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April 4, 2018
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Let me describe how the missions might work then we can revisit this. I’m not totally sure it will fit, but it may.

April 4, 2018
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Sure. Let me know.

If not, I can have other ideas. Or he could just be a small time character with some dialogue and maybe sexual interactions.

Whatever you prefer.

April 5, 2018
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mission descriptions ideas I had are posted. feel free to recommend some of you own with you own character(s)

http://spiralvortexplay.com/sv…..-missions/

April 11, 2018
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Thanks. I’ll have a read.

My laptop got fucked up so I had to wait for it to be fixed. Sorry for the delay.

April 23, 2018
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1. Trouble missions dialogue

 

August takes revealing photos of Pattie (modeling) in a public place. (August and Pattie.)

August: Damn. You’re like a celebrity or something! You look so, so hot. Beautiful. You already know that though.
Pattie: Someone is approaching, chu.
August: Sup? Don’t mind us. We out here doing a photo shoot. I’m pretty good with this camera stuff even though I’m new to it but Pattie’s hot body and cuteness is pretty motivational.
(resolve)

 

August confronts Joiry on behalf of Kyle. Risk of a fight happening. (August and Joiry)

Joiry: What are you going to do? Why can’t Kyle come here and stand up for himself?
August: Kyle probably got something else to do. I don’t know. But that don’t matter. I’m telling you, leave him alone because I rather talk, not fight but I still got to help my friend out.
Joiry: But what if I don’t?
August: Then I’ll keep asking and if you wanna get physical then that’s fine with me. Well, it’s not. It’s actually less than fine because I don’t want to, but I still will.
(resolve)

 

Kyle taking pictures of August and Pattie performing sexual acts. (August, Pattie and Kyle)

Kyle: Wow! We’ll make a fortune off these shots.
August: I’ve thought about modeling before but never expected to be a pornstar or something. It’s honestly pretty cool.
(resolve)

 

August and Delilah sex. (August and Delilah)

Delilah: Yes, that’s it!
August: Woah! Yeah… That was fun.
Delilah: It was.
August: I tell you, all those dudes who don’t fuck you… they missing out. That was some good sex right there. I’d know. You’d know too, I think. But we should do this again sometime. Right?
Delilah: You have to ask?
(Resolve)

 

2. Fight details, vs David dialogue.

 

August doesn’t have a specific technique or skills. He has 2 things going for him though,
He is pretty much fearless and stubborn. If he feels he has to fight for whatever reason, he will. He’ll pretty much fight anyone, even when there’s a low chance of winning due to skills, numbers or weapons. But he would rather avoid fighting.
Second, he might have expectations and a reputation due to him coming from a dangerous area.

I had an idea. Would Kyle befriend August so he could help him against David and Joiry? That would make sense as to why they became friends in the first place, leading to August confronting Joiry/David and taking pictures of models for money.

 

Here is my dialogue for August and David fight mission.

 

Aftermath of a fight between August and David. (August and David)

David: What the fuck, man? Stop hitting my balls!
August: This ain’t a boxing ring. No rules out here. I’m tryna beat your ass right now so why would I fight clean?
David: You’re pissing me off! I don’t even know you!
August: I told you I wanna fight and you agreed and now we fighting. I heard about all the things you’ve done and you can’t just push people around like you do!

April 23, 2018
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yeah him agreeing to help with bullies would be a nice reason for him walking around with kyle’s camera and working with him etc.

once I get mmd more sorted out I can probably make him in mmd also.

April 23, 2018
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That’ll be pretty cool to see. 

 

So I got some dialogue for him. Should I post them or keep hold of them for now?

We could also look at the idea of the player being able to buy photos from him in the future if you think that’ll fit the game.

April 26, 2018
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please post whatever you got. you may have noticed I read everything here in batches, and if it is not here it might be a while before i read everything again heh.

April 26, 2018
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I got you. 🙂

 

August and Kyle.
Kyle: Hey. I need to ask, man. Do you go to school? I’ve never seen you there.
August: No. I’m some nobody who just moved here. They won’t enroll me. I’m glad though, I’ve been to a school before and didn’t like it.
Kyle: Shit, man. I wish you were there. I wouldn’t have to worry about those bullies.
August: If you have any problems, I could sneak in and you know, get them off your back.
Kyle: Breaking in and assaulting a student? That’s a terrible idea.
August: It’s cool. I’d risk it if things got bad enough for you.
Kyle: How would you help me when you’re arrested? Besides, things aren’t that bad. Some guys are just jerks at times. Nothing too serious.

 

August and Riley.
Riley: What are the photos for?
August: I’m trying to make money off them. My momma stopped giving me money for stuff so now I’m making my own by selling these photos.
Riley: And is it working?
August: Kind of. I’ve sold some but I pay the models for the photoshoots and because I ain’t sold many, I’m making a loss right now.
Riley: Fine, you can take one of me if it helps you. But nothing weird and sexual.
August: Yeah! Thanks very much! You look so good. I love it.
Riley: Geez…

 

August, Leyah and Jay.
Augst: It sounds kind of cute when you say it. Like, nya! nya! I can’t do it.
Leyah: That sounded cute! Nya!
Jay: Nyaa!
August: NYAAA!
Leyah: Nya! Too loud!
August: I put too much energy into that one. People are looking at us.

 

August and Riley.
August: How are things? Are you winning at life? Getting that money? Getting those dicks?
Riley: Huh? Well yeah. Everything is fine. But that last question, don’t ask me things like that.
August: Don’t worry, I’m just joking around. You’re good right? No harm done?
Riley: Yeah, no worries. How are things for you?
August: Things are so good right now. Oh my… Life sucked. I was fresh off the drugs, friends in jail and I hated myself much more than any enemy I ever had.
Riley: That’s… terrible. I’m sorry to hear.
August: But one day momma was like “we’re moving to a better place. Nanako” and I’m like “what?”. Best thing to ever happen to me. That was my second chance at life.
Riley: That’s good. But try to stay out of trouble. Some people at the agency see you as some kind of thug.
August: Oh yeah… I’ve been in trouble a few times. Not my intention though. I’ll, you know, try not to do that kind of stupid shit.

 

August and Kyle, interacting with Maiko.
Kyle: August, this is my good friend, Maiko.
August: Woah. You’re pretty pretty. I mean very pretty. Or pretty hot. Whatever.
Maiko: Thanks. Nice to meet you.
August: So are you like… on Pattie’s level? You know, down to do things?
Maiko: What do you mean?
August: As sexually open as she is. I’m just curious. Not trying to be on some creepy shit.
Maiko: It depends on the situation really.
August: It depends? So you’re like a math test?… Not easy.

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That one’s just a thought for the shooter, but i was thinking about characters being used as “support” for the agent.

That “support” would be included as bonuses of sorts. Riley would be a bonus for Khalei, Jeni would be a bonus for offense, Pattie would be defense, Deliah would be “distraction” (something among the lines of the Agent having to deal with half as many enemies for a period of time –basically until Deliah is overwhelmed).

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Silver and i have been talking about a few conversations between August and Deliah, that could end up as a sort of quest/storyline should you appreciate it.

 

Here’s the first one, and it implies that the two of them already have some fun together.

 

Delilah: Cafe’s services?
August: I tried it a few times but no, mostly not. I’m trying to save my money up and not pay for things I don’t need. Unless we’re talking clothes. But me and you can just do it for free and I got Pattie too, sometimes. She does her own things most of the time. So, I guess you’re like my main girl.
Delilah: Hmmm… Threesome? Foursome?
August: Yeah, sure. We can try that. Do you have someone in mind?
Delilah: Some. And anyone you know.
August: But we’ll probably ask the same people, won’t we? Kyle, Pattie…
Delilah: Know more people. Co-workers, clients.
August: That sounds good to me. Wait, what were talking about first? How did orgies come up?

 

If you’re wondering about Deliah’s lack of complete sentences, it’s because unless she’s really excited or irritated, she’s kind of grumpy and silent.

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Locations to dialogue I posted.

When it says (place 1) or (place 2), either of them could work, whatever you prefer.

 

1 August and Kyle. “Do you go to school” –  Mall

2 August and Riley.  “Photos?” – Theme Park or Boardwalk 

3 August, Leyah and Jay. “Nyaa” – Cafe or Mall (Leyah as waitress if in cafe)

4 August and Riley. “How are things” – Cafe or Mall

5 August and Kyle, interacting with Maiko. “Friend Maiko” – Mall

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