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March 8, 2018
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I hope I'm not being a bother (let me know if so),

but I had an idea I wanted to run by you. If you like it, I can work with it for dialogue in the future.

 

For August's first scene, he is in a store, talking with another character (not sure who yet). He says that he can't afford anything because his parents won't give him anymore money, so he will find a way to make his own money.

From there, I can think of some ideas and present them to you whenever you want.

It will either be dialogue relating to him trying to make money or something he can do like selling things. I could look back to some of my earliest ideas with the schemes. 

March 10, 2018
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shouldn't be a problem

March 10, 2018
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Thanks. 🙂

I hope to make August benefit your game somehow.

I was thinking about my photo idea. Where he takes photos of some of the girls and can sell them to the player character.

I could work on that. Some photos are available at the start and new photos can be unlocked through progress or as secret rewards. Maybe some can be a Patreon bonus.

 

I was thinking, he could meet Kyle for the first time and be inspired by him to use photography as a way to make money. He also meets Pattie through Kyle and she is one of the models he has at the start.

And maybe at the end, August and Kyle fall out, after August finds out about him taking pictures of girls without permission.

 

What do you think of this idea?

March 12, 2018
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Let me figure out some basic the structure of the game first then we can look into it more. at the moment I'm not even sure if the player character will be Maiko or custom.

March 12, 2018
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@Vortex00

Fair. So will August be in the new game or Sentoryu? I'm cool with whatever.

If Sentoryu, he'll probably only have a few dialogue scenes to introduce him and build his character. So it is whether you think it's worth it or not.

 

  

March 13, 2018
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new game for sure. I'm trying to wrap up sentoryu asap and get other stuff wrapped up also

March 14, 2018
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I got you. Thanks for responses. 

I'm hyped for your next releases.

March 19, 2018
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I wanna ask, when August is done, could I present you with a new character idea? 

I was gonna ask this after he is done but I've got a few ideas in mind and I'm not sure if it's worth thinking of them.

 

I understand if you'd rather stick to a 1 character limit though. 

If you want any info, let me know.

March 21, 2018
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attached a quick sketch ttrop did of the hair.
let me know if this works
can work on another character after

@litlikecandle

looking back I'm sure about the super bright lime green hair. but some shade of light green should work.

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That works. It looks very good 😀 (Might have to show this to my barber real quick XD)

Big thanks to you and Tropp for taking the time to do this and for such an amazing job. Got me stoked. 

Also, whatever shade fits. But yeah, I am thinking a light green.

 

And thanks. 🙂 I've had a lot of ideas for someone else lately. Not gonna go into them yet but wanted to ask so it wouldn't be on my mind.

March 21, 2018
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I forgot to mention things like pose, expression, body type. etc.

 

For skin, a very light brown. Here's a picture comparing it to the common skin tone of the new art. tone.pngImage Enlarger

Expression just a small smile.

Pose, his hands on his sides. Like with the elbows pointing out. (Unless Trrop will use the one in the sketch. That will work too.)

Body type just average. 

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So attempting at making a character wasn't sure how indepth I needed to be so here is the shell so far. Let me know what should be elaborated on or changed. I'm also fine if it's needs to be scrapped all together. I wasn't sure what name or hairstyle fits the world the best.

Character Name: Jean (John), June, Paul

Body Type: Lean/Athletic

Height: 6’3"

Weight: 190 lb

Dick Size: 6 in

Khalei Affinity: ???

Skin tone: Dark Skin

Sexuality: Heterosexual

Favorite Girl Body Parts: Breast, Vagina, Butt/Anus, Thighs/Feet.

Favorite Bra/cup size in girls: Likes all sizes, from big to small.

Hair Color: Black

Hair Style: Fade, Design Braid, Box Braid, Short Dreads?

Eye Color: Dark Brown

Handedness: Right

Best Friends: Phia (Friends with Benefits), Male Character That Would Fit.

Love interests: Stacy and Jeni. Has shown interest in Phia from time to time.

Rivals: David

Work History: Croupier at Gemco casino.

Bad Habits / Vices: Gambling, dozing off.

Sexual Background:

Goals and Motivations: Trying to clear parents debt and get revenge. Will do almost anything for sexual favors/nudes.

Morality / Ethics: True Neutral


Likes: Puzzles, Video Games, Chess, Women.

Hates: David, owing people.

Traits: Intelligent, Calm, Lazy.

Weaknesses: Women he finds attractive. Will always take gamble if the rewards are high.

Favorite Foods: Whip Cream, Sushi.

Personality: Doesn't really like standing out or trying but is always willing to help for a price. He likes playing games with people and making bets. If someone does something for him he is always quick to return the favor as he doesn't like owing people. Though mostly quiet, he will make smart remarks or whitty jokes. He loves to gamble and carries a pack of cards with him everywhere.

Background:

His parents use to frequent the casinos a lot and taught him how to play. One day, lost unfairly and went into debt. He was enrolled into Gemco (through a deal his parents made prior, because of his parents status, part of their debt, due to his intelligence?), but visits Nanako to train with Jeni. As a way to payback the debt he works at the casino as a croupier, but still plans to avenge his parents.

Relationships:

  • Phia: Friends with benefits. He calls her whenever he is bored or wants to try something new, she does the same.
  • Stacy: Met her at the gym where he worksout, sometimes ask her to spot him or let's her join in his workouts.
  • Jeni: Due to what happen to his parents, he decided to learn self defense. He made a bet with Jeni that if she lost she would train him.
  • David: Due to being around Jeni, he met David. They usually butt heads and not allowed to be in the same room alone.
  • Maiko: Has seen her at the Cafe and Casino, but hasn't really had the chance to talk to her. Thinks she is nice.
  • I would like him to be friends with a male from Gemco but not sure who fits.

What He Adds:

  • A character to flesh out the casino once you implement it. Possibly another Gemco make student.
  • He could add a new minigame to the series. He is known to host strip games where people can earn money or lose clothes. If you want to add a sexual aspect to it winner is required to masturbate?
  • He could possibly br designing his own sex gane ob the side. It would revolve around Tarot Cards with each card being a different position or action depending on if it's reverse or upright. Possibly Phia is helping him develop it?
March 22, 2018
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Got a few questions for you. 

 

1. Are his parents just in debt? Because it sounds like they're in a worse position than a regular debt. 

2. Names are pretty universal from what I can tell. As long as it sounds like it fits the character there aren't many names that wouldn't fit the setting. 

3. There aren't a lot of male characters that are 'friendly' but I think someone like the Rookie might hang around with this guy. 

4. I noticed sexual background is blank. I don't know if you haven't filled it yet or if you accidentally forgot to fill it. 

March 23, 2018
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Wilsonthegreen said
Got a few questions for you. 

 

1. Are his parents just in debt? Because it sounds like they're in a worse position than a regular debt. 

2. Names are pretty universal from what I can tell. As long as it sounds like it fits the character there aren't many names that wouldn't fit the setting. 

3. There aren't a lot of male characters that are 'friendly' but I think someone like the Rookie might hang around with this guy. 

4. I noticed sexual background is blank. I don't know if you haven't filled it yet or if you accidentally forgot to fill it.   

  1. Yeah they aren't just in debt. The people they bet against are people with power insidr Gemco and couldn't back out of it because of this. (Not sure if this breaks any lore points so need vortex to iron it out.) They were forced to give all their savings and are required to pay them monthly. They are basically slaves to winner if they do not pay up.
  2. Not sure which fits the charachar best so I'll let that be one of the final things to think of.
  3. I was thinking about making him friends with one of the girls from agent trainer but don't know much about any of them and felt like that would be too many female companions. I was then thinking maybe Roy, since he is Phia's brother but don't know much about him. I feel he needs more gemco companions or male companions to smoothen things out.
  4. Meant to delete that. Not really sure what to put for it.
March 27, 2018
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@Oecus

 

Interesting character but I think that's too much information to start with.

For my character, I sent a few dialogue scenes for Vortex to check and also sent some reference pictures for his appearance.

Currently I'm waiting till I know more about his new game before writing anything.

 

I have a slight concern that if we both write characters in this thread, it may cause confusion. So if you work on this character with Vortex, I think one of us should use a different thread. Not sure though. We'll have to see what he thinks.

 

Hopefully this doesn't sound rude or opposing.  I like your idea and wish for it to go well.

April 3, 2018
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@litlikecandle
I prefer all characters in the same thread so I only have one thread to find later.

as for skin color I have all the characters here the same to make it easier on ttrop. So he doesn't have to maintain several different color palettes. it would need to be a major difference in color variation. like the difference between Donavik and Joiry. we had trouble in the past with him remembering what skin color certain characters are supposed to be with minor differences. we lost lots of time going back to fix that kind of stuff.

my ARIA Classroom havoc post outlines some of the ideas I had for the game. I'd imagine your character can be one that shows up on missions (could be the troublemaker or helping depending on the situation) and needs medical attention at times for getting into fights.

Also since the game can takes place in a lot of areas outside the school. He can be a bit more visible. the scene you mentioned where he talks about not having money can be said potentially to the player character agent.

I will have ttrop sketch the face hopefully soon.

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@oecus

the characters appearance might be similar to one I attached at the bottom. If so I can just re-purpose the character art.

Nanako is a school with enrolled students. he can't just walk in and train with Jeni, heh. Agent can be enrolled at nanako but it a request from a higher up pulling strings or as a mission.
He wouldn't be able to go there just because he wanted to.

work around:
he can pay for cafe sex but use the time to train. Jeni usually has her gloves on the cafe anyway.
he can train in the gym Holly worked at. holly and crew still goes there to exercise. Holly just doesn't work there any more.

Jeni
It is also not clear how he knows/met Jeni. you have him meeting David from already knowing Jeni.
But you might need to have it the other way around. He met Jeni possibly from some random bad encounter with David.
maybe at the gym?
Keep in mind Jeni and her family don't like agents much since their cafe breaks the law.
you would need to explain how this might work. maybe it is why he gets into issues wit hdavid.

Stacy
If your character is dealing with stacy at the gym you would need to describe his interactions with Max. who is usually cockblocking guys from stacy.
this can be seen in umichan sentoryu.
Stacy wouldn't mind spotting him but she is not really strong enough to lift anything heavy that requires a spotter.
she is usually on the workout ball or treadmill.

Maiko
you would need to describe why he would notice Maiko over other girls like Leyah and Pattie who are also at the cafe and are nice.

Phia
Keep in mind all kinda of random dude hit up Phia for sex. On top of her mission assignments. She wouldn't be available often.
He would need to be in the academy training with enhancement Khalei. with will put him in a the same training as Phia and Riley.

The best male agent that fits would have to be Roy, who is Phia's brother and also uses enhancement Khalei.

as for the bet. it could have been lost to Ace or Harold.

I think this character works more for fleshing out the gym since the casino is not finished yet.
the agent player character will be able to go to all the places outside the house in Umichan Sentoryu, and more.

some conflicts can be at the gym where your character can be involved. But he is also an agent I guess just called for back up.

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@Vortex00

Skin tone being the same is fine. 

And I'll read that post now. 😀

Would you like me to write some ideas for that project and post them here?

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Silver said

Would you like me to write some ideas for that project and post them here?  

Sure

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I have one idea so far which will make him relevant to at least some missions.

 

He could be used as an informant either through force/blackmail or convincing/rewards.

It could be mentioned by the agency that in his older city, he gave law enforcement information on his gang in exchange for no prison time and a way out of that lifestyle which lead to him moving to Nanako. Now the agency wants to use him.

Either he is friends with someone they want watched/information on or he is able to/expected to get information some how.

 

What do you think of this?

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