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UMCH ideas, feedback, and suggestions
April 29, 2017
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Well, the conversation could have started as a professional conversation but Deliah could mention that she’s always horny, and goes to every place she thinks of to try a larger variety of things… and people. And would emphasize her lack of gender preference, thus leading to the conversational shift from a conversation about male sex partners to lovers in general. 

She could also mention that she had a few futa partners before moving to the city and transferring schools.

Heck, she could even have had sex with Remi BEFORE becoming a student for the school. But if Remi doesn’t broadcast the fact she has a cock, then she wouldn’t either. …maybe a visit to the nurse’s office could have a conversation between them, with Remi explaining to Deliah that “nothing happened,or will happen… so long as you’re a student here.”

The Greel thing in retrospect i admit is debatable… i mean, Deliah, for as open as she is about sex, has such a lack of interest in anything else that her only way making Greel understand she wants to ‘play’ is to get upfront with him and tell him “i want to fuck”. You know Greel better than i do, would he take her on?

 

That aside, (well aside, i’m editing that post a week after having posted it just to add that idea). Deliah joining the Boxing club is a given. considering how much of a fighter she is. But once she got that talk with Pattie about how “four is possible”, she would probably try to join the Gymnastic Club. All and only because of the improvement her sexlife would get from the added flexibility. 

  On the other hand, she wouldn’t join the Swim Club, because for one she would get more training from training at sea, and for two, THAT’S where the biggest variety of men (and women) are.

She also wouldn’t join the Sentinel club, no matter how proficient she may be with it, because for her a battle should be up close and personal. NOT through a drone of some sort.

July 21, 2017
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Here are the basics of a character I made up. I don’t yet have a name or look in mind but I can add more to the character if you like the sound of him.

 

He lived in a poor, high crime rate city. He dropped out of school and got involved with gangs and crime, but his mother saved up enough money from her job to move out. She moved to or near Nanako and signed him up as a student at the school. 

The first few days he didn’t go but due to her being worried and asking him to go, he felt bad and decided to go. However he regularly skips classes and doesn’t wear his uniform, often getting him in trouble.

Because of this, good students look down on him, seeing him as a thug with no respect for the school rules.

But he does have a sense of morality and stands up for anyone who he sees as being wronged by someone. Such as confronting David for bullying or forcing people to do things or Kyle for taking pictures of girls without their permission.  

This leaves him disliked by many bad students as well. However some students may like him due to reasons like he helped them or they just think his attitude is cool. He’s not very social unless someone is consistently nice to him. 

 

He isn’t dumb since he can deal with situations quite well and keep a clear head but he does perform very poorly at his class work when he bothers to do it. 

He’s very good at fighting due to his old lifestyle. I’d say in boxing he would be better than David, Joiry and Jeni but not as good as Luma, Lynn and Riley or Maiko when she is able to fight Luma.

July 24, 2017
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@litlikecandle
Thanks for the ideas. In general, it’s hard for me to have characters in a setting that are designed to conflict with the rules of that setting.

To fit in with the school, he can’t just outright not wear the uniform. he can however wear it sloppy.
if he doesn’t wear it at all GemCo law division will remove him from the school and he won’t even be there in the first place.

as for skipping class. Classes don’t work the same way as in irl. At Nanako once you get a good score on the test your are done with the class. And you can take the test(s) at any time. But as seen in UMCH at the start with Riley coming to get Maiko to go to class, not going to class prior to getting a good score on the test is looked down on. I think the only character that skips any classes on purpose in David. Even Joiry goes to class. Dizzy skips sometimes unintentionally because she may be hunting aliens or something odd like that heh. 

Also there are a few students you might consider like Alfie(seen in cafe/mall sometimes) and Mira (lingerie shop owner) who were students in the past, but aren’t currently. They are seen in places outside the school. Not being a current member of the school allows for more freedoms.

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July 24, 2017
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@Vortex00

Good points and thanks for explaining how the classes work.

In regards to the uniform, he can either wear it sloppy like you said, maybe after being warned to wear it or he can spend most of his time in the gym, choosing to wear the gym clothes instead which seem more his style.

Or maybe this backstory can be related to his first day, in which he got removed from the school for breaking too many rules such as not wearing his uniform, fighting in the hallways and disrespecting teachers and now he spends his time around the outside area. Most of his character relations coming from how he interacted with them during his time in school.

 

If you’d like me to expand on this character, I can either with him being an ex student or a student on his last warning, trying to avoid getting into more trouble. I think both can be interesting, and you can choose which one if you’d like.

July 24, 2017
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@Vortex00

 

Actually, I just thought of something. It changes the character’s personality but it could be more interesting. 

Same backstory but he got kicked out of the school very early which caused him to try to get a job but all the jobs he either didn’t like or failed to get. 

He now spends his time outside, thinking of schemes to make money. Most of his plans fail and he often tries to get the other characters involved in his schemes. He doesn’t take his plans too serious however.

This is where his character changes from the first idea. He isn’t as serious and more social. He is friendly and witty and seems to lack shame.

However, because of where he is from, he can still be serious and sometimes aggressive and fearless. He uses his friendly, positive side to help him overcome his negative past of growing up around crime and violence.  

He will still have the same morality too.

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