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This post is for Dialogue ideas for characters in locations in UMCH where they have on casual clothes and/or bikinis. This is can be the Mall, the Boardwalk, the Cafe, possibly adding the lingerie shop for some of this stuff also.This is the last dialogue suggestion for UMCH!
previews examples:
http://spiralvortexplay.com/svp/category/text/script/
Characters have casual and bikini clothes here. Other characters besides students can appear here also. Characters like Alfie, Mira, etc.
several image references below.
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All these are Boardwalk, expect the one that can be anywhere. I might think of some mall and cafe ones later.
Is this style ok? Scripting step by step what happens.
(Kyle and Pattie in Boardwalk.)
Kyle says this is his favorite place for taking photos.
Pattie says he said the locker room was his favorite place some time back.
Kyle says that the locker room is his favorite place too but there is less risk here.
(David, Luma and Annie anywhere.)
David says to Annie he has never seen her before and asks if she works in the cafe.
She tells him she doesn’t.
David expresses disapointment then says she should.
Annie thanks him. (This thanks could be confused, hesitant, straightforeward or happy. I don’t know how she’d actually feel or react to this.)
Luma tells David to leave her be and they should find Joiry and Jeni.
(Chris, Riley and Luma in Boardwalk.)
Luma questions why Riley isn’t as sexually active as her then compliments her body.
Riley says she doesn’t enjoy it and would rather focus on other things.
Luma says Riley is boring for this.
Chris says to Luma that not everybody has to be like her and he likes this about Riley.
Luma lightly insults Chris, calling him boring or telling him to shut up.
(Kyle and Yuki in Boardwalk.)
Kyle tells Yuki he needs help, addressing her as “nurse”.
Yuki asks Kyle what the problem is.
Kyle tells her he has a nasty sunburn.
Yuki tells him she has something for sunburns and asks where the burn is.
Kyle hesitantly tells her it is on his penis.
Yuki tells him it is likely rub burn from too much masturbation then tells him to come closer.
Kyle expresses excitment.
(Natan, Pattie and Leyah in Boardwalk.)
Pattie asks Natan if he plans to wear swimming shorts today.
Natan tells her that isn’t appropriate and not to ask it again.
Pattie apoligizes.
Pattie tells Leyah that he said no.
Leyah expresses some disapointment.
Natan asks them to leave unless they have something important to say. He tells them he wants some peace so he can relax.
I so badly want to see something lewd with Chris, but if thats not planned its okay. Anyways keep up the good work!
I just completely left it up to the patreon voters back when I was adding stuff they vote on to UMCH. I don’t recall something with Chris even being nominated.
Joiry + David + Roise, at the boardwalk
Roise: Hey, you guys want some icecream?
David: Pffft, no way. Why would be want something like that?
Roise: Haven’t you heard? It’s the trend now for girls to judge guys by how much ice cream they can eat.
Joiry: What for? That sounds stupid as hell.
Roise: A study just came out that says the more hung a guy is, the more ice cream he can eat.
David: …. I can eat more ice cream than you.
Joiry: The fuck you can?! I can eat like 87 ice creams!
David: I can eat like, twelve.
Joiry: There’s no way you can eat that much more ice cream than me! Come on glasses girlie, gimme all the ice cream you got!
Roise: Puhuhuhu… I suppose that can be arranged.
Maiko + Chris, at the boardwalk
Maiko: Hey Chris, were you thinking about hitting the beach?
Chris: Oh, no I can’t really do that.
Maiko: Why not?
Chris: I can’t find any trunks that fit me…
Maiko: Oh, well at least that’s kind of a good problem to have?
Chris: I suppose.
Roise + Mira, at the boardwalk
Mira: You know, you might get more customers if you wore less.
Roise: It’s the boardwalk, not the cafe. I can’t just wear whatever I like.
Mira: Cafe? What kind of cafe are you talking about?
Roise: Wait, you don’t know?
Mira: Know what?
Roise: Hmm, actually it’d be better to show you than tell you. I’ll take you there some time, my treat.
Mira: Sounds cool to me.
Roise: Puhuhuhu…
Maiko: (Why do I get the feeling she’s unleashed a monster?)
Good stuff thanks~ I don’t think Maiko knows about Chris. I would have to check some scenes in the nurse office. But Chris can dodge around having to explain to Maiko why his trunks don’t fit.
😀
I believe she does overhear Remi talking about his assets. But I can edit the reactions a bit if I’m mistaken.
When it can be updated?request(My English is not very good…..)
I’ll be adding in the last dialogue stuff today or over the weekend at the latest.
Thank you