I barely can’t tell the difference from the middle and the right.I see that the right the eyes are more wide will the middle the eyes is shorter but round. That is about the only thing I see different I have no idea what update you give the art.
Although I liked the initial art for faces better for all the characters, the body shapes have become much better and that is a great job, but the only concern for me is that some of the faces ocasionally seem very similar such as in this case Zytra and Maiko faces look quite identical beside the fact that they have different bodies and different hair whilst in the initial version they were clearly very individual and had little to no resemblance.
The middle one does look thinner overall and greatly improved, but my only concern is that it looks childish I may just be speaking nonsense but ¿maybe the eyes a bit higher and a maller mouth could regain the balance and make it look more mature?
The body looks great, but I feel the face has lost some character. I don’t like the loss of glossiness on the lips, and the face overall seems squatter, wider, and more bottom-heavy. Partially due to the moving down of the forehead show in the hairstyle and slight opening up of the bangs in general. Elongated face was better.
Face could stand to be thinner still, might help to round off her chin because the new one’s looking pretty sharp. Overall though I think the biggest problem is you need more emphasis on her makeup.
Thanks, I don’t want to give her too much makeup because she doesn’t always have it on. Like swimming for example. It needs to look correct both with and without it.
The right (from the viewer point of view) eye has been shrinked too much IMHO. Now her eyes feel not simmetrical.
Sorry to complain so much about her. But for me she is the hottiest hottie of the vortexverse, and my second fave girl after Maiko. So i probably have very high expectations for her.
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middle ,,,,,, no sexy…. no cute no unhappy …. same to deadly fish
thanks for the feedback. though I can’t guess at why you don’t like it.
you need to explain what you don’t like about it or the comment is useless.
I barely can’t tell the difference from the middle and the right.I see that the right the eyes are more wide will the middle the eyes is shorter but round. That is about the only thing I see different I have no idea what update you give the art.
Thanks for the feedback. The whole face is thinner, yeah and eyes shorter. We’ll get there with the face. Will have another go at it.
Although I liked the initial art for faces better for all the characters, the body shapes have become much better and that is a great job, but the only concern for me is that some of the faces ocasionally seem very similar such as in this case Zytra and Maiko faces look quite identical beside the fact that they have different bodies and different hair whilst in the initial version they were clearly very individual and had little to no resemblance.
Thanks, that might be fixed them the face is properly adjusted.
The middle one does look thinner overall and greatly improved, but my only concern is that it looks childish I may just be speaking nonsense but ¿maybe the eyes a bit higher and a maller mouth could regain the balance and make it look more mature?
Thanks I’ll keep it in mind when I try edits again.
The body looks great, but I feel the face has lost some character. I don’t like the loss of glossiness on the lips, and the face overall seems squatter, wider, and more bottom-heavy. Partially due to the moving down of the forehead show in the hairstyle and slight opening up of the bangs in general. Elongated face was better.
Any general ETA on Female Rivalries?
Thanks, I’ll try it again, though the lips will likely still be glossy. Will talk fr eta in a different post.
Face could stand to be thinner still, might help to round off her chin because the new one’s looking pretty sharp. Overall though I think the biggest problem is you need more emphasis on her makeup.
Thanks, I don’t want to give her too much makeup because she doesn’t always have it on. Like swimming for example. It needs to look correct both with and without it.
Yeah, I slightly longer oval shaped face almost, suits zytra a lot more then the new rounded one, at least that’s how I feel anyway
Thanks, will try various things and see how it looks.
her face looks fat, and too round.
Thanks for the feedback
The right (from the viewer point of view) eye has been shrinked too much IMHO. Now her eyes feel not simmetrical.
Sorry to complain so much about her. But for me she is the hottiest hottie of the vortexverse, and my second fave girl after Maiko. So i probably have very high expectations for her.
Thanks, yeah I didn’t notice the eyes until after I uploaded it lol.