Don’t want to start off negative but I really like the original pose, it provides much more expression for the character. It’s too good xP
Also the original face has a more mature look to it, mainly due to the shape when compared to the new one. Whether that’s what you’re going for character wise, is up to you.
I think you could still keep it within the new style.
Overall bro, all of the art updates are great, however there are bits of the original for this one I wish you kept.
Thanks can try to make the shape of the head thinner. She can be drawn in different poses and stuff based on the situation, just trying to get he character details down atm.
this time I can’t help but being picky since we are dealing with best girl (my opinion of course). I don’t like how she looks less atletic overall, I really liked how her thights and hip bones were outlined in the old model. Also, I concur with Drealth in that a thiner face fits her better, looks more mature that way
Thanks, working on the face atm but I don’t want a elongated head like the old pic. So I am seeing what I can do with editing it. also the athletic remains from the muscle tone in the stomach and arms imo.
It looks a lot more clean that the old one that is for sure. I can’t describe it… but if I had to try to describe it I’ll say the new look is brighter than the old one. Her nails should be a little longer only so it can get notice more. You can really tell if she have nails colored unless you really focus on her hands.That the tip of her fingers have a different color purple to the tip.I can see why the say she is fatter but she is not, she is thicker than the old one. LOL
Finally!
Maiko and Zytra are my fave girls so i was waiting for this.
And i’m a little disappointed actually. It feel badly drawn compared to the other characters redrawn till now, my issue is especially about shoulders and the arm. The arm feel too short and wavy, kinda disproportioned. The soulders like there is a problem with proportions as well, is difficult to word it maybe is a feel i get from the hairs that give the feel her arms are detachable.
And… is just my impression or she got downgraded on the butt/hips departement?
Then i would not say about “dead eyes” but the old Zytra give a feel of “look straight at you” like is paying attention. The new look like more lost in her toughts. This is probably what you wanted so i don’t complain, but i see where other people dissatisfaction cause they were used to a more lively depiction. This enhanced by her pose that now is a standard (and kinda boring) hand on her flank while before she had her arms playfully wrapped all around her boobies. And her now pale cheeks that doesn’t suit very well an heavy make-up kind of girl like her.
I understand you need specific clues, but is not so easy cause the problem here is that Zytra feel less llively and bimboish than before. And that’s not something you fix by saying “rotate face 10 degrees right” “bend arm that angle” “increase/decrease boobs”… is about the feeling the picture give to the viewer. And i feel that while overally the drawing technique is improved, the old depiction of Zytra suited better her character and personality.
Vortex00 
The nails look too short
Thanks, seems simple enough to edit
She looks… fat
I like the older version better
looks about the same to be in terms of proportions tbh.
I meant the shape of her face
it’s not her body, her body is perfect. Her face is whats making her look fat, its too round.
Hey Vortex, here’s my initial impression
Don’t want to start off negative but I really like the original pose, it provides much more expression for the character. It’s too good xP
Also the original face has a more mature look to it, mainly due to the shape when compared to the new one. Whether that’s what you’re going for character wise, is up to you.
I think you could still keep it within the new style.
Overall bro, all of the art updates are great, however there are bits of the original for this one I wish you kept.
Cheers
Thanks can try to make the shape of the head thinner. She can be drawn in different poses and stuff based on the situation, just trying to get he character details down atm.
I second
is not good
Thanks for the feedback
hey Vortex, how is it going?
this time I can’t help but being picky since we are dealing with best girl (my opinion of course). I don’t like how she looks less atletic overall, I really liked how her thights and hip bones were outlined in the old model. Also, I concur with Drealth in that a thiner face fits her better, looks more mature that way
Thanks, working on the face atm but I don’t want a elongated head like the old pic. So I am seeing what I can do with editing it. also the athletic remains from the muscle tone in the stomach and arms imo.
It looks a lot more clean that the old one that is for sure. I can’t describe it… but if I had to try to describe it I’ll say the new look is brighter than the old one. Her nails should be a little longer only so it can get notice more. You can really tell if she have nails colored unless you really focus on her hands.That the tip of her fingers have a different color purple to the tip.I can see why the say she is fatter but she is not, she is thicker than the old one. LOL
I thinned out her face a bit, I think this makes her look better.
Finally!
Maiko and Zytra are my fave girls so i was waiting for this.
And i’m a little disappointed actually. It feel badly drawn compared to the other characters redrawn till now, my issue is especially about shoulders and the arm. The arm feel too short and wavy, kinda disproportioned. The soulders like there is a problem with proportions as well, is difficult to word it maybe is a feel i get from the hairs that give the feel her arms are detachable.
And… is just my impression or she got downgraded on the butt/hips departement?
Then i would not say about “dead eyes” but the old Zytra give a feel of “look straight at you” like is paying attention. The new look like more lost in her toughts. This is probably what you wanted so i don’t complain, but i see where other people dissatisfaction cause they were used to a more lively depiction. This enhanced by her pose that now is a standard (and kinda boring) hand on her flank while before she had her arms playfully wrapped all around her boobies. And her now pale cheeks that doesn’t suit very well an heavy make-up kind of girl like her.
I understand you need specific clues, but is not so easy cause the problem here is that Zytra feel less llively and bimboish than before. And that’s not something you fix by saying “rotate face 10 degrees right” “bend arm that angle” “increase/decrease boobs”… is about the feeling the picture give to the viewer. And i feel that while overally the drawing technique is improved, the old depiction of Zytra suited better her character and personality.