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first of all here random screens from the current cafe stuff.
Currently working on sex stuff, but going to add in some dialogue stuff also.
each time before working Maiko has the option to greet customers. she might watch greetings from other characters that work there also if another character is already greeting them.
It may or may not effect her mood, base pay, tips, and percent change to potentially get pleasure clients. depending on how the customers might react.
not sure if it want multiple characters together also but we’ll see.
(the customers appear uncomfortable) = lower chance to chat, lower tips
(customer is insulted) = lower tips
(customer is confused) = lower chance to chat.
(customer is neutral) = no change
(customer is excited) = higher chance to chat
(customer is happy) = higher tips
(customer is horny) = higher tips, higher chance to chat
I don’t have a particular name for the cafe.
Jeni examples:
Jeni a bit of a tomboy, but has a few girly traits. only works here because it is the family business and her Mom wants her to help out.
She uses swear words and generally would rather be back at the school doing contact sports with buff boys. her remarks are generally very bad or very good.
Jeni: Yeah yeah, welcome to the cafe or whatever, have a seat. And stop staring at me so damn much. It’s fucking creepy.
(the customers appear uncomfortable)
Jeni: Oh you again.. did you really come to buy another salad? or did you come to toss one ? You came to toss one didn’t you…
(customer is horny)
Jeni: welcome, follow me to the table. feel free to stare at my tits or ass or whatever. I don’t care anymore.
(customer is excited)
Jeni: Do you really want to know why I have gloves on ? I don’t think you do. Quit pissing me off.
(customers appears uncomfortable)
Jeni: Are just here to pull my top down too ?
(customers is insulted)
Pattie examples:
pattie is flirty and very weird. calls Maiko senpai. per remarks are sometimes viewed as odd even though she has good intentions.
Pattie: Welcome! follow me to the sp-… uh table…
(customer is neutral)
Pattie: Chu? Oh! yeah these don’t hold up that well. You should see how easily I can bounce senpai’s boobs out.
(customer is excited)
Pattie: Oink oink!
(customer is happy)
Pattie: Chuuu! so cute! I can just eat you up!
(customer is confused)
Pattie: Welcome chu! Sorry We are out of milk but I can squeeze some from senpai if you want.
(customer is confused)
Leyah examples:
Leyah is energetic and outgoing. uses nya and nyan. refers to herself in third person often. her remarks are generally positive.
Leyah: Leyah-nyan will make sure you enjoy your stay!
(customer is happy)
Leyah: Do you come to eat or to play? What is play? uh.. nevermind nya!
(customer is confused)
Maiko examples:
Maiko is generally positive and confident. her remarks are generally not really good or really bad. it could also depend on her mood thoguh.
Maiko: Welcome! please follow me!
(customer is neutral)
Maiko: Sorry it took so long! How is everyone today?
(customer is happy)
About Author
Maiko: This barely covers my nipples!
That is what I was thinking when I first seen the drawing of Maiko done by ttrop. LOL
You have some good ideas when it comes to the girls persona’s on what they could say.
I’ll see if I can come up with a name for the cafe. I’m at work so I’ll wait when I get home.
Threw a few down, I hurt my hand recently so I needed to use one hand. So if there’s more typos than usual that’s why.
For name of the cafe, is it like a diner? (Food wise it reminds me of a diner in the variety) You could always name it after Jeni’s family name if you want. I don’t remember it being mentioned before so I don’t know if it would sound good as a restaurant name but if it sounds O.K. you could always do that. Other than that maybe a name like “Strawberries and cream”? (Since white and red uniforms) Or if Jeni’s mom knows about the secret service you can call it something like “cherry girls”
Jeni-
Hey I remember you, you’re that asshole that facialed me when I said no! Fuck you! (Customer is horny)
…. Can you lay off? I’m on my break right now. (Customer is uncomfortable)
Hey, quit rubbing me with that big dick… ngh… (Customer is horny)
Leyah-
Nyaaaa~ You can’t play here, if you want to play. We need to go to the back… (Customer is Horny)
Nyuuuu… Sorry, Leyah isn’t feeling well… Can I help you with something? (Customer is Uncomfortable)
Nya, sure thing Jeni, I’ll help Mr. Small dick! Nya-! Leyah didn’t know you were listening Mr. Big dick! I’m sorry! (Customer is insulted)
Maiko-
Hey guys, do you see something you like? (Customer is excited)
You can do more than look if you want, but it’ll cost you… (Customer is horny)
*Sigh* Sorry, I’m here now. What can I get for you? (Customer is uncomfortable) (Maiko in a bad mood)
If I think of more I’ll throw em out later but this is too big for one message already.
I was thinking about Jeni’s family name also but neither jeni or David are listed on the site’s character description post so idk what their name is either.
Other than that, idk maybe something to do with Jeni’s frog obsession? Cherry girls is a great name also, I really doubt Jeni’s mom is oblivious to the back room dealings. If we’re assuming Jeni’s mom is clued in to the kids behavior then maybe she knows about Jeni/David and a name like “Sisterly Love” would work. Double entendres are always fun.
Jeni-
Look I’m going to be a bitch but to keep you from whining my mom’ll cut you a discount. That sound good? (Customer is neutral)
Pattie-
Sorry Mr. I only play with senpai for free. But if you want we can talk about that more in the back… (Customer is horny)
Hello I’m here to take your or- What? What do you mean you don’t want me? I’m not big enough!? Who do you think you are?! (Customer is uncomfortable)
Leyah-
Nya~ you like big boobs right? Of course you do! That’s why Leyah’s here! (Customer is excited)
Maiko-
……….. Oh I’m sorry! I didn’t see you standing there. How can I help you? (Customer is insulted) (Bad mood/Tired)
Alright you’re the one who wanted the Handy right? Ugh-! I meant the handy hammy, it’s server slang for our hamburgers….heh. (Customer is confused)
Oh… this top is so tight. I hope these don’t pop out on the job… (Customer is excited)
Here’s your lunch… ugh! Sorry! I can’t wear a bra with this and sometimes they can… be difficult. (Customer is uncomfortable/maybe horny or excited?)
Threw some more Maiko ones in there, figured she’d be talking the most and might need more.
Jeni and David last name is Sentoryu btw.
great stuff so far
Oh Jeni is going to make it fun. 😛
Jeni-
Yeah I’m feeling pretty good today, so what can I get for you? (Customer is neutral)
Alright here’s your food sir. Ah shit! Sorry I didn’t think I’d knock that over… shit now the foods all salty… hang on I’ll get a replacement. (Customer is insalted)
Pattie-
Why do I keep saying chu so much? Cause I love to chu all my customers! Chu! Chu! Chu! (Customer is excited)
Yeah Maiko oink! oink! Um… no sir! I wasn’t making fun of you honest! I’m sorry, I just like pigs is all! (Customer is insulted)
Leyah-
Nya to you Mr. customer! Leyah’s here for you! (Customer is happy)
Hello welcome… nya~ nya~ Leyah remembers you Mr. Big dick… did you want to play some more today? (Customer is horny)
These? Nyo! Leyah can’t take her bobbles out here! But if you’re nice enough today then Leyah will return the favor later… (Customer is excited)
Maiko-
Hello welcome to _______ (Name of place) you could take a seat over here but you’re not here for food are you….. (Customer is excited)
If nobody else wants to contribute I’ll keep stealing slots. 😀
Insalted…
I’ll admit it, I lol’d
All the dialogue you posted is really good thanks. I will probably use cherry girls as the name of the place.
No problem. If you need anything else writing wise feel free to ask. I always wanted to write for hentai stuff.
Good luck with the other stuff, looks great so far.
“This barely covers my nipples!” only the truth, waiting to see the full game 😀