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December 6, 2016
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@Vortex00

 

Since the random girls that can be played instead of Maiko don't have established character, can they still have the pregnancy mechanic but not the game over sequence if they get cummed in? 

 

Like the pill icon still appears but you aren't required to visit Remi to avoid a game over and if you decide not to get rid of it, eventually the pill icon won't go away even if you do visit Remi. Or maybe the icon gets changed to a baby bump icon or something like that to show she's pregnant. 

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just mentioning I saw this but let me get a rain check on this until after UMCH updates.

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Here's a little bio I cooked up about the lingerie shop owner idea I had. All my full body images of her are pretty out of context so for something like this I just stuck a sketched headshot of her. If you like where this is going, I can get the other images out too but until then. The only super important thing to know about is the afro. 

 

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Name: Mira Jeaning

 

Age: Young 20’s

 

Personality traits: Impulsive, airheaded, carefree, relaxed, goofy

 

Interests: Every creative thing imaginable. (Music, sewing, stand up comedy, visual arts, etc.)

 

Backstory/Why the store: A couple years ago Mira dropped out of school to be an artist and bought a shop space to sell her stuff. However since she has no idea how running a shop works and didn’t think anything through before hand, the shop did really poorly. Since she didn’t want to give up her dream, she ended up moving out of her place and living in the shop to save money. One day during this she closed shop early and just sat around lounging in some underwear she sewed herself. Not realizing the shop was supposed to be closed, a woman walked in and asked to get some lingerie that she assumed Mira was modeling. Mira was confused but agreed to take a request if it could help pay the bills. So she took the ladies’ measurements and said she’d sew up a design like the one’s she was wearing. The lady then put a down payment for the lingerie that was way higher than everything else Mira had sold in weeks and so, Mira started selling lingerie as a side business until it eventually became the major focus of her store. She still does other forms of creative expression and tries to make money off those pursuits as well but none have been as successful as the lingerie business.

 

Hair: Mira's hair is secretly a wig and completely fake. So any time somebody wants to touch it she gets incredibly defensive and won't let them near it. The amount of people that know this secret is incredibly small and only consist of the people she trusts most. 

 

Sexual preferences: About 75% lesbian. (Only actively pursues relationships with girls but back in school most of her friends were guys that didn’t have much luck with girls. So she took a lot of their virginities to help them feel better. She didn’t hate doing it but she still wouldn’t do it if it didn’t help them.) In particular she likes girl’s with bigger butts and thighs.

 

 

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Likes:

 

Music Club members and any other artistic types because she likes to meet other creative types and support their stuff if possible. (If you’re looking for somewhere to expand the music club, you could maybe use this place as a way of doing that. Maybe by selling CD’s from the music club or having performances here.)

 

Girl’s with big butts are the girl’s she’d be most interested in but she wouldn’t be too aggressive  in pursuing them. She wouldn’t try to ask out girls that are clearly only interested in guys or girls that are not in the mood. However if someone Mira finds attractive walks in that doesn’t match these qualifications, she’d try to flirt with them a bit and if they’re interested, invite them to a ‘private fitting session’ or to ’model for her paintings’ or some other similar euphemism.

 

Customers are important to Mira but she isn’t as interested in getting as much money out of them as possible like Holly is. She’s more relaxed and figures that if she makes the store a nice place to go to and doesn’t pressure people too much. Then they’ll be more likely to show up.

 

 

Dislikes:

 

Too serious types and the guys that think creativity is pointless would get on her nerves the most. She wouldn’t say she hates them but they’re the type of people she’d get into arguments with the most.

 

Gemco agents and the like would probably not appreciate Mira running a shop in her underwear all the time. At least from the way they react to other sexual esque businesses. (Like the cafe.) But I figured she would argue with them by saying women’s bodies are art and that she needs to advertise her merchandise.

 

 

Could go either way:

 

Joey: She seems to be pretty against sexual types so I don’t think she’d be too interested in a lingerie shop but she also seems to like fashion and that sort of thing. So I’m not a hundred percent sure how that would work.

 

Teachers: She dropped out of school fairly recently, so teachers that have been around a few years will probably recognize her. However she wasn’t a very good student so they may not have anything good to say about her.

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Seems to work. She could know Alfie, he went to the school also but graduated. and is likely one of the dudes that was virgin that she could have had pity sex with.

There seems to be a lot of emphasis placed on the afro but it is missing information? You need to explain why she is defensive about it and why she wears it.

you also need to describe the rest of her body.

Also likely every teacher knows about her. But if she just only had bad grades I doubt they would all not have anything nice to say about her. in fact maybe Alma helped her get a shop in the first place.

Also the woman that bought the first custom bra seems relevant. It would be good if this was known person in the lore. A kinda rich'ish lady that would need a custom bra that comes to mind could be Rinoga.

Also I can be pretty sure the Roise and Zytra go there fairly often. But I think you explained how those interactions might be. Roise is bi and Zytra is straight. Other big butts girls would be Maiko, Luma, Roise's mom, and perhaps one of the background character girls Alice.

As for Joey she likes sewing, and taking nature photos. so there could be some scenes where they are talking about sewing and stuff. However as I mentioned Zytra is there a lot also, ans Zytra is is the music club and does modeling. They both have art stuff but clash with each other over Tsugo. Need to explain what there character might do or say.

Just like the cafe she would have to deal with Kyle, and some pervs showing up. Need to explain what she would do for that also.

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Alfie would fit that bill pretty well. But since he hasn’t really grown up since then, I'm not sure if she'd still be super friendly with him. 


The afro wig is there because she's actually bald. When she was a kid her hair just started falling out one day and doctors couldn't figure out why. Since there was no cure, her parents got her a wig but they were kinda poor they had to get her one that she would grow into and be able to wear for a long time. So they got her a super huge afro wig. The defensiveness is mostly from embarrassment, since nobody's into bald chicks and she doesn't want anybody to find that out about her. I wasn't sure how important the hair would be in game so I didn't elaborate too much on it before. 


I do have other images of her but they aren't too good at showing her body type, like here's this out of context one where you can't see her legs. 


To put it in words, she's got c cup breasts, she's 5 ft 4 inches tall w/o hair and 6 ft 10 inches with hair. She's more bottom heavy than most characters, with bigger hips, thighs and ass. Measurements would be something like 34c-29-39. 


I figured she'd walk around the shop in lingerie like the last shop owner but have a fluffy fur coat over it to look a bit fancier. Outdoors she'd wear a dress kind of like the reference here. Possibly also with the coat.


Yeah now that you mention the grade thing that does make sense. I mean with Maiko all the teachers are super supportive and try to get her grades up, so it doesn't make much sense for them not to like her just because of that. I didn't know Alma would be supportive enough to get a store for any of her students though. I understand it with Maiko of course but I wasn't sure if she'd be that helpful to just anybody. 


The character that first bought lingerie from her could definitely be someone established and actually could be a lot of different characters now that I think about it. Not just wealthy characters but even girls with larger breasts would probably need to spend extra on custom bras to make sure they fit well. So even characters like Zytra, Roise, Luma or even Maiko herself could be the first customer. That character would probably be best decided by what you need most from a character like this. If you want a stronger connection with Rookie and Aria then Rinonga would definitely a good choice, you could also make it the Aria girls if you wanted to do that. You could also use this angle to develop a character from UMCH as well. So someone like Roise, Holly, Roise's mom or even the teachers could get a bit more screen time this way. 


 Character interactions: 

Maiko: Since Maiko is player controlled there can be all sorts of ways this could go. Mira would likely hit on Maiko but she may not try if Maiko looks too upset or her stress is too high. In that situation she’d try to cheer her up instead. For Maiko's reaction, I'd imagine that would be a player choice of some kind, since Maiko is confirmed to at least be curious about girl on girl. Without knowing how far you plan to take the lingerie shop, I don't know what to say about Maiko's possible acceptance of that. Maybe it could be like in UMCC where Mira watches Maiko with another girl to get 'inspired'. Or maybe she asks Maiko to model some clothes for her and things get frisky from there.

 

Luma: Depending on Luma's disposition, Mira would probably approach Luma very differently. If she's walking in the store calmly to shop or is there with friends, Mira would probably try to hit on her the same way she'd do with characters like Roise and Maiko but if Luma's in a very 'Luma' mood or if she's acting especially full of herself. Mira probably wouldn't want to deal with that drama and leave her be. 

 

Roise's mom: I remember you saying that Roise’s mom was retired so she’d probably be pretty relaxed about most things, including Mira’s advances and since she’s Roise’s mom she’d probably be at least open minded to some yuri action. They’re both also business owners so they could talk about that as well but since they’re both also very relaxed I don’t think they’d be too serious in that discussion. Instead they’d probably just end up talking about terrible customers they had or gossip about the weird customers that visit them.

 

 

Alice: I couldn’t find a set personality for Alice anywhere, so I might suggest something like a ditzy personality type. Since there really isn’t a character like that right now. With a personality like that, she would probably be super excited to get asked to model some clothes for Mira but not realize that she’s actually hitting on her. Mira would likely equally be unaware that a ditzy girl would be unaware. It could work out something like this,

 

Mira: Hey you look like you’re new here. Are you d.t.f.?

Alice: Dtf?

Mira: Yeah you know, like down to come to the back and do a little private modeling. Maybe do a little scissor, scissor if things get too hot.

Alice: Huh!? Modeling really?! I’d love to model!

Mira: Sweet, I got some extra special designs for times like this…

Alice: Really?! Wow this is going to be great!

Mira: Heck yeah it is.

 

Maiko interupt-

Maiko: Alice? I don’t think that-

Mira: Shhh… come on Maiko don’t kill the mood. I’m about to get some…

Alice: Yeah Maiko, she’s about to get some professional modeling by yours truly!

Maiko: Alright, if you say so…

 

 

Joey/Zytra: I’d assume a fight wouldn’t break out right away between the two in public, at least not a super aggressive one anyway. So Mira would probably assume she could diffuse the incident while it’s still passive aggressive and see it blow up in her face. Something like this example,

 

Joey: Zytra… I didn’t expect to see you here…

Zytra: Of course I’d be in a lingerie store, some of us have men to keep entertained.

Joey: What’s that supposed to mean?!

Zytra: What do you think?!

Mira: Whoa, whoa girls! No need to be yelly, screamy.

Both: She started it!!!

Mira: Jeez come on, just settle down. Life’s a canvas and the best paint is compassion. So why don’t you girls make kissy faces until life’s a pretty picture.

Joey: I’m not doing anything nice for this skank!

Zytra: I can say the same to you, you creepy little witch!

Mira: Oh goodness, this just won’t end…

 

Perverts: Depending on the pervert and their actions, this could vary a lot too. Like if Kyle or someone else in the photography club was taking pictures there, she'd consider them to be pirating her designs and force them to buy whatever design they tried to photograph. If it's a dude that's desperate to meet girls she may offer to help him out herself if the guy's nice enough about it. I'm not sure all who may be included in that pity sex category though, maybe Kyle and the shotas? I don't think perves like Joiry and David would show up here at all. While there are chicks in lingerie, it's also a clothing store and I think if they wanted to see girls they would just go to cafe instead. mira-ref-1.jpgImage Enlarger

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Hi Vortex!

I have two ideas of maybe not adding something completly new, but expanding the already existing stories/quests. I've mentioned one of them already on LoK forum, but I'd like to talk about it some more here.

I'd like to talk about Savor the Moment quest and sentinel battle tease scene.

OK, so about Savor the Moment. I really liked the quest, especially the "replacing Savori" part. So I thought that maybe there could be other ending to this quest. Right now you either report Albert, which Maiko doesn't really want to do becouse of Savori, or just let him be and still presumably use his daughter (I can't get the game over scene you talked about in walkthrough, so I don't really know what exacly happens when you just ignore it). How about after "visiting" Albert with Kyle for the first time you can get a new way of ending this quest by making a deal with him. What I'm thinking of is something like - you agree to visit him at night once every week, but he can't use Savori anymore. Maybe even make Albert come to Maiko at night and force her to pleasure him if she doesn't come all week (it would add the second forced sex to the game, what many players might like). I know you don't want this game to be all about running around fucking dudes, but since it's optional ending, I think it would fit the game.

Now about the sentinel battle. This idea is kinda similar to the first one, becouse it adds more sex scenes, but also (at least for me) makes the sentinel battle events more interesting. So, let's get to the point. All guys that offer their "help" to Maiko want sex in exchange, so it's a bit... underwhelming(?), that sentinel guys are ok with just the tease. Moreover I feel like what they give you for it is way less noticable than what f.e. Tom or David give you for pleasuring them (or maybe I just suck at sentinel battles too much to notice the difference). So I thought that it would be a cool idea, if there were more scenes with the sentinel battle guys, that would lead to upgrading your sentinel to a certain high level. How I imagine it - the already existing tease would just make them upgrade it a little, maybe even less than it already does. After losing to them again Maiko would ask for more upgrades, but they would be more demanding this time and ask for handjob, blowjob or maybe paizuri. This would lead to upgrading her sentinel even more. BUT if you lose one more time, they would ask if Maiko wants them to upgrade it even more, but they would demand her to let them go all out on her, leading to a threesome scene (or maybe even scenes). I think that MMF theesome/gangbang scenes is what UMCH lacks, so that would be also a nice addition to the game.

I know that making these two things happen would be a lot of work, but I'd appreciate if you at least considered adding them.

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I was wondering if it was ever mentioned, but is there a way to collect the pictures? I mean, aside from Kyle's collection. And will someone at some point ask for pictures from the other girls? Like, i've tried to sell the guy who asks for pictures from the café the pictures i got from the other girls, but he doesn't take it. And how about the possibility to take pictures when we want? Like taking a picture of Maiko and Pattie's fun when Maiko brings Pattie home, or pictures of Luma in a wet swimsuit, for exemple?

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Hi again Vortex!

You don't really seem to be avoiding cliche characters, so I'm gonna give you my own idea. Not many details yet tho, becouse it takes me long time to make an interesting character (when I play D&D it takes me like 3 sessions to get my character done) and I just want to know what you think about it.

OK, let's get to the point. My idea is to make twin brothers that are together for the most of the time. Kind of two in one. They would appear together, take part in conversations together and maybe even be in the sex scenes together (I already said in my previous post that I think this game needs more threesomes!). I would love them to be called George and Lucas... you know why ^^

The way I imagine them - they would be the complete opposite when it comes to personality. George would be the loud and cheerful one (not annoying tho). He would make fun of everything and be overall good friend with everybody. Lucas on the other hand would be shy and quiet. He would still be pretty nice and polite to everybody and thus other students would like him. George would also be good at sports, while Lucas would be a good student.

I haven't thought of their appearance yet, becouse I've thought more about their personalities and possible interactions. George would be of course the one handling most of the converstions, but he would also try to help his brother become more sociable. If they had the names I suggested, I'd love them to be interested in sci-fi books and movies. Maybe even be in sci-fi club or a movies club.

When it comes to sex they would be pretty casual, not the sex-freaks. George would be already pretty experienced, while Lucas would still be a virgin. I think it would also be good to make Lucas secretly have crush on some girl. Becouse these characters already revolve around being the opposites of each other, I thought that maybe Lucas' crush would be also his opposite, f.e. Stacy (as she is pretty slutty) or Jeni (as she is pretty mean). George would know about his brother's interest and try to help him talk to the girl, get closer to her and eventually bang her (but this time 1 on 1, becouse it's not cool banging your brother's crush).

I think it would even make a cool mini quest. Maiko would overhear George and Lucas talking about Stacy/Jeni but they would notice her and ask her for help, as she is working with Stacy/Jeni and can help Lucas get closer to her. This would lead to Lucas eventually inviting his crush for a date. Before the date he would get extremly nervous and George would ask Maiko if she could help him get confidence by banging with both of them (I really want the threesomes ^^). Becouse I don't think you want to punish players for not picking the sex option, I think that not accepting George's offer would just lead to Lucas not getting laid at the date, but still getting a girlfriend.

Tell me what you think about it and if you like the idea I will try to further develop the characters or maybe hand them down to someone else.

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I've thought about this for a while now and for the pregnancy stuff, it's true that it doesn't fit Maiko or other characters that show up again later the story. But is also quite a big turn off for me honestly. If you notice pregnancy stuff doesn't exist in any of my other games even from way back. Thinking about it is demotivating and causes me to procrastinate, which is a sign I need to just not have it. But then when/if I get to adding it, it would be halfhearted anyway, and it shows. I remember randomly reading to 4chan post about UMCH being "the same thing as UMCC but with better art and a half assed pregnancy system" or something close to that. Though I completely disagree with the first part, the second part I can agree with imo. Also it is not really in my best interest to attract people that have fetish for it since I don't really like it myself. imo it is snowball waiting at the top of the hill. I have it in there, the people want it fleshed out more, then want pregnant sex scenes, etc. I tried to add it in UMCH but it's just not my thing man. I'm back to being on the fence about having it in there at all. Plus I barely got pregnancy the game at all before getting comments and messages asking for a way to turn it off. 

imo for UMCH I wanted to it be about Maiko, for other characters I think I want to have them in other games instead of having switchable characters, etc. Like I wanted to make VN version of all the side quests in UMCH that goes into more detail and can have different endings etc. But endings are more clear in VN because you can name them, true ending, etc.

I think it would be better to have pregnancy possibly as one of many endings for VN game(s) or have the VN game about that for a particular character. You would need to write it, and it could even have your lingerie character in it, take place there, etc. or can brainstorm ideas.

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For the Mira stuff, I guess it would be better to ask where her breast size is compared to current characters. She has about he same beast size as what character? Also from what you mentioned she pear shaped so bottom heavy. wears lingerie casually, and likes her fur coat. I maybe have her in fur scarf for different outfits.

So the afro is black? and skin color is default anime? what is her favorite color?

For Alma she might have helped her go in the direction of her passions instead of stay at the school failing. But yeah she likely did not drop the cash for the store heh. But idk, it is not out of that realm of what she might do. You are correct any of those girl could have asked for a custom bra.

Yeah some lines for Alice are in the boxer game. Alice is something like a big boobed amber, but yeah little ditsy. She would try to be super helpful if people needed help and would not know what dtf means. But when it can time for yuri she would back out, out of fear/embarrassment. She'd also ask what she needed scissors for.

You mentioned she wouldn't be super friendly with Alfie. need examples of that. maybe running int to him at the mall or something.

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I was wondering if it was ever mentioned, but is there a way to collect the pictures? I mean, aside from Kyle's collection. And will someone at some point ask for pictures from the other girls? Like, i've tried to sell the guy who asks for pictures from the café the pictures i got from the other girls, but he doesn't take it. And how about the possibility to take pictures when we want? Like taking a picture of Maiko and Pattie's fun when Maiko brings Pattie home, or pictures of Luma in a wet swimsuit, for exemple?  

@vld13

There wont be a way to take pictures manually, Maiko will always do it passively. Later I can have a way to see all the pics. Like after you sold a certain number of pics, or some milestone reached.

Jay asking for cafe photos and not accepting the other girl photos is a oversight since other girl photos were added later, I will fix that thanks.

I could have a set from Pattie where she has a collection of pics of wet swimsuits and gym pics.

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For the savor the moment quest. You mentioned ending for that quest but yeah the game actually keeps going which makes it kind of odd. To have different endings for that quest like that I think it would be better to move it to a VN setting that focus specifically on that story. And where a ending could actually be one of many endings to the game. 

Why the option is not in UMCH. Replacing Savori was Kyle's idea but when you try it you can see from dialogue and the actual sex animation that Maiko does not like sex with Albert, so she would not make some sex deal with him over just reporting him. By reporting him she nor Savori would have to deal with him anymore for her is the better option. She mentions is back in the Publishing club I think, or maybe outside after it is over. it is why the option to continue replacing savori is not there, because it is not something Maiko would even do optionally after her first experience with him. Also as you may have seen, for the deal to work Kyle has to have sex with him also, and Kyle is only into girls, as shown by him running out. Whenever it is a little possible might do something, I have it is a player option, but here I don't see her doing it at all.

For the Sentinel battle stuff, it maybe be underwhelming but it how their personalities are. Not all of the guys are pervs. Characters like Chris are not really interested or thinking about sex often. And they are thinking even less about taking advantage of their friend Maiko. it is shown in the dialogue for that scene, especially if you click "X" (no). Add to that their shyness and really beta persona. Having them ask for sex in exchange for sentinel stuff is really out of character for them. It is why I had to add a perv character like Kyle there to facilitate that scene. Otherwise Chris would happily help Maiko upgrade her sentinel without receiving anything in return.

Group stuff is a bit harder to make yeah but more of that will be in the cafe, there is already prepared art for it ready to be animated that happened from the voting stuff on patreon. Animations of Pattie and Stay in group sex that are not added yet. Also recently added was a threesome yuri scene at the pool and group scene for the savori the moment quest between maiko, pattie and Kyle.

For the brothers, in terms of dialogue it seems similar to placing Chris and Greel in the same scene and have them talk. The only difference seems to be the Lucas likes his opposite. I'm against adding two brothers named George and Lucas for the same reason you chose those names heh. but Lucas alone could be character that is Greel's little brother or something, that is fairly passive yet likes Stacy. That also gives some idea towards his appearance.

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I've thought about this for a while now and for the pregnancy stuff, it's true that it doesn't fit Maiko or other characters that show up again later the story. But is also quite a big turn off for me honestly. If you notice pregnancy stuff doesn't exist in any of my other games even from way back. Thinking about it is demotivating and causes me to procrastinate, which is a sign I need to just not have it. But then when/if I get to adding it, it would be halfhearted anyway, and it shows. I remember randomly reading to 4chan post about UMCH being "the same thing as UMCC but with better art and a half assed pregnancy system" or something close to that. Though I completely disagree with the first part, the second part I can agree with imo. Also it is not really in my best interest to attract people that have fetish for it since I don't really like it myself. imo it is snowball waiting at the top of the hill. I have it in there, the people want it fleshed out more, then want pregnant sex scenes, etc. I tried to add it in UMCH but it's just not my thing man. I'm back to being on the fence about having it in there at all. Plus I barely got pregnancy the game at all before getting comments and messages asking for a way to turn it off. 
imo for UMCH I wanted to it be about Maiko, for other characters I think I want to have them in other games instead of having switchable characters, etc. Like I wanted to make VN version of all the side quests in UMCH that goes into more detail and can have different endings etc. But endings are more clear in VN because you can name them, true ending, etc.
I think it would be better to have pregnancy possibly as one of many endings for VN game(s) or have the VN game about that for a particular character. You would need to write it, and it could even have your lingerie character in it, take place there, etc. or can brainstorm ideas.
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For the Mira stuff, I guess it would be better to ask where her breast size is compared to current characters. She has about he same beast size as what character? Also from what you mentioned she pear shaped so bottom heavy. wears lingerie casually, and likes her fur coat. I maybe have her in fur scarf for different outfits.
So the afro is black? and skin color is default anime? what is her favorite color?

For Alma she might have helped her go in the direction of her passions instead of stay at the school failing. But yeah she likely did not drop the cash for the store heh. But idk, it is not out of that realm of what she might do. You are correct any of those girl could have asked for a custom bra.

Yeah some lines for Alice are in the boxer game. Alice is something like a big boobed amber, but yeah little ditsy. She would try to be super helpful if people needed help and would not know what dtf means. But when it can time for yuri she would back out, out of fear/embarrassment. She'd also ask what she needed scissors for.

You mentioned she wouldn't be super friendly with Alfie. need examples of that. maybe running int to him at the mall or something.  

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I get where you're coming from and understand why you would want to draw a line but I'm a bit confused what you mean by moving it to VN stuff. I get the part about endings, since you've talked earlier about making separate games about Kyle as well as other characters and I think I could make prego endings for those games that would apply. (Would Rookie apply to that list? You made a big post about writing for that and there's a reference to barebacking Luma. So is there one with her?) But are you suggesting in the second part that I write a game specifically about the prego mechanic? Cause I'd absolutely be interested in that. Earlier I think you had an idea for a smaller game built around lowering stress with the pov mini. You could do something like that with a character like Roise that has the physique to fit the pov and maybe change stress to horniness if it's Roise or a character with similar personality. I could spill more ideas about this but I'm not even sure if that's what you meant. So I'll just leave it at that and sit on those ideas until I hear back from you.

 

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For the Mira stuff, she'd be in the second smallest breast size category. So around Jeni and Yukino sized. 

The Afro is black, skin is default anime and her favorite color is forrest green. 

Figured she would back out once things got dirty but that wouldn't happen till Maiko left, so I couldn't really convey that within the scene. I did edit the text a bit to reflect the scissor thing though. 

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Mira: Hey you look like you’re new here. Are you d.t.f.?

Alice: Dtf?

Mira: Yeah you know, like down to come to the back and do a little private modeling. Maybe do a little scissor, scissor if things get too hot.

Alice: Huh!? Modeling really?! I’d love to model! But, scissors sound a bit odd.

Mira: What? Naw, scissoring's great! Trust me I take girls to the back all the time and they love it.

Alice: Really? Well you're the professional here so I'll trust you. I didn't think I'd ever become a model though, this is going to be great!

Mira: Heck yeah it is.

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The Alfie thing I figured would go something like this.  

 

Alfie: H-hey Mira-chan! Over here!

Mira: Hm? Oh it's Arf-Arf. How have you been Arfy?

Alfie: Well I've been fine... uh is it alright if we meet up sometime though? You know like back in school.

Mira: I mean I guess, it's a bit different know but- Hey wait a minute! Are you just trying to get hanky panky with me?!

Alfie: Uh... 

Mira: Man what'd I tell you last time. You'll never get a girlfriend if you keep asking for handouts like that. Besides you know I only like boobies.

Alfie: Sorry Mira-chan...

 

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A couple of ideas:

First, how good is Maiko's imagination? I mean, when she hears Savori or Zytra's story, is she the one imagining what she is being told, or is it just there to illustrate the story?

If it's the former, then the idea concerns Amber. And can be applied to various other characters. Maiko stumbles on a conversation about some character's fantasies, and visualizes the scene. Or not necessarily visualizes the exact scene, but makes her imagination run wild. Like that scene with the kids in the mall, when Amber fantasizes about "two tiny dicks taking turns with me", Maiko would get the option of fantasizing about it, and we get to see a picture of Amber in an interesting position, but at the same time, Amber herself doesn't do anything of the sorts. That way Amber still stays the closet pervert too shy to try anything of the sort, but we also get to see some more Amber goodness.

 

The other ideas concerns Deliah's interactions with Amber. It would need Deliah and Amber being officially introduced, and Deliah possibly realising Amber is the one writing these books she enjoys so much.

The first is Deliah mentioning some of her own sexcapades to Amber and possibly Roise. Deliah is very graphic on her recounts, Roise (if she's present) comments on how she agrees/tried it and disagrees/would like to try it, and Amber takes notes, giggling muttering to herself or askig questions.

The second is Amber showing some of her ideas to Deliah, and the blonde comments on how "that sounds fun", "that's not anatomically possible... but it would be cool if it was", or "damn, i'd love to try that!!! Fucking small breasts!!!" (No, deliah doesn't care about her breasts being small, but give her some ideas she can't try because of her lack of boobs, and she would rant a bit).

The third is Deliah mentioning to Amber in passing that if she ever wanted to try some of her ideas, Deliah would be delighted to lead guide her through it/fuck her/chaperone her (of course Amber being too shy wouldn't do anything).

Last idea would be Deliah convincing Amber to accompany her (or possibly Maiko) to the Café, and watch as she is servicing a(some?) client(s). Amber could even be masturbating while she thinks Deliah and the client(s) is(are) unaware.

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Well I was aware that there was little to no chance of my ideas being implemented, but hey, you gotta try ^^

When it comes to Lucas feel free to use my idea. I can help you with making the character if you want, but you might want someone else to do this, since we don't seem to have a same vision of the game.

One more thing - all you have to do to clear new minigame is to right click the heart icons one after another. It makes the game pause right after clicking, which lets you move your mouse freely without losing. I don't know if you can fix it tho, just saying.

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For the Rookie the Luma not using a condom part was just meant to symbolize her actually having real sex with the rookie. All the other times you do anything sexual with her she mentions how she has a BF and can't actually have sex with him.

for the prego stuff after thinking about it more. I have decided to pass on all of it rather than trying to force some way for it to work for me. It just throws off too much of story for me for a character in any situation, also it is a fetish that is a pretty big turn off for me, I'm not even neutral on it. and if I add it more people will be asking for more of it, like this sudden influx of shota questions. I don't really want or have history of showing the level of realism in the games where it shows irl consequences of unprotected sex such as pregnancy or even things like STDs. Sorry if this is disappointing I assure you I have thought about it quite a bit at this point.

Attached is the pic of mira. You mentioned guys would go to the cafe but I did plan to have dudes in here also. A few pervs and rich dudes that buy stuff for the girls. Similar to the scene where Zytra is shopping with Ace.

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If I recall correctly during the Zytra quest it is Zytra telling the story to Maiko for the Ace part, and for the Leyah part it is to illustrate what is happening else where.

Savori i think was telling Maiko also.

any other parts are for illustration. Maiko defiantly doesn't have sexual dreams of people like that lol. If anyone it would be Greel.
For the Amber stuff you'd need to write some things Deliah would say about her sexcapades.
Also Amber would not willingly watch anyone have sex at the cafe heh. You have to keep in mind Pattie talks to Amber about lewd stuff. I will likely need to redo some of her dialogue lines and add new scenes to better explain what I wanted her character. Amber would not actively take notes how you described it, or even talk about her ideas for her book with others. She would just take mental notes when certain topics are brought up. Then let certain people read what she wrote later.

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that for pointing out that bug. I'll see what I can do.Yeah my idea for the game is little different from standard hentai game characters I think. Just trying to be careful about ideas this time, even my own. just making sure stuff really fits and can be explained why it is in the game. I'll keep Lucas in mind.

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I didn't mean that Maiko "dreams" about other people having sexual intercourse. I merely wondered whether she can "see" it when someone's retelling something to her. I guess not, though.

 

Now, let me try my hand at some dialogues:

 

Deliah: Hmm...

Amber: ...

Deliah: Oh... *slight grin*

Amber: ...

Deliah: *chuckle* nice...

Amber: *blushes*...

Deliah: Okay... want an honest opinion?

Amber: ... yes?

Deliah: This is good. Very, VERY good...

Amber: *grins in excitement* Really?

Deliah: BUT!

Amber: *frowns* ... but...?

Deliah: That's not anatomically possible. *pouts* a shame, too. For starters, there are too many of them for THAT. believe me, i tried. Three is the limit, and that's really, REALLY uncomfortable. If you want to add more than that, she has to start using her hands, feets or mouth. 

Amber: *getting redder and redder* Re-really?

Deliah: Yeah. Besides, they're too big for it to work. That wouldn't fit. Now...

Amber: i-i thought there was... *nosebleed* there was nothing like too big...

Deliah: *frowns in thought* well... there isn't. Not really. Nor is there anthing like too many. Within reason. If you only use these two, three is the limit. Or at least it's mine, but if someone can take more, i haven't heard of it. But whether it's two in one, or one each, two is best for that.

Amber: *looks down* oh...

Deliah: None of that. I'm merely saying it's not realistic. Not that it's not enjoyable. 

Amber: ... and how do i... how do i make it more realistic?

Deliah: *smirks* You want to keep it that way, huh? You pervert you!

Amber: *stammer* i... no... i...

Deliah: *laughs* Man, you make teasing way too easy. You have two solutions. The first one: No matter how many guys you want in this scene, you must reduce the numbers for THAT.

Amber: ...uhuh?

Deliah: Or, you want to keep it that way, in which case, you replace the guys with tentacles.

Amber: *splutters* Tentacles? That's not...

Deliah: Not that kind of story? I know. Yet that's the only way it will work. BECAUSE tentacles are not realistic.

Amber: *mumbles thoughtfully* that could work...

Maiko: I don't want to know.

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Thanks I'll use this to try to create some scenes. Not exactly this but I think I get the idea you are trying to do. Maybe something like
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Deliah: What She wrote this!?
Pattie: Chu~!
Amber: P- Pattie! what are you saying to her!
Deliah: This is good. Very, VERY good…
Amber: Really?
Pattie: See? Nothing to worry about chu.
Deliah: BUT!
Amber: but…?
Deliah: That’s not anatomically possible! a shame, too. For starters, there are too many of them for that. believe me, I tried.
Pattie: It's definitely possible chu. You just gotta be more flexible. I couldn't do it either until I joined the gym club with senpai.
Deliah: What!? Can Maiko do it too then?
Pattie: Senpai can do anything chu!
Maiko: (I don't even want to know...)
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at boxing area
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Deliah: Yeah. Besides, it's too small to fit more than two at the same time. Two is the limit.
Joiry: No way in hell I'm being in there with anyone else anyway. If the dude is big enough he is the only one that can fit anyway.
Amber: Wait what are you all talking about?
Joiry: Just the shower space in the locker rooms, why you asking smaller girlie?
Amber: N- No reason!
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at cafe
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Deliah: If you try these two, three is the limit. Or at least it’s mine.
Deliah: But if someone can take more, I haven’t heard of it. Yeah, two is best for that.
Amber: I see...
Pattie: I wanted to try four chu.
Deliah: F- Four!? Four... I want to try four too then!
Amber: It seems like too much right?
Maiko: (I'll just pretend they are talking about food...)
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hallway
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Deliah: In chapter seven I recommend you replace the guys with tentacles.
Amber: Tentacles? That’s not…
Deliah: Not that kind of story? I know. Yet that’s the only way it will work. because tentacles are more... spacey.

need some with david also

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Let's give David a try, then.

                                                      

The hallway                                             

David: Hey bitch! Heard you loved dicks, and my dick wants you.

Deliah: It's true, i love dicks. I also love cunts. But above all i hate douchebags. Now get lost.

 

The café

Holly: Deliah, i have a customer who asked after you.

Deliah: THANK THE DEVIL!! I was getting bored outta my mind! Who's the client?

Holly: My son, David?

Deliah:... he paid?

Holly: Yes he did, why is there a problem?

Deliah: Nope. So long as i'm paid.

Holly: Okay, i'll tell him!

Later, service room:

David: Hah, now i get to enjoy your bitchy cunt! Now start working!

Deliah: I'm a pro, moron. You paid for my services. You'll get my services. You get to fuck me. And you get to pay. That's a pyrrhic victory. Me on the other hand, i get your cock AND i get your money. That's a flawless victory.

 

On another one:

 

hallway

Chester: Girl, how could you do that to me??? I thouht you hated David!?

Deliah: I do.

Chester: Then why is he bragging that he fucked you???

Deliah: If he wants to brag, let him.

Chester: But... but... i thought you said you'd have sex with anyone but him!?

Deliah: Listen, four-eyes. I'll fuck anyone, and i DO mean anyone EXCEPT David for free. BUT work is different. When you want to fuck outside of the café, all you have to do is ask. But when you come to the café, you pay. The douche can ONLY get me in the café. Do the math.

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