Vortex00 Working on multiple stuff this weekend and I have a few things I wanted to run past peeps to get opinions and personal preferences on stuff on why. they will be mentioned below. Keep in mind I may or may not go with your idea or preference. I know some of you guys get a little upset if I’m not really feeling your idea, or maybe not doing what you feel like I should be doing.
1st thing
swim mini pov tits. I wanted to know if people prefer water on the swimsuit material itself or nah. leave short reason why but I don’t need a essay heh. This pic is a bit misleading because you only see pov tits when out of the pool
2nd thing
I’m not convinced there needs to be hentai in the swim mini, but if people have ideas on what the hentai can be for that feel free to leave suggestions.
keep in mind a few things.
The minigame itself is PoV and will more or less be this:
http://spiralvortexplay.com/svp/2015/01/16/umch-swimming-mini-test/
so the other characters will not be seen when doing the mini game itself.
Also this is the girls swim team not coed. Not a huge fan of yuri but it’s whatever if it can make sense and I can bare it. Also guys and teachers can show up during socialize so it stands to reason they could show up in hentai parts where applicable. Having said that, the swim club stuff is supervised by Instructor Mika. And while she lets students pass through, she doesn’t allow students not the the club and especially the males to loiter around the pool.
The hentai part needs to fit. Can’t just seem overly random. For example if it is some contest, it has to make sense that the girl would accept the terms.
3rd
a pic of Roise. A few people brought some concerns about her earlier mid section being too short. this is end result dry version.
I put her next to Luma and Leyah so you can compare to different bodies other than zytra. I wanted the character to look very different. Roise is a extreme case but still within my acceptable boundaries enough to not really be convinced to make any changes.
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I prefer 2, water soaks in the swimsuit, it’s not latex or leather to make drops.
for h-content it doesn’t need to be full on xxx, you could add prank with melting swimsuit, some changing scenes with possible groping involved or peeking, maybe a leg cram and a rescue resulting in some romantic scene or sloppy and perverted attempt at rescue. Late evening skinny dipping? Some lewd peek for the gallery or opponent to make him/her lose concentration (could lead beyond after the match if temptation used). Underwater peeking (Pattie would probably enjoy admiring those bouncys)…
Love improvement on Roise, looks great 🙂
Thanks for the feedback. looking underwater and skinny dipping seems to stand out the most to me.
I prefer pic 1, hentai in the swimming mini game would be good. Every little bit helps and its nice to see different scenes even if there isn’t much to them. Makes the characters feel more alive.
more on H-content… using concept similar to umcc were you can take one person with you.
MORNING classes (pool locked, being in swim club gives key to access)
AFTERNOON club time (pool occupied by swimming club, no boys allowed)
EVENING free (pool locked, being in swim club gives key to access)
NIGHT school closed
Possible events relating Maiko.
>Maiko+Girl enter pool (any time)>button for mini game (Maiko: hei, wanna race?)>locker room (small changing event similar to shower scene in umcc)>Mini Game>Win/Loose event.
+Pattie>Locker room, b00b fondling from behind>MG>Finish race, does not mater win or loose (Maiko:Huh..! Pattie!?.. were did she disappeared?) (Pattie: Chu-chu chu-chu (in shark attack rhythm) Pattie emerges from behind (finger play event in pool))
+Jeni>LR, angry look and b00by slapping?>MG>MaikoWINs (Jeni: I can’t believe i lost to those cow t1ts. Shouldn’t they be obstructing swimming? Or could it be they’re working like floats? That’s cheating!) Jeni gives Maiko rough b00by treatment (pinching and pulling) while talking in pool.
>Maiko+Boy enter pool (evening)>button for mini game (Maiko: hei, wanna race?)>locker room>Mini Game>Win/Loose event
+Kyle>(Maiko: hei, wanna race? Kyle: sure, but do i get something in return? Maiko: i’ll think about it if you win)>LR (Kyle might peek in)>MG>MaikoLooses (Kyle: now for the fun part, he he he) (could be choise to accept event)
+David>(David: how about a cat and mouse game? (evil grin)>LR (peek)>(David: you know what’s gonna happen when i catch you! ha ha ha… Maiko: i’ll better not loose.) MG>MaikoLooses (event in pool)
+Chris>(Maiko: hei, wanna race? Chris: i’m not sure! Maiko: come on, it’s gonna be fun! Chris: i’m better with tech than water. Maiko: i’ll give you reward if you manage to win! (giggle)>LR>MG>MaikoLooses (Maiko: well i did promised you a reward) (event in pool) / MaikoWins (Maiko: ohh don’t be so gloomy) (console event in pool)
Possible events in pool area (Maiko only watching/peeking)
>Locker Room>Pattie catches Kyle taking photos (Pattie: chu-chu-chu (in laughing tone) naughty piggy needs punishment… (BJ/HJ?)
>Zytra&Tsugo>Tsugo nagging Zytra persistently for xxx (Zytra: I’ll might consider it if you manage to beat me in swimming.) being confident in her swimming skills she gives impossible task.>week later in pool before club time>TsugoWins (Tsugo: finally, all those lessons from well paid pros finally paid off cha cha… eh..ghemm whats right. -I believe we had an agreement!) Zytra can comply (unique event in pool) or be a tease and say something like clubs goona start soon, there is no time…
This is a little hard for me to follow but I think I get the gist of it. Yeah the pool will open only during certain hours but Maiko wont be able to make student around with her. She will maybe be able to take pattie with her to different places.
i like one because they are actually in the pool, so droplets and such will still be on their bodies…. it also adds a bit of texture rather than just a kinda see through suit…..
either one is good though
as mentioned in the post the pics are bit misleading because I doubt you will be able to see the pool while physically in the pool minigame. Buy maybe Maiko can be in the water for something but not swimming laps.
The second one. The reason is already stated by UnfairPawn.
What about H in dressing rooms or an underwater peeping?
Roise became better, though I still see here a problem with her right arm.
And Leyah is amazing. =)
And also groping in the water may be a good idea.
Thanks for the feedback. For the the swimsuit material both are actually explainable. For example, for material 1, the material can be very slow to absorb liquid to the point where if she was not totally submerged in water the material would actually tend to repel smaller amounts of water. and/or upon saturation the water does not get absorbed.
yeah for any H stuff, be in locker room or pool or whatever related to swimming, I wanted to know what you had in mind specifically.
Well, for me the second one also just looks better.
Then, I think, usual straight and lesbo will be good, though maybe with unique poses. Can’t imagine anything extraordinary right now.
No. 1 if I had to choose based on only realism and not sexiness. Because excess water still clings to the suit. Although the drops tend to be flat and not so distinct because they join with the moisture absorbed in the material (I swim quite a bit…).
But I personally would not be bothered. No. 2 looks fine to me and is maybe more erotic because it gives a clean look to the boobs.
Sorry if that isn’t helpful!
Yeah I know what you mean by the water. The term for it doesn’t come to mind atm thoguh. Thanks for the feedback.
1. I think number 2 because it have more wet effect than number 1. I don’t see why not add it in as a POV of her wet.
2. A hentai at the pool, my mind is blank, I can’t think of a reason. I don’t know if there is any reason for a yuri maybe Pattie. hentai at a pol sound like there will be a water effect or something. Unless it’s out of the pool for a hentai. I’ll need to think hard what can be a reason.
3. Roise look good to me, I don’t see what the others being complaining about.
Thanks for the feedback. For Roise her hips and vagina are pretty high up. nothing Photoshop can’t edit if necessary. But it depends on who she is standing next to. We will take a moment to do various edits after all the non hentai character art is at a stopping point.
People get upset when you don’t agree with them? Surely you jest. Frankly I’m surprised you haven’t linked someone back to that F.A.Q. post you made awhile back.
The water on suit thing I don’t have a preference on, either is fine.
Rosie looks slightly better, enough so that people hopefully won’t raise a stink about it.
As for H content I think we’re missing the obvious one, swimsuit contest! At some point Maiko can challenge another girl and she’ll get a boost to popularity if she wins. It can be like a bonus level after beating a club captain. Of course Kyle will be a judge so nip slips, full nudity or some kind of sex act can be involved. You mentioned a community pool so that might make more sense than the school pool.
nothing has been drastic enough yet to link to that page. I really do try to explain why I disagree first.
Yeah something like that for community pool. For the school pool Instructor Mika wouldn’t allow it.
UnfairPawn said it first, I think 2 is the better option. For anyone having trouble with the minigame I have a tip: large, circular motions. I like yuri, myself. I especially love it in the series because I love your characters. Since we play as a girl in your series, it’d be a shame if we couldn’t give any love to our girlfriends.
The only scenarios I could think of in a pool area would be those swimsuits giving out, at least on Luma, because they are holding on for dear life there. But I’ve never seen a swimsuit like this rip apart so I don’t know if that’s even possible. And Leyah’s kinda perverted, maybe she could be particularly frisky and play with Maiko for a little bit.
Thanks for the feedback. Yeah playful yuri is doable. I remembered that I need to look at mika’s umcc lines again, I think she did “health” checks or was going to at some point.
OMG yes please! The school nurse doing health checkups are a staple in anime because, for reasons I don’t understand, a school needs to know how an adolescent girl’s measurements change yearly.
If you need inspiration, check out KissXSis Ep 7 or Maken-Ki! OVA 2. Failing that, pretty much any school based ecchi will have an ep of the girl’s measurements being taken.
Even though I don’t know much about Prof. Mika, it could still work. If not, well then Remi is the school nurse and loves sex so it could be even hotter if she did it.
I saw all of KissXSis but not the other one. I was thinking the heath check is more of Physical education thing so it would be on Mika to do it. yeah i will probably need to re-watch the episode thoguh later.
It was in the second series of KissXSis. The original was OVA included with the manga while the 2nd was televised. It’s tamer but still pretty good
I saw it, not sure I will have body weight and all that stuff but we’ll see. It should be interesting still.
If you had planned on having her do health checks at some point, they never made it into the final game. All I remember about her is coffee. You study hard enough, she makes you coffee. Does she still make coffee in UMCH?
Not yet sure if those mechanics will persist. She will be in the cafe though at times taking about coffee at least at a minimum.
Must agree with others on material 2, it just looks aesthetically better to me. Regarding hentai… i really cant picture anything sex realated on a pool except after hours meetings (aka not realiable), some teasing Maiko on the pool before she get out of water (at least to me feels kinda forced).
To keep it realistic and/or in context maybe just events to hug some girl/distract Luma (dialogue choices) while Kyle takes pictures? (he gets beaten if you fail).
Thanks for the feedback, the problem with Kyle being at the pool is that Luma and Savori would kill him on sight. It is why he is always hiding the locker room. Usually Maiko or Pattie has to take pictures for him. in UMCC Maiko takes the pictures for him.
Pattie takes pictures too? I didn’t even know she was in the photography club. This could actually lead to a fun mini game where Pattie and Maiko take progressively risque pictures of the girls in the school until Kyle picks a winner,
Speaking of Kyle getting beat up, does this school have student based disciplinary committee? While an appropriate analog doesn’t exist in American schools, it’s fairly ubiquitous in anime and would explain why Luma can physically abuse her classmates without repercussions. It could also lead to some light BDSM scenes in the future, which could be hot.
disciplinary action is lead by Instructor Alma but often times falls on Riley as class president. I forgot how the scene goes exactly but in UMCC Alma and Riley show up when Maiko and Savori start fighting over those pics. And Riley gets her out with Kyle’s help. or something like that. Later in UMCC Riley also has the Investigate Complaints miniquests she has Maiko do. Luma is in the student council and seen as a ideal student so she has some freedom to do things and get away with it. When smacking up Kyle for being perverted Riley assumed whatever cause Luma to smack him up is justified.
Pattie and Joey are in the Photography club but not often in the clubroom.
in Umichan Slap it is assumed they begin the Photography club. it show Pattie in there and Kyle say thing like leave it up to him and Pattie to handle photos.
http://spiralvortexplay.com/svp/2013/10/09/umichan-maiko-versus-slap/
lol Yup just as you said i totally forgot that part of UMCC so nevermind. Also, I can understand Maiko taking pictures but why Pattie?
Pattie loves being with Maiko so she will help Maiko with anything.
I’m still not sure how i feel about that aspect of game, i understand Pattie taking photos for herself but giving them to Kyle who sells them?!?… kinda conflicts to the image about protecting girls, restrains and morals… even Maiko, she can sell/give her own photos but someone else it’s just does not fit for me in the image i see her…
would be nice for vortex00 to give some more light on that subject…
The idea is that Kyle often tricks Maiko into taking the pics. He always has some kind of deceptive idea, and Maiko isn’t exactly the smart person around.
And Pattie loves playing pranks. And is always trying to help Maiko with whatever she decides to do. You might need to take a look at umichan slap:
http://spiralvortexplay.com/svp/2013/10/09/umichan-maiko-versus-slap/
also Pattie is prankster her morals don’t kick in until things become out of control.
Also keep in mind that taking pics of random girls tits in UMCC is optional. But in terms of the lore you can assume Maiko takes some for initial money. She only really bad about it and understood what she was doing after savori started flipping out.
having said all that if you think about things in umcc long enough you will see lots of darks things in umcc under all the happiness and sunshine heh. there are several layers to it. and It serves to show how far Maiko will go to get money and to beat Luma. and that is important to understand later on in the story.
Thinking more on Pattie i only see her giving Kyle photos that end up being a tease. Something like natural censor always obstructing intimate parts or the selfie fashion were her own body obstructs the view of delicious parts… I just can see Kyle getting mad for not being able to full nudity but still excited about sexiness of photos…
Maybe from time, but if she always did that her photos wouldn’t be of much use. especially when he as better photos he could sneak and take himself.
1. Prefer the second, nothing special just like it more without the droplets.
2. People have already mentioned stuff like skinny dipping. Maybe it could be a late night deal where some of the students break in to fool around but then stuff gets too heated and an orgy starts.
Or for a yuri thing you could have Kyle find a way to sabotage all the girls swimsuits during practice. Then when they all break Pattie could get super frisky seeing Maiko super exposed and start playing with her right there.
Or you could always have H that isn’t directly related to the swim stuff but just happens to be there. Like finding Tom fooling around with another student or something with the other teachers if that would make sense or even some sex club event that happens during or after class.
3. Roise looks good. Though I always thought that.
Genius! I forgot the old swimsuit sabotage, I mean there’s even swimsuits that disolve on water for those fetishes XD
Thanks of the feedback. some of that can be written into socialize. Reading a lot of this stuff I am starting to remember things I had in mind. Yeah finding Tom there is also possible.
1. I’m all for the wet swimsuits as well, it’s more realistic. Otherwise, i don’t really care much.
2. I don’t see this particular part of the game as having real hentai… well, so long as it’s POV anyway.
If you could have an external camera angle, that would be different. You could always have the choice of having Maiko use a dildo or something, or even have “gattai” races with the “link” between both bodies being… well, you know.
Moot point though, since it’s POV camera. You could, on the other hand, have a possible hentai scene depending on the winner/loser (like a bet). The bet’s choices would depend on your relationship with a character and the level of perversion of said character (if you chose to add a perversion attribute). For exemple, a bet with Luma at the beginning (assuming you go back to her hating Maiko) would have humiliating consequences for the loser. Or financial ones. Like, “loser will have to streak through town naked”, “loser will have to satisfy the boys soccer team”, “loser will have to come to school dog ears, dog tail, dog collar and follow the winner around for a day”, possibly with a leash.
The terms of the bet could change once the relationship is high enough. It could be something “loser has to pay for a fancy dinner date”, “winner gets to fuck loser with a strap-on”, “loser must join winner in her night job”, etc…
For a bet against Savori, the terms could be “loser gives Kyle a blowjob”, if Savori’s level isn’t high enough, she turns the bet down.
To get the boys to participate in the bets, you could either have the possibility to make the swimming club coed at some point, or you could add a public swimming pool to the city. Or have them go swim at the lake.
3. Well, i like the pictures so nothing to say.
Thanks for the feedback. I might not have relationship levels in UMCH because it might not apply to lot of stuff in the game. There will be other stats to raise however like sex level, fitness and melee, and keeping tabs on Maiko’s mood, etc.
I like the idea of wagers. The school pool would be available to all relevant students, but the community pool might be reserved at certain times. If say Joiry or Jeni are there, they could let Maiko use the pool if she can beat them in a race or something. You mentioned that the community pool could level up Maiko faster so having a side quest to activate it would make sense, and as Vld mentioned it could lead to some fun H scenes.