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Savor the moment outline
January 16, 2017
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Savor the Moment
Player: Maiko

setting: takes place after Affluently ineffective quest. Maiko has guitar already.

not totally sure on point allocation. this just general outline for VN style game.

Outline
day1:
starts in afternoon
starts with Maiko leaving cafe job a bit stressed but happy she is about to practice with her crush greel tomorrow at school and hang out.
in the mall bumps into her perv friend kyle who is going into book store to sell lewd photos of students.
approves +1 Kyle
says she can takes pics for money also +1 Albert
neutral
disapproves -1 kyle, -1 Albert

maiko meet riely outside and goes back home with riley to study.
maiko can tell riely what kyle was doing as they walk home.  
covers for him savori+1
tells savori-1

day2:
next day at school maiko in class, talks to some of her friends. pattie and kyle and greel about after class practice.

after class maiko bump into riley with savori in the hallway riley is about to get alma to try to catch Kyle with pics on his camera.
if maiko mentioned it to riley already he will say maiko mentioned it to her already.

 
maiko promised to meet Greel in the music room. she can warn kyle or go meet greel.
meet greel +1 greel
go see kyle +1 kyle

warn kyle route
Maiko going in music room to find kyle pattie and joey. same as in UMCH.
maiko has option to get pics transferred to her camera else kyle deletes them all just in time.
save pic +1 kyle
delete -1 kyle
and kyle gets away with it. savori mad. maiko short talk with alma.
miako can agree to deliver pics herself like in umch

meet greel late. no option for + or –
onyl zytra and greel there

Greel route
maiko runs into Peach and Creamy and Zytra in the music room. lot of popular girls with Greel. Maiko feel intimidated. and Creamy is jealous maiko has a nickname babydoll with greel.
maiko can be nice or mean to her.
nice +1 greel
mean -1 greel

after class maiko bumps into savori who doesn’t want to talk. she will talk and feel better if maiko told riley about the pics.
maiko goes back to work in the cafe.

if not deliver pics
bumps into kyle and bookstore owner albert again. kyle will be kind of upset if his photos got deleted earlier.
maiko can deepen the wound or try to apologize.
apologize kyle+1
deepen kyle-1  
either way kyle already has new photos.

if delivered pics scne is like in UMCH

Albert says creey perv shit to Maiko and considers buying special service for her in the cafe.
maiko can seem interested or not.
interested Albert+1
not interested Albert-1

in the cafe the popular girls comes in with Greel and Creamy claims she can get more business than Maiko etc.
If maiko missed her meeting with greel he will seem distant and not defend her from Creamy, instead pattie will.
if maiko meet in music room and kept cool Greel will defend her upsetting Creamy even more.
Zytra will also talk a bit with her sister leyah.

maiko will leave the cafe stressed if not defended by Greel and hopeful if defended by him.
pattie will insist on coming home with maiko if she is stressed.

at maiko house riley visits also for a study session (optionally with pattie) and riely tell maiko she met a old childhood friend today.
gossip about maiko’s day, greel, Creamy etc.

day3:
maiko talks to Greel and gang and mention the girls have to do a model shoot today and wont be in the music room.
if Greel is cool with maiko he will offer to practice with her alone, if not he will cancel today’s practice and hang out with the models.
if greel offer to practice alone creamy will make him hang out with her instead.

after class maiko talks to Alma since she is bummed out a little.
Maiko check in ith kyle id delivered photos yesterday.
Maiko decides to come to gym class with alma instead of going to work today.
.
in locker room maiko sees kyle running from savori.
try to break it up saovri -1, kyle+1
dont help kyle kyle-1

if maiko is low with savori she will become hostile towards maiko like in UMCH
if good with maiko she wil be more calm
explain her story either way. sex scne is not preset here liek in UMCH.

maiko stressed a this point. kyle has a plan to deal with the situation back in clubroom.

after talk maiko goes back home sleeps.

day4:
Greel has concern for Maiko. more so if Greel points high. asks if Maiko wants to hang out after class.

maiko runs into kyle savori drama like in UMCH. maiko talks with alma.

maiko decides what to do in photo room. (leads to different endings)

report albert
same as umch
maiko realizes she is missing another practice.
it is possible for maiko to talk kyle into reporting if enough points and can hang out with greel.
else maiko does it herself.
herself, ruins relationship with greel but savori is safe next day and likes kyle, if savori points too low – for the greater good ending.

replace savori – same as UMCH kyle runs out.
maiko can bargain for him to just be satified with her only based on points – submissive ending.

or report him
or do nothing.
 
let savori handle her own problems
now is when the savori sex scenes happens- suicide ending.

go hang out with greel
Creamy will come to steal him away again but depends on points with greel.
who he will go with. maiko will practice finally getting sex – selfish ending.
if creamy steals him – rejected ending

day 5: day more like text ending dialogue describing what happens.
maiko learns that savori suicides next morning if from riley if none reported report.
else savori will be there. and same as UMCH.
if points are high for enough for savori she is is brave enough to tell greel everything that happened and how maiko was helping
maiko gets her private practice session with greel after class – true ending.

 

January 17, 2017
3:36 pm
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So, you are redoing the Savor the Moment quest after all?

The endings seem cool, but I have a question – can you get true ending with other endings? F.e. from what you’ve wirtten I can see, that you can get max relationship with Savori and Albert at the same time. Does it mean, that you can get both submissive ending and true ending?

January 17, 2017
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Not it won’t be possible to get two or more ending simultaneously. I haven’t looked at the points in detail I’m sure there are a few mathematical issues heh. but even you have the same points you can only end up at one ending because you can only ever pick one of the options.

I plan to add more detail to all the quests as separate games. I think UMCH will only be able to just kinda describe it lightly because you are always playing from Maiko POV. Maiko is not always there. Savor the Moment will be about Maiko dealing with Saovri stuff vs her personal issues. But other quests can be better if played by different characters. In the Tsugo one he will likely be the main character, that wayyuo can see his home like, more about his little brother etc. Jeni will likely be told through Jeni’s uncle and will takes place before Holly’s cafe shop is fully established. And any more might be other characters such as a Kyle one, etc.

January 18, 2017
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OK. But I still want to know one thing. If you pick the submissive ending, will Savori still kill herself? Will Maiko make some deal with Albert to stop him from using his daughter if you pick it? This ending is what I’ve been suggesting earlier, so of course I’d like to pick it, but I wouldn’t want Savori to die becouse of it.

January 18, 2017
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savori would stay alive in that scenario.

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