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March 8, 2018
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Nice, just fund this out and hello y'all hope you're enjoying your day. I just wanted to toss up an idea that happens after day 3 on "The Rookie"  involving a investigator trying to find the "the Shark" or Buck in the Nanako region.

March 12, 2018
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Many thanks. The rookie is a completed game however I can perhaps add the idea in later games. There is a Yui game coming up that is somewhat of a parody of some of the the Rookie events.

March 12, 2018
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Welcome to the forum,¬†Isaiah! Great idea! ūüôā

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March 12, 2018
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Vortex00 said
Many thanks. The rookie is a completed game however I can perhaps add the idea in later games. There is a Yui game coming up that is somewhat of a parody of some of the the Rookie events.  

Cool, glad to get a quick replie. Just too add more to the idea, the investigator is new to the region and though out the mission starts to develop Khalei degeneration with his scan ability [making a copy of someones spirit and living though it- which making him a good investigator]

wow just discovered that making a story is hard, my hats of to you spiral and story makers.

March 13, 2018
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keep in mind sentoryu takes place before the cafe it set up. Placing it before Rookie and UMCH timelines
Carl's work in the region is over but he does visit the cafe from time to time to have fun with Jeni as her special client.

also are you referring to possession stuff?

March 14, 2018
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I just read "JLCK timeline and outline" and it sounds awesome.

The investigator can be in that TBA game you mention and it can be apart of your story/or a side storySmile, he has a storm elemental Khelei crystal enbedded in his chest allowing him to produce lethal amounts of electricity around him and thunderous force though his body, greatly increasing strength, a special vest prevents most of the electrical damage and handles most of the force that would there wise kill him.

The storm crystal has a small demon in it that wishes to organizes a list of feeling, memories,etc just to learn about non-demons, this allows the investigator to see images/feeling of someones recent history when they are resting/asleep. this can cause problems because the feeling felt are so real it can mess with his mind [can feel wounded/winded, fatigue/sick,etc as if he been through it].

The investigator is part of a small secret company that wishes to learn more on GemCo activities, as in their knowledge on the crystals and experiments they do, also the reason the investigator is trying to get info from Buck, Alma,etc on GemCo Executives.

This is all I can think of this week and hope this clears some of My shabby random writingSmile. I'll continue with this if it is a good idea and cool with you SpiralVortex00, ps should I have continue writing in this random topics or projects topics/thoughts and analysis?

March 15, 2018
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The investigator reminds me of a character that exists named Donavik, aka Sixxe. Has lightning based Khalei, inner demon, is part of a small group of rebels, and trying to learn more about gemco. He travels with a oracle that can see history and the future and travel back and fourth in time. They actually appear at the very start of UMCH.

writing in this topic is fine thanks.

March 16, 2018
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I remember Donavik in the start UMCH but didn't know of his lightning Khalei or the rebels. So I'll change it a bit

The investigator can be with the rebels and the small demon is still the same[as posted before].

changing storm to vibes-meaning he can silence an area around him[decreasing sound to work in peace or taking out someone quietly] and can place sickening/lethal vibrations with hand-to-hand combat, but usually avoids fighting because of the small risk of shattering his own crystal.

To describe him he'e like "perfect" from Vandread Love Quest, small, nerdy yet cool. More into machines, history, and games. Smart, shy, and brave against something/someone being violent or hostile.

March 26, 2018
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Good morning all, just busy trying to sign into school, and wanted to add/change a bit to this character.

The investigator can be a adopted son of Natan [if it's cool with Vortex00] and mostly out of the way, studying about Khalei degeneration in a lab, but sent to help GemCo agents on finding Jeo.

Also changing his rebel thing to an agent

April 3, 2018
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He would have to never found Jeo, since Jeo was found in ARIA. or found him before Arielle but was not successful at capturing him.

Not totally sure on the small demon in the crystal since they are typically not passive in this lore, don't reside in crystals, and don't care too much about people. But there can be other ways to explain images/feeling of someones recent history when they are sleep. There are otehr character like Dizzy who can see things a normal person wouldn't. it usually involves saboteur khalei. Or he can be a created entity of someone's imagination similar to Annie and the magical kitty.

Being Nata's son can work. It could be interesting considering Natan ran off and everyone is looking for him after they found out he is really the one who attacked Lynn. Maybe once Natan is gone he assuming his executive role and inherits his money. so you have a some really young exec.

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April 5, 2018
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Out of the two of "not finding Jeo or not capturing his" not successful at capturing him sounds better, this can also explain how your characters travel from "planet to space", and how big a city is on a planet.

The only character with a demon crystal that I remember is Donavik [ I think so?] so the demon thing can be taken out, and the scanning ability can be from a saboteur khalei, that helped Natan work on that antidote for Khalei degeneration.

That's awesome he can be Natan's boy, also finding Myself confused by this magical kitty?

I think Silver had a character-on-character conversation that helped make the character stand out more? on Silver's topic, if you want I can think of a few conversation.

April 5, 2018
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scanning and sensory type stuff is from yellow kahlei.

don't worry about the magical kitty stuff.

yeah Donavik has a demon but it's not a crystal, nor in a crystal.
GemCo at this point in time are unaware of any demons or alternate realms. They find out after a confrontation with Donavik.

 

you might describe how the character looks. is he like a shota?

and some lines between him and Nantan and Arielle perhaps.

Ari would be a discussion about going to find Jeo. and Natan might be explaining to him about what his kahlei device can do.

April 6, 2018
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Cool and I can give more info later, now I know what to explain. Also he may be the only exec with that balding gay going after Jeo in space, since Natan is going to run, Ace is arrested and Albert had plans to stop funding GemCo, if I remembered that correctly.[also don't know what a shota is?]

Describtion

slightly taller then Kyle and a fit body, short black heir, needs reading glasses, eyes left-yellow right-purple, the name-{Code"Solar"Natan-Jr} not certain about name, can change if wanted.

conversation

with Natan and Solar

Natan-So, how's the results? 

Solar-On?

Natan-Your kahlei device

Solar-Oh, that.[thinking for a moment] It shows promise on what I theorizes, that both the sensory kahlei and saboteur kahlei would work together, with the appropriate amount of energy.

Natan-The short version will do.

Solar-Ok, lets see.[a moment later] I can forcefully read parts of peoples minds. Mostly with the sensory and light saboteur kahlei working together. With most recent being clear, and upon further tries can open up more of their past with clarity.

Natan-Are you sure?

Solar-Yes, but the subject's experience fatigue and dizziness, same as the small levels of the kahlei degeneration the we know so far when their awake. But it's harmless when thy are sleeping.

Natan-Alright, that is good to know, but what happen to your eyes?

Solar-Oh, [thinking for a moment] I miss calculated the needed amount of energy to focus on. The result was My eyes changed color but no harm done. It's pretty cool, dont you think so?

Natan-Just be careful, son.

Solar-Will do.

 

with Arielle and Solar

Ari-Hello, you must be Solar, the new exec people are talking about.

Solar-Yes, and I assume your Arielle, an agent close to Jeo.[thinking on things] So from the look of things you want to talk about finding Jeo?

Ari-Yes, and just to let you know I do not know what happen with Jeo at the school or what [Solar points one finger up, asking her to stop].

Solar-[pondering on Ari's body motion] I believe you, on not knowing what happened. This is why I think we can work together on finding Jeo, you are most likely to talk to Jeo without getting hurt.

Ari-Jeo will not harm me, and thank you on believing me with this. But how will we find him, he could be leaving this planet by now?

Solar-Then we have a general idea on where he's going, because without proper preparation he risks revealing his exact location. But your right, Jeo will find away out, it's only a mater of time.

Ari-Right, so we should get going, but how will we work together with you being an exec?

Solar-If you agree with being my an escort agent for the time being, and you can leave the planet to find Jeo if/when he leaves the planet

Ari-I'll agree if you promise not to hurt Jeo.

Solar-[thinking] I promise not to hurt Jeo, but I'll defend others if he's hurting others, so yeah, more or less.

Ari-What![sigh]fine, lets go.

April 15, 2018
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Thanks.
I was originally thinking Natan designed the device and solar used it but solar making it is fine.

as I mentioned sensory is from yellow khalei I don't see the need for purple here? is it for the dizzy/fatigue effect? than can be a natural side effect from overloading sensory khalei into a person's mind.

even in small amounts, purple khalei would do way more damage than an eye color change. it would more likely blind him if it effected his eye(s). and loss of memory his brain, disabled arm if his arm, etc.

Phil, who can be seen in the Bri side story has all those bandages from experimenting with purple Khalei and having to do all kinds of processes to repair his body.

Maiko can be resistant to small amounts of it from her hairpin because she has a Cia inside her. but even eventually later in the story it overcomes that.

keep in mind special agents can resist small amounts of purple kahlei. it is how they can be on a ship together with Bri or near her while she is using it in combat. It doesn't distinguish friendlies but can be focused mostly to enemies with enough mental kinesis.

in the Dialogue with Ari, I was thinking more along the lines of solar come to Ari to talk about finding Jeo, but not them going together. Just a bit of lore, Solar would still need harold's approval to take Ari since she is his special agent. But the dialogues overall achieved the purpose of understanding the mannerisms of the character, thanks.

April 20, 2018
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Awesome, just wasn't sure if the Khalei crystal was in a person but using a device makes a lot of sense.

Natan making the device sounds better, just thought Solar can find different uses from sentinel bot/Khalei devices.

Your right, there in no need for purple Khalei. Having yellow Khalei overloading can cause dizzy/fatigue on self/others.

That's awesome I achieved that dialogue with Natan/Ari. And thanks for the lore, I didn't put together that Exec can have special agents.

I'll also put-up some character-info on "character concepts topic" to help reduce clutter in your forum.

Also, hope everyone is having a good daySmile

April 23, 2018
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@izik0c4

keep in mind that Solar will assume responsibilities of some agents under Natan including Tiffany.
that should be interesting to say the least.

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