first this one http://www.newgrounds.com/dump.....abfe93d609 is unfinished and is on hold for a long time, need more work, but i'm lazy for this one haha.

And the another one http://www.newgrounds.com/dump.....5b873f9a5c I made this on 2015, don't remember the right month haha.

Right now i'm testing other ways of making an animation. And be gentle with me XD.

April 19, 2016
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Thanks for sharing, I definitely think working on your shadow placement will improve your animations.

April 20, 2016
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Well i dont know anythigh of animation, but for me the animation look pretty mechanic

April 20, 2016
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Vortex00 said
Thanks for sharing, I definitely think working on your shadow placement will improve your animations.

np, yep is one of the problems of my animations, haha and another enemy is the mouth, I never do a good mouth haha.

graav said
Well i dont know anythigh of animation, but for me the animation look pretty mechanic

don't know if I understood what you mean but, yeah my animation look very mechanic hehe, and yes animations is very ... hm.. boring is not the word... is very time consuming haha.

April 21, 2016
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Alukard_1 said

Vortex00 said
Thanks for sharing, I definitely think working on your shadow placement will improve your animations.

np, yep is one of the problems of my animations, haha and another enemy is the mouth, I never do a good mouth haha.

graav said
Well i dont know anythigh of animation, but for me the animation look pretty mechanic

don't know if I understood what you mean but, yeah my animation look very mechanic hehe, and yes animations is very ... hm.. boring is not the word... is very time consuming haha.

Damn i suck at write english ahahah, yeah you understood right

April 27, 2016
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hey, i'm here again with another loop, this time Pattie(with permission of vortex), and you guys know the rules, need to click in the link to see >http://www.newgrounds.com/port.....iew/673885

Hope you guys like xD.

April 27, 2016
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Alukard_1 said
hey, i'm here again with another loop, this time Pattie(with permission of vortex), and you guys know the rules, need to click in the link to see >http://www.newgrounds.com/port.....iew/673885

Hope you guys like xD.

I like it. I left a review on NG

but with some animation variations a small game can be made with it also. similar to wild peach it is just one animation at different speed and a few accessories to unlock.

spiralvortexplay.com/svp/2015/05/26/umichan-maiko-wild-peach/

April 28, 2016
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Vortex00 said

I like it. I left a review on NG
but with some animation variations a small game can be made with it also. similar to wild peach it is just one animation at different speed and a few accessories to unlock.
spiralvortexplay.com/svp/2015/05/26/umichan-maiko-wild-peach/

 

I think it's not hard to do, but I don't know much about programming hehe. after finishing the loop i'm doing now, I'll make a speed up and climax scene for pattie to see how it looks.

April 28, 2016
10:42 am
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I can program it

April 28, 2016
12:04 pm
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oh! haha, just let me finish the loop i'm doing now and I'll send you a mail about it xD.

April 28, 2016
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Wow the creeper avatar can draw and animate. So many evil ideas in his head.... I don't want to know what your thinking... LOL

Anyways they are nice animation, you should keep doing them. Chances are Vortex00 might use them if you want him to use them on his projects. It would probably be on a new project of a game. You probably will go crazy, because the problem with project which I witness is. Artist usually have to many ideas. By the time they start they have another idea they want to put in. And than there is UMCC, trust me you don't want to know how long it took to finally get release. 

April 30, 2016
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justjoe2k said
Wow the creeper avatar can draw and animate. So many evil ideas in his head.... I don't want to know what your thinking... LOL

Anyways they are nice animation, you should keep doing them. Chances are Vortex00 might use them if you want him to use them on his projects. It would probably be on a new project of a game. You probably will go crazy, because the problem with project which I witness is. Artist usually have to many ideas. By the time they start they have another idea they want to put in. And than there is UMCC, trust me you don't want to know how long it took to finally get release. 

hehe some many evil ideas, so many prety girls being fucked ... ops hehe.

 If vortex someday want to make a game with my animations will be a honor for me xD, and ye every animation 10 more ideas hehe (doing animation for a game I think the idea up to 30? hehe)

And if i'm not wrong UMCC took 5 or 10 years to be released lol.

oh i'm almost finishing the loop i'm doing right now xD.

May 3, 2016
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hey guys i'm here again to post another loop, but this one is not pattie or another character of vortex(sad), but is tsunade xD.
http://www.newgrounds.com/port.....iew/674179 here the link to NG.
Now i'll be doing a short game to vortex (trying), hopefully finish this week, so stay healthy xD

May 4, 2016
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it's getting there, the shading is better but still room for improvement. Tsunade head part of the animation needs to be a more smooth.

May 5, 2016
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I fixed Itachi, but the leg I already did the movement so is hard to change :x, next time i’ll make correctly I promise xD.
And if I change to tablet the quality of my animations will down very badly hehe, I do animations the same way of pinoy, with the mouse xD.
Here how look my animation before I animate http://www.newgrounds.com/dump.....282d0b4a77

You placed the animation a bit to the right of the screen. It has it pros and cons. What is good: the misplacement of Tsunade's leg doesn't strike the eye right now. What is bad: the center of the animation composition is also shifted to the right and it does strike the eye.

Talking about the animation in general, the most significant problems of it, besides the leg and the shifting, are shadows and colors. Adding more of them to all of the characters' body parts, especially to the hair, would improve the general appearance. You should also work on the angle of the shadows. For example, the shadow in the area of Tsunade's sacrum is too straight.

By the way, there's no a symbol of Konoha on the Itachi's headband:

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As for the graphics tablet, I strongly recommend buying one. Yes, at first your works will come out pretty bad, but if you want to improve your skills, you should go through it. At least, it will help you with drawing sketches a lot.

You know what you should work on. But still, you're doing really well for a newbie, as you call yourself, - it's certain. 😉

May 9, 2016
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Sorry for delay hehe, I wanted to say "Fixed", if you catch my meaning hehe.
and yeah shadows are hurting my ass, I always forget to put a "sun point" in my drawnings hehe.
For the badge,sorry I forgot, one friend say the same thing to me haha.
next drawing/animations will be better I promise xD.

June 3, 2016
2:56 am
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hey i'm still alive xD, i'm doing some things in my house so I didn't did much things in part of animation.

so here an picture of pattie I did a time ago >>http://www.newgrounds.com/dump.....c8aa52c419

I finished another loop(a bigger one), but is not just a loop, is a mini-movie, starring some OC of me xD. I need to do some adjust because I don't know much about AS hehe, today or tomorrow will be up.
Till next time.

June 3, 2016
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Alukard_1 said
hey i'm still alive xD, i'm doing some things in my house so I didn't did much things in part of animation.

so here an picture of pattie I did a time ago >>http://www.newgrounds.com/dump.....c8aa52c419

I finished another loop(a bigger one), but is not just a loop, is a mini-movie, starring some OC of me xD. I need to do some adjust because I don't know much about AS hehe, today or tomorrow will be up.
Till next time.  

Wow, you're getting better and better. I'd recommend you to adjust Pattie's face and her nipple a bit. Also try to make your girls look very flexible (but don't take it to the absurd). Good work.

June 4, 2016
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Ty neferis, i'm doing my best to do better loops/pictures xD.

And here another loop, with some AS and text >>>http://www.newgrounds.com/port.....iew/675680

hope you guys like xD, next one will be zytra!.

till next loop/game/movie/picture xD.

June 4, 2016
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Alukard_1 said
Ty neferis, i'm doing my best to do better loops/pictures xD.

And here another loop, with some AS and text >>>http://www.newgrounds.com/port.....iew/675680

hope you guys like xD, next one will be zytra!.

till next loop/game/movie/picture xD.  

You're definitely improving yourself.
Just a bit more frames (to make the animation look smoother, you know) and lines (especially, around the girl's heels).

I noticed, that you put shadows under the girl's hands but didn't do it with the guy.

 

By the way, have you obtained a graphics tablet?

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