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Umichan text based adventure game ideas
January 24, 2017
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this topic is for ideas for the text based umichan game mentioned here:
http://spiralvortexplay.com/sv…..ture-game/

locations planned in the game for now
Home (inside your house)
City Streets (3 different areas)
Mall (2 areas)
Cafe
Lingerie
School front (to progress story)

3 different times of day
day, evening and night

similar to UMCH there are 8 event each day that will advance the time from day to night. These events are described through text and any corresponding animations played on the avatar. These can be something simple as nothing happening and seeing a cat or something, to something more complex like being attacked or seduced. it can also be described in multiple parts. like something happened during the day. can have a follow up at night or the next day, etc. feel free to ask questions.

January 24, 2017
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Started on some lingerie shop stuff but got stuck when I had a question about what H-stuff will be available in game. I know there’s the disembodied dicks in the preview images and you’re working on a futa x girl thing too but will there be a bj option where the futa character is getting sucked off or titfuck options or yuri animation options? 

 

 

 

 

 

Racks, shelves and mannequins carrying rainbows of frilled and embroidered lingerie fill your sight. Women of all sorts forage about for their favorites to try on in the dressing rooms that line the back of the store then step out into the open to parade their bodies in the silky fineries. One such lady with an afro approaches you’re looking around.

 

“Hey honey. You liking what you’re seeing?”

 

 

“Huh?”

 

 

Caught off guard by her statement, you can only murmur a grunt in response. Which raises an eyebrow of hers.

 

“Huh what? You knew this place was a store right? So are you liking what’s for sale?”

 

 

choice*? “Oh! Yeah it all looks very nice.”

 

 

“Yeah? Least I must be doing something right then!”

 

 

She smiles wide so you can make out each of her white teeth, which look too happy not be smiling themselves. Thus creating the largest collection of tiny smiles inside of a larger smile that you’ve ever seen. The magnitude of such happiness is actually incredibly intimidating and you can’t help but return the expression nervously. 

 

 

“But wait, why aren’t looking around like everyone else? You did come here for lingerie didn’t you?”

 

Choice*? “Uhhh…”

 

“Or maybe… you came to peep on girls in their drawers. Was that the idea?”

 

“What?!”

 

“Hey it’s cool, as long as you’re just looking. Half the reason I started this store was to look at cute girls.”

 

 

She pushes her breasts together with both hands to accentuate their bouncy size.

 

“In fact, you look pretty cute. Did you want to come to the backroom with me to play around?”

 

“B-backroom?”

 

“Yeah, I got a bunch of games and snacks back there but mostly I bring girls back there to play on my bed. So are you interested?”

 

 

She takes one of your wrists and pushes the hand onto her soft, warm chest.

 

 

 

Choice*?

————————————————————————————————————————————————————————————

 

 

(Naw) [Add later]

 

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(Yes)

 

 

Without realizing you find yourself grasping to feel more and more of her gorgeous breasts. Your breathing gets heavier and can’t focus on anything that aren’t the perfect tits or soft thighs on display in front of you.

 

 

(Futa extra) : Your cock gets stiff too and your panties strain to keep it hidden in your skirt.

 

 

“Shhhhhh….”

 

She puts a finger to your lips and leans in to whisper in your ear.

 

 

“Wait till we get to the back… I don’t just want everyone to see.”

 

 

You nod and let her pull you by the wrist across the storefront into a dark backroom.

 

 

She clicks a light on the wall, revealing a cluttered mess of afro sporting clay sculptures, easels stacked against walls as well as stacks of papers and books that cover nearly every square inch of carpet. Mira steps carefully around this mine field of stuff to a bed on the far wall and starts clearing it of various piles of art supplies. When things are clear enough for her liking, she turns to the door way where you’re still standing and starts unfastening her bra.

 

 

“Come on baby… Mira wants to play…”

 

 

You swallow nervously and start stepping around the piles of paint smelling supplies. When you get too close to Mira, she reaches over to grab your waist and tosses you playfully onto her bed.

 

“Mmm… just lay back and relax baby. Mira’s going to make sure you have a good time.”

 

 

She leans over you, letting her bare breasts rub against yours and starts nibbling on your neck. One of her hands trails down your stomach until it reaches your crotch, where it stops to gently fondle towards your sweet spots.

 

 

“M-Mira-!”

 

 

——————————————————————————————————————————————————————————

 

 

(Futa option)

 

 

Your cock gets rock hard and forms a noticeable bulge in Mira’s hand. Suddenly her hand stops and she pulls back looking wide back at you.

 

“What the-?! You have a dick?!”

 

 

“Yeah…” 

 

Embarrassed at her shock, you shrink up and cover yourself with your hands. She hops off of you, avoiding eye contact and covering her chest with her arms. Choking on your words, you utter back.

 

 

“So… do you not like me anymore?”

 

“No you’re still hot and all but I’m like super gay. So, the dick kinda surprised me.”

 

“Yeah I guess that makes sense… I was always worried people would think it’s weird but I don’t know what to do about it.”

 

 

She meets your gaze again, with shining watery eyes.

 

“Really? That’s so sad.”

 

 

She takes a seat beside you and puts an arm around your shoulder.

 

“Look, I know it’s kind of awkward now but if you still want to do it. Than I’ll do it with you.”

 

“Really?”

 

“Yeah, it sucks when you can’t get any. So if it’ll help you out than I’ll do it. Besides, you still look really yummy…”

 

 

 

Choice*

 

(Sex)

 

(Bj)

 

(Pussy lick?)

 

(Scissor?)

 

 

 

——————————————————————————————————————————————————————

 

 

 

(Girl option)

 

 

 

Her hands trail your lips, dancing over your sensitive spots and getting you wet. Her face lifts from your neck and sneaks a kiss onto your lips, suppressing a moan from you. She then moves over to smooch your cheeks, neck and lowers herself to start unfastening the buttons on your shirt.

 

 

“How do you want to play baby?”

 

 

Choice*

 

(Scissor)

 

(Oral?)

 

(Breast play?)

January 24, 2017
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yeah for yuri I’m not totally sure yet. I was thinking floating boobs also some some stuff. floating boob in mouth. and floating boobs around penis for futa. both of these could work for a main main character also.  the doggy style ass shown could also be wit ha girl on her back also i was thinking possibly. BJs i’m not sure could have a animation that looks ok. random tongue is possible but might look odd. it could be use for on penis and for licking vag also though.

for the stuff you write it is good. the problem here is the same issues i had when starting the game. The player character needs to kind be that kind of silent hero and not actually say anything so the personality or you character can be imagine by the player.

for example instead of the player character literally saying “hello” dialogue like in UMCH, you would write something like, you introduce yourself. describe the setting or character the player is talking to then she would say something at the end.

for example I will try to re write the first part of what you wrote for the first part:

Racks, shelves and mannequins carrying rainbows of frilled and embroidered lingerie fill your sight. Half naked women of all sorts forage about for their favorites to try on in the dressing rooms that line the back of the store then step out into the open to parade their bodies in the silky fineries.

“Hey honey. You liking what you’re seeing?” I hear a voice mention from across the room.  Caught off guard by her statement, you suddenly turn around and murmur a grunt in response, which raises an eyebrow of hers.

(description, can be changed) She is a short light skin woman barely dressed. you can clearly see her filled breasts and nipples through slots in her transparent lingerie. You also notice her very thick thighs and a wide hips. and oddly enough though she has light skin, a giant black afro sits atop her head.

 

“Huh what? You knew this place was a store right? So are you liking what’s for sale?” You mention to her that everything is nice.“Yeah?” she says in approval “At least I must be doing something right then!”

 

She smiles wide so you can make out each of her white teeth, which look too happy not be smiling themselves. Thus creating the largest collection of tiny smiles inside of a larger smile that you’ve ever seen. The magnitude of such happiness is actually incredibly intimidating and you can’t help but return the expression nervously. 

 

“But wait, why aren’t looking around like everyone else? You did come here for lingerie didn’t you? Or maybe… you came to peep on girls in their drawers. Was that the idea?” You are briefly suprised by the questions but before you get a chance to reply she continues. “Hey it’s cool, as long as you’re just looking. Half the reason I started this store was to look at cute girls.”

 She pushes her breasts together with both hands to accentuate their bouncy size.

 “In fact, you look pretty cute. Did you want to come to the backroom with me to play around?” No sure what she means you ask her for some clarification. “I got a bunch of games and snacks back there but mostly I bring girls back there to play on my bed.” She takes one of your wrists and pushes the hand onto her soft, warm chest. ” So are you interested?”

[yes] [no]

 

January 25, 2017
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@vortex00 

 

Ah, I wasn’t a hundred percent sure on your formatting. I’ll be sure to keep that stuff in mind later on. 

 

And for bj stuff you could do something like having the girl kneeling in front of them like this. http://www.gelbooru.com/index……id=2667166

January 28, 2017
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yeah I can try that and see how it looks

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@vortex00

 

I’ve been starting on some more stuff a Mira scene but kept finding myself getting stuck with describing her since I don’t know what her finalized lingerie looks like. So I’ll just leave what I got here and come back to it later when you release that design later on. Also could there be an option for that doggystyle option to still have panties on? (The girl on bottom not the main character.)

 

 

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“Stand behind me baby, I’ll make you feel really good~”

 

You do as she asks, getting on your knees and wrapping your hands around her wide hips. The implication of this pose gets you hard alone so much that the head of your cock peaks under your skirt and brushes against her lacy panties. Some instinct in your head screams at you to thrust into her pussy right away but you remember her generosity and ask if she’s ready first. 

 

“No not yet, I wanna give you something first~”

 

 

Before you can ask what that is, Mira slaps her butt against your crotch and starts shaking her hips back and forth so you can feel every jiggle of her plump mounds squeeze around your dick. 

 

You moan out from reaction and Mira responds by picking up speed. Rocking her warm, pilloesque booty faster and faster. Until she dips a bit too high and accidentally slips your cock into her lingerie and against her hot folds. The sudden rush of sensation puts you over the edge and scream out to Mira that you’re ready to cum. 

 

“No not on the merchandise!”

 

She leans over to pull herself off but the tip of your penis is caught on the ___________ of her panties and she isn’t able to free it until you’re spraying thick strings of cum into the silk fabric. 

 

“Oh fuck! Why’d you have to nut so much?!” 

 

She says this while the ________ fabric is stained over by your seed until it overflows down her legs and drips onto the bedsheets. 

 

You pant out an apology and tell her you got caught on the _________ of her lingerie. 

 

“Yeah? Guess it can’t be helped then. You really must’ve been backed up though if that much got you to nut.” 

 

She slides her dirty underwear off and throws it into some laundry hamper across the room. She looks to you with a grin that quickly vanishes when she notices your still hard cock. 

 

“You aren’t done yet?”

 

      Choice: 

 

(That’s enough) 

 

You tell her you’ve had enough for now and try to thank her for everything. Only to have her interrupt you with a tight hug that presses both your breasts against one another. 

 

“No need for something like that. Auntie Mira’s just happy to help.” 

 

She sneaks a kiss on your cheek and a fondle on your chest. 

 

“Feel free to visit again real soon. Just let me play more with these next time.” 

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@unticop

here are the designs. might be interesting to have some descriptions for all three and have it randomized when you encounter this scene.
http://spiralvortexplay.com/sv…..erie-shop/

any make later you can request a certain one.

Skimmed over what you wrote looks really good. seems to work for a potential male player character also?

and yeah it can have panties for the bent over image. probably like main scenes and stuff can have a bit more unique stuff while random encounters will have shared assets. kind of like the bit with Kyle where it shows him in the corner. wanted to do that here also.

might rearrange it to where the character can just be seem fully on the other side of the text window if there is art for them. idk thoguh. because it might be weird to have some art for some character and none for others.

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It could work with a dude character too as long as it has some edits. 

 

I don’t think there are that many ways around the no art thing if it’s a named character that people want. Maybe you could make a generic looking male + female w/ obscured faces that can be used for that but I don’t know how well liked that would be. 

 

If its just meant to be an anonymous guy you could still do that easily though. Like if it’s supposed to be a gloryhole encounter you could just pick a dude at random. (Maybe if it’s a main character it could have unique  dialogue or if its just a background guy than it could have a generic set but with their picture put up randomly.) 

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Not sure how many main characters the player will bump into though because you’d run into the same character personality limits as in UMCH. idk I’ll have to think about it. text game in kind of moot if I need full images and sex images for everything. I don’t mind for main encounters though of course. We’ll see how it goes.

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(What I have written here is all the at the top of my head and started since I was able to register on this forum. I’ll write the scenes later, this is the basic draft. Once I get a good idea for the plot, I can write the actual scenes. I hope I got the Khalei idea right :S)

 

Ideas for the general formatting and presentation of the game:

Idea 1:

Allow the player to change the background color, text font, and text color. This being a text game involves a lot of reading, so you don’t want players to cringe and close the game because their eyes grow tired. Also there are dyslexics who appreciate the possibility to change the font into something they would be more familiar with.

Note: I don’t know how difficult this is when it comes to programming, but if it’s a difficult function to add, then using Times New Roman of 12 size with a space between paragraphs would be best for font, and a pale color instead of bright one for background.

I don’t if it’s a bug, but when I play the game using the link you have on Patreon, I get white text over pink background, which is a KILLER for the eyes. :S

 

Idea 2:

When trying to give a hint/help the player regarding his choices, instead of merging the text with that of the description, add it like this:

 

Original:

Have sex with enough people before classes begin. Be careful who you have sex with though. Some people want you all to themselves which might come back to haunt you.

 

My suggestion:

You desire to have sex with as many people as you can before the classes begin. The lust can be seen in your eyes and the way you sway your ass left and right as you walk about, almost eager to expose to the passing eye what’s hidden under your skirt.

 

(Hint: Be careful though, some people aren’t as eager to share you as others are. They may want to have you all to themselves and react unexpectedly when you choose to please someone else.)

 

Idea 3:

Rather than have the Megaslut, Rich, Virgin, and Fighter options as ‘what you want to do’, make them personality traits that branch out the options you may have with other the characters in the game as well as events.

For example, the first one would open up the Cafe doors faster for her, while Rich would allow her to earn “passive money”, no need to work when your parents give you allowance. It would also make it far easier for character like Lynn to be approached by her as she would have no problem being around people with a lot of money. The Virgin option would make it so that she is very shy, bashful, or reluctant to engage in any and all sexual activities, but she would have far more chances with characters who want a steady relationship with her. The Fighter one wouldn’t affect her sexual preferences at all, but she could end up having the option to “intimidate” other characters in doing as she wants to.

 

(only this for now)

 

Because I have no idea the direction in which you would like to take this game, I came up with a few different plot possibilities:

I will call the Player: MC (from Main Character not Mic Controller)

 

Plot idea 1:

(The niece, daughter, or younger sister of Remi)

The MC arrives at the new house after a long journey here. She unpacks and has the choice of hiding her kinky stuff (dildos, magazines,etc), or leaving it out in the open. (trigger for open or closet pervert). After a quick dinner and seeing how her family didn’t return yet, she goes to bed and wakes up the next morning. She checks see a note and a few pills on her desk from Remi informing her what it does and what she should do with them. This is Remi’s gift and also task of helping her out if she wants too. One pill is an experimental Futa Drug (optional to take, turns her into a futanari), one is a Fertility Drug (increases the risk of getting pregnant and also the pheromone appeal characters have over her), one is a Ultra Contraceptive Pill (which basically reduces her chances of getting pregnant by a lot, but also the pheromone appeal she has on other characters).

(the idea behind this is just like in UMCH, you take the pill after having sex, but it you can go without either just 1 day or up to 5 days (the amount of time sperm can survive in the uterus).

 

The MC upon later visiting Remi is told that she is was allowed to get into this High School for one reason only: because she was found as the ideal subject to investigate the fertility of the students in this school, seeing as it was discovered that Khalei affinity can be influenced in some way by sexual activity and even be passed down to descendents.

The MC, if she took the Fertility Drug is tasked on trying to have as many children with the students (if choses futa, she can impregnate as well). Once she gets knocked up, she returns to Remi and stays in her care for a few days until the baby is born.

If the MC took the Ultra Contraceptive Pill, she is to bring samples of sperm and record how the Khalei levels of the other students and people in the town when they were having sex.

 

After the MC goes one round with everyone, she notices that her own Khalei levels have increased and goes back to Remi, who is astonished by this fact. She then puts her under observation for a week, during which she notices her Khalei levels dropping. This is because of the drugs she took, which were developed by Remi have an unknown effect with how Khalei energies work.

 

After the MC returns to the high school, she realizes that something happened to during her absences, the people around her are more willing to engage in perverted talk, grope her, or have intimate relationships with her. When confronting Remi with this, she pinned down by the woman and here the MC will have a choice of how to calm her down.

 

A bit of investigation reveals that there was a strange Khalei crystal within Remi’s office. It was a pink one connected to what looked like a hypnosis inducing device. After deactivating it and trying to find out what it was doing, it’s found out that it stimulates the Amygdala in the Brain, which is largely mediated by emotion through the limbic system, activation of the amygdala can trigger penile erection, sexual feelings,(Georgiadis and Holstege, 2005) sensations of extreme pleasure (Olds and Milner, 1954), memories of sexual intercourse (Gloor, 1986), as well as ovulation, uterine contractions, and orgasm.

 

Basically, it increases their sexual desires by heaps and loads.

Remi then asks the MC to take this device to Dr. Adrianna, a technological genius who despite her skills doesn’t give out her tech so easily.

 

Dr.Adrianna – on original character for this plot, who created various technologies, some of which had been incorporated by GemCo and other used by people for daily use. She is a tall, big breasted woman with long black hair, a bionic eyes and a robotic right hand.

 

The MC find Dr.Adrianna strapped to her own sex machine. Apparently GemCo dropped by and raided her lab. For some reason, she found herself way too eager to submit to them. Apparently they were using one of the devices the MC brought to her to investigate.

After this Dr. Adrianna makes her a remote control that can either amplify the effects of the devices in the town or reduce it.

She can use it only in a location at once and if she leaves, the devices return to normal. So as to not be detected by GemCo, she can destroy the devices ONLY after she discovered them all.

 

While looking around for these devices, the MC uncovers a secret GemCo base, which she takes out by using the amplifiers to the max (with her being immune to the device, she either pushes the GemCo into each other to release their frustrations on one another, or takes care of them herself, leaving them knocked out.)

Inside the base, she find out that Nanako High as well as big part of the city they are in is actually GemCo experiment designed to produce high affinity Khalei soldiers. That was why some of the most powerful Khalei users can be found here. Among all, she discovers the information on Maiko as well as HOW to track her Down (her biological data and Kahlei signature), which she deletes because she doesn’t want her friend to get in trouble. She also deletes her own and accidentally Gheist’s too < this tid bit COULD explain why a company as powerful as GemCo using all of their tech couldn’t find two girls living in their city.

 

The MC copies all of these files and then goes back to Adrianna, who decrypts them and send them to Remi. Remi uncovers the truth behind Maiko’s crystal and also hints on how to find an ancient book about khalei mages. They have no idea how this makes sense and what the agents were thinking,but she knows that getting the book out of GemCo’s hands is top priority.

 

The MC is then tasks to find out clues about the location. Turns out there are secret symbols leading to it, but impossible to decipher unless they are all there. As it turns out, they know a certain fotograph who most likely ended up taking a photo of every inch of the town trying to find the best angle for his perverted photos. Thus, the MC goes to see Kyle.

 

Kyle is reluctant to offer any help unless the MC makes it possible for him to go on a date with Savori. She helps him out, gathering info during pillow talk with several characters in the school.

In the end, Kyle goes on his date, the MC can join too,and they get a copy of Kyle’s secret data drive, which Adrianna analyzes and discovers the location of the secret ruins that hold the old book. It turns out they were right under the school.

 

The MC goes to take the book, but before she does so, she deactivates all the devices that control sexual urges, which also allows Maiko to win and fight better against the agents during the ending of UCMH. While that stuff happens above, the MC goes down and recovers the book, needing to pass several traps that test her abilities. In the end, the last one deemed impossible ask for a futanari to take the book. If the MC is one then she can take it, otherwise Remi steps in. This triggers a khalei tentacle demon battle, which can at the end either be tamed by the MC or destroyed. Taming it will result in another sex scenes and the possibility to keep it or offer it to Remi.

Plot idea 2:

 

(The MC is GemCo’s secret agent)

 

Having returned from a mission, the MC is sent to Nanako High to make sure that the students aren’t teaching at their Khalei exams. As it turns out, the way of figuring this out is by recording their Khalei levels during sex.

 

the MC is then given the option to either take futa pill or not, and also the Fertility Drug or the Ultra Contraceptive Pill.

If the MC takes either, she will be briefed about what her secondary missions is: either make babies and bring them to Remi or bring the sexual recording to Remi.

 

Although unsure about this, the MC accepts.

In general plot idea, the story doesn’t deviate much from Plot Idea 1, the only difference is that there will be events and moments that will make the MC doubt GemCo’s intentions and wonder if she made a mistake. These events lead to her allying up with Remi and helping her destroy GemCo’s plans.

 

The way to enter GemCo’s base is also different as this time she can do so by ordering them not by ‘taking them out’.

 

Plot idea 3:

(the new kid in school)

The MC is the new kid in school who just happened to have a good Khalei affinity. The story starts with the MC running late to school and bumping into Remi, who drops a Futa Pill. The MC accidentally picks it up and runs to her class. After the day passes and she meets everyone, she discovers the pill and goes to Remi, the nurse to see what it is. She find Remi and another student enjoying themselves.

After the moment, the MC shows the pill to Remi and she tells her what it does. The MC can now take the pill to become like Remi or take another Pill in exchange for that, which will help her out with studies.

 

Both pills will turn her lust to max and force her to assault Remi, who is more than eager to get a load off.

After the event, Remi lets the MC go, who returns home to have dinner with her parents.

The following day, she rushes to school and bumps into Kyle, they both stumble and fall in a nearby bush. Kyle offers to take her photo and the MC accepts in exchange for a ‘favor’ she won’t reveal until afterwards. The MC flashes Kyle when he takes the photo, and then offers her deal ‘a BJ’.

After this event, the MC begins wonders what she should aim to do at the new school. She starts new technically, so she can aim to become anything from getting influence with the rich kids to having sex with everyone (a similar scene appears on her first day here, but the options are normal).

 

After the MC had interacted with a few people here at the school (mainly a teacher, Maiko, Kyle, and two other random students), she encounters Remi again, who has a proposition for her. In exchange for some money, the MC is to record the Kahlei levels of those she has sex with while she does so.

 

The MC accepts and is also informed about the Cafe being a good place to start.

After the MC has a good round with everyone she returns to Remi for a round with her. Remi then takes the data and tells her she will call her if anything new happens.

 

The next time the MC returns, she discovers Remi in a sex trance and after relieving her, she discovers the hypnotic device.

The story then continues as mentioned in Plot idea 1) (or I could take this in a whole other side story direction, no connection whatsoever to the timeline you wrote down here: http://spiralvortexplay.com/sv…..-spoilers/ )

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just posting that i see this but might need a bit to read all this. will try to tackle after I make today’s posts to the site.

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just posting that i see this but might need a bit to read all this. will try to tackle after I make today’s posts to the site.  

Sure thing. As I said before, this plotline was written at the top of my head. If you feel like anything’s amiss you can let me know and I’ll modify it. As for the lore behind it (the Khalei stuff), I hope I got it right. I’m playing through the other story games, trying to figure out the missing parts and how to piece them/mention them in UMCT.

If you want me to properly organize the whole plotline you posted on this link: http://spiralvortexplay.com/sv…..poilers/  and somehow make sense of the missing parts, give it a more realistic feel, or do a background explanation on how it would be possible both from a historical, scientific, or social point of view, I can do it, but it might take some time.

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As I promised, I managed to write a few scenes (unedited), more specifically the intro that consists of the character creation (minus 3 scenes because I was too tired to write them) and plot intro for Plot Idea 1. The .zip contains a .pdf with inner links (so you don’t scroll like a madman trying to find what part of the text goes where, as of now, there’s only 1 link). I hope the format is good and works for you. If you need a different type of format to properly implement it within the game’s code, let me know.

Update 0: The pill scenes aren’t finished.

UMCT-scenes-1.zip

Update 1: Finished the whole tutorial scene, the character is now on her way to school.

UMCT-scenes-U1.zip

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sorry for taking so long to reply I just finished reading this. I glanced over the first pdf also.

Plot idea 1 wont work for me as you have it written mainly because one thing I wanted to avoid here is turning the school into some sex breeding ground. I wanted to main the integrity of the school while allowing the player freedoms to do many different things. So i wanted to avoid the school and most of the named characters that have a set personality. It is why in the current UMCT game when you approach the school it is closed. I want the game to take place completely outside of the school. So I have areas such as the Lingerie shop and Cafe as places to go, etc.

I assumed you meant to just add stuff onto to the story. not really rewrite it.

Not totally sure on Remi being related to you (being mother or sister) since you can customize your character to really look nothing like Remi. I think Aunt is still possible.

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So plot idea 1 is a no go. Hm, if you want the school to maintain it’s moral integrity, does this mean the same thing will be applied to the rest of the town?

So, we have the character, who is supposed to get into sexual relationships with most of the cast, yet outside of it, things will go about in a normal manner.

So, basically, what you are aiming for is the exploration of the areas outside the school, right?

Hm, so the character would need some sort of incentive to explore the world outside of the school rather than keep a part of the action within the school.

If you like the idea of Remi being the player’s aunt (If I read the lore right, Remi is the only herm around there), then the School can be kept as one of the places where the character can learn a social skill, while the library a place where they gain intellect, if you go with stat points. Or it can be kept as simply the place where the character has to go to keep up the appearance of a normal student (miss a week of school and people start to wonder what’s happening with you), and also it could be a place where the player meets Remi during work hours.

What I wrote above would be mostly to keep the idea of the character being the one who worked behind the scenes to obtain that strange book and also who was able to fiddle with Gemco’s security to make it harder for them to track down Maiko and co.

If you are still on board with that idea, I’ll think something else for the rest of it. It’s idea 1, 2, and 3 so far :)) so once that’s decided upon, yeah, I can write the rest.

What did you think about the scenes I wrote so far though? (given the change of ideas, I might switch around a few things in there as well)

About the rewriting thing, well, I figured that since what was written was like a drop in the sea, I could just start it from scratch.

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Sorry for the delay. The rest of the town defiantly has more flexibility, plus more places can be added that support ideas that go past what is established in UMCH.

It is not the intent for the playable character in UMCT to have sexual relationships with the main character cast of UMCH.
The character meets Kyle initially but beyond that it is intended for the character to interact with new characters specific to this game.

For example various cafe patrons, perhaps lingerie shop customers, random hot girl/guy on the street. basically creating new characters for this.

Some named characters can fit but the issue is you have to make sure their canon personality and things will fit. David might be more easy to use in this than say a Riley.

The main character has no choice but to explore outside the school. Incentive is not really needed since the school is closed. No one but GemCo agents is at the school and they are keeping everyone out.

Remi is not at the school during this time also. In fact, now that I think about it, Remi is currently in space trying to find Jeo XD. The events of ARIA during this time. But some excuse can be made for it perhaps. Yeah Remi is the only futa atm. But other can be created for this is the point of not having it connected to the school, etc.

what was already written for UMCT was not much but it was created with the aforementioned in mind. you might run into the issues deviating from it too heavily. I think the main character can live with an Aunt. It doesn’t have to be Remi, but if it is the she is there would be limited since she would need to leave to hunt Jeo. again is it problem using named characters, and this story happens to overlap the timeline of another game Remi is in.

I’ll have to read the 1 ,2 and 3 idea again.

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Ok, so far, from what you told me, I got a better idea of the whole environment of the story plus the way I can create characters. New characters, new plots lines, no need to interact with the ones from UMCH or ARIA that much. I can think of several places and locations that can be used, maybe even background to be reused from UMCH and stuff like that.

Regarding Remi, she’s basically the only futa in the story right now and also from that Rookie novel, I came to understand that she did this to herself as an experiment, meaning that she holds the key to turning into one, thus it would be logical that she would be the only one capable of spreading that way to do it.

Maybe it could be genetic and only those with a certain gene sequence can activate it (as it is in reality, those predisposed to conceiving hermaphrodite children, the chances are very low, https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/True_hermaphroditism to not be confused with mixed gonadal dysgenesis, which is something else entirely.) Or we could claim that Remi managed to create something like a modified X chromosome or heavily mutate the SRY gene (so her pair would be X Xy) from her own DNA using Khalei tech and the latest of gene therapy, thus resulting in her gaining a functional phallus and no balls. The true hermaphrodism would require the presence of balls as I understood it.

I think it would be best and more undertstandable from a logical point of view of the whole plot of the story IF Remi was there for a short period of time preparing for her departure to Space. Now, here’s another thing, I saw in Aria that there are things like “warp gates”. Fundementally the tech applied in it could be used to create “teleportation gates” or “small warp gates” which basically run on the same principle and would require less power. We could have one in a secret lab Remi has in her house and another linked to Remi’s spaceship, for example the experimental lab there. This way, the character can still interact with her or give the “Excuse” as to why Remi is at home from time to time.

Another thing we could do is have an android replica that Remi remote-controlls from the spaceship in order to keep an eye on Maiko or other character she finds of interest. The player isn’t required to interract with them, but the player could do “jobs” that help Remi out like scout some abandoned warehouse, find a way into a secret club, investigate why the neighbour farts at three AM in the morning loud enough to wake up the whole neighbourhood.

I think it would be easier for me to write the story, if I also had a better idea of what tech level they have. So far, they seem to be at interplanetary or interstellar travel tech level, which requires the existence of: powerful sapient AI, countless new aerospace materials, shield tech and gravity tech, advanced robot technology, energy-based weaponry, planetary colonization (the moon (planned by NASA), mars (planned by Elon Musk), Titan (planned by Nasa), Europa (planned by NASA)), a space station around Jupiter for Helium extraction, space colonies for solar power harvesting (EASA and NASA), asteroid mining colonies (planned by big companies), and a form of world government or accord between the big countries (to avoid war). There wouldn’t be any form of fossil fuel based cars (Europe is already taking steps towards eliminating all Diesel cars), medicine, work, education, almost all of these sectors would be highly improved and more automatized.

The difference between interstellar and interplanetary tech level would be if they have discovered faster than light travel or not and also the complexity and advancement of the previous techs mentioned. Ah, and the number of spaceships. Interstellar travel tech level would bascially allow for the bigger, better shipyard, a more developed network of trade between colonies and lots of spacestations and spaceships. Judging from what you showed in ARIA, it would be interstellar tech.

This whole thing could lead to very diverse and more complicated story. Space travel could even expand the UMCT game from the planet to the solar system then further to the galaxy, literally coming close to TiTS (Trials in Tainted Space), although in that game, the tech is FAR more advanced and galactic exploration is at a whole different level.

Sorry for the long explanation :)) I got a bit too into it.

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Again you can make new characters here. So Remi may not be the only futa person here, not including the possibility of the Main character to be one. Remi is just the only already established character in the lore. IIRC Remi is testing the effects of Khalei vs testosterone. It doesn’t quite mean she is the only on that can do various body alterations. Bri for example was make completely from molecules by Phil.

I don’t mind Remi having a Android left behind that maybe resemble Remi but not a perfect replica like a clone. It would need to be like the AI robot in ARIA but maybe with Remi’s hairstyle and color.

in ARIA their ships can wrap long distance but they can’t just teleport a person over these long distances outside of a spaceship.

none of the lore in JLCK (which houses Umichan, ARIA, etc) takes place in real life Earth or any future “Earth”. There is no NASA or USA or anything like that here. It is a completely different planet called Ralamar and the universe has some completely different properties compared to irl. I have to mention this to some people when they comment of breast physics heh. There is no issues with faster than light travel here. The body can be modified to be able to perform in space. GemCO has a monopoly on space travel. on everything basically. There is no government. GemCo keeps the order. There are smaller companies that compete against GemCo however they are no competition. Time travel is possible based on ancient magic. Magic also exists but is very rare. it was more common in the past. Travel between different dimension is possible here. This is covered in Semitix and Daughter of Eve.

There is also Khalei which in the main energy source. Not electricity or fossil fuel, etc.
http://jlck.wikia.com/wiki/Khalei

GemCo has striker, enhancement Khalei,etc. It also powers space craft and vehicles, and robots. it can fired as a projectile, etc. but there are also kinds that appear as earth like elements. in this universe “fire” is actually Red Khalei that is vibrating and hot. it makes up the sun. which is the fire planet you can see in ARIA. I think it is described in ARIO also. Yeah the whole story is pretty complex when you combine ARIA, Umichan and Semitix stuff. It really doesn’t need to get that deep though for UMCT. it is just a kid waiting for the school to reopen and getting into random things in the meanwhile.

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I think I got the gist of it. The NASA, EASA, and the other stuff were just for reference and comparison with our idea. The idea is that if people have the tech, they will try to do various things with it. It’s basic psychology.

But in general this a Sci Fi mixed with Fantasy elements and Modern Age elements.

I used teleportation in quotes, but I was thinking more along the lines of a warping an individual form point A to point B. If you are using the same theory as the one in quantum mechanics, and the device itself is an advanced version of the Alcubierre drive or the typical Star Trek warp drive, then you are basically folding space through powerful gravity fields. Stronger at the front, weaker at the back. Thus, warping an individual or even creating something akin to the Stargates could be possible. (I’m just bouncing ideas here. But having a Khalei stargate or wormhole that connects two different points in space sounds more achievable in that universe, and could bring out some interesting plot development.)

As for Khalei, I will take it as basically the definition of magic energy given in your universe. It’s the name of the particle, it has the ability in to mimic complex structures like atoms and molecules (taking on fermion and boson properties is a feat in itself) and even has its own macroscopic manifestation, but it doesn’t react to physical laws the same way (thus explaining jiggly physics and other weird aspects of the world). So far, from the games I mostly got the impression that it’s some sort of demonic energy that may or may not exists in most people which gives them power and can also be used as an energy source.

(bouncing ideas again) Our sun, technically speaking, is one big giant nuclear bomb that keeps on exploding at millions of degrees in chain fission reaction that turns the Helium into Carbon. A star radiates more than just “heat”, it emanates radiation and generates a gravitational field powerful enough to keep the planets in orbit. In your stead, I would rather say most stars in this universe are actually a result of Khalei going nuclear in large quantities. The center is one big Khalei crystal and the outer mantles is Khalei exploding non-stop and forming compressed particles of Khalei crystals.

However, I wouldn’t give a kick out the door to normal physics just yet. You can easily claim the action takes place in a sector of the universe that is quite rich in Khalei (if we were to go by comparison, our own universe, or what we can currently see of it at least, is about 154 billion light years in diamater, and keep in mind that Milky Way is just a mere 100.000 light years in diameter). The story stands with this explanation, and in the future you can even use it to explore an interaction between both types of tech and civilizations: khalei based and non-khalei based. Maybe after you are done with the whole Maiko story arc.

Anyway, a good story idea just makes me curious and also makes me want to figure out the hole and loops that need explaining. :))

Understanding the universe the story takes place in can better help me offer this info to the reader of the game story when he starts playing it.

I’ll rewrite some parts in the scenes in those PDFs and add the changes mentioned until now, then I’ll add a few extra scenes: a voyour scene at a clothes store, a meet the hot milf neighbour scene, and a scene with Remi before she goes off into space. Afterwards we can talk about it if you want me to continue with this or not (as in if my skill and style is good enough or not). No point in writing it if it will just stay on the forum. 😛

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there is no teleporting by bending space, you physically need to travel to a distant location with a ship’s engine.

The only person the can “teleport” essentially is Annie and it uses old magic, not any technology. it is basically like nightcrawler from x-men, she travels through a dimension referred to as the white word. there are several dangers of it also that is a different subject. Also she is created from just a thought to begin with.

Donavik has a portal to the while world on his stomach area. but also a semitix demon exists inside that realm.

The entire lore is sci fi fantasy stuff but UMCT doesn’t need to get the deep. It would be better in other games. If you go back and look at some of them, the Umichan games in general normally focus on just the basic life of one of the characters. usually Maiko. very light storylines nothing too deep into lore. Players shouldn’t need to understand a lot of the lore to really understand the story in the game. It is more casual stuff.

Semitix is the heavy lore stuff with demons and fantasy stuff. While ARIA touches on lore and has with sci fi technology type stuff.

For UMCT is it a character that is transferred there basically at a bad time. But no one predicted the school would be closed. The reason she was  transferred there could have some deeper meaning you find out later. And you can know you aunt is some agent but really would prefer something like that is not the focus on the story. I actually didn’t plan to have the player to run into Maiko or many of the other characters here at all. I have some ARIA games coming up that need deep lore stuff.

The scenes you had in mind are good. yeah stuff like a hot neighbor, and voyeur scene, etc.  even the Remi scene before she leaves it good. Stuff can hint there there is deeper lore here but doesn’t need to really dive deep into it in this game. in ARIA Remi never leaves the shiip of she joined.

In the Jeni game that is being worked on there is also a gym that being added to the lore of the city i guess. By this time it would be where Holly used to work. It have a lot of bulky dude and even muscular women in there. Can have some stuff happen there also.

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