January 4, 2024

21 thoughts on “Umichan Art updates (Albert)

  1. He kinda looks younger. That’s not a problem, though. It’s just something I noticed. It looks good. Is he trying to be seductive? His pose and open top to his shirt give off that vibe. Which fits the character.

    1. He is a bit more smooth looking for a normal expression yeah. He is still creepy but but less obvious. Younger may not be totally intentional. The idea was less creepy.

  2. I think he looks younger because the proportions of the two are different. Old Albert’s torso is 2 1/2 heads tall while the new version is only 2 heads tall. Usually a grown males torso is between 2 1/2 to 3 heads tall. If the drawing is re proportioned i think that would fix the “looking younger” vibe. Also I missed the tongue, it gave Albert a creepy vibe, which is the point of his character.

    1. Thanks I’ll have a look at proportions. I wanted him to not have a resting creep face. The tounge can be part of his other facial expressions.

  3. Yeah, I think if he was reproportioned he wouldn’t look so young. Other than that, it looks great.

  4. Still looks like a perv only doesn’t look like it. But when you look into his eyes, there is some evil attentions.

    1. He will have other faces in his dialogue. Don’t want his normal face to be obviouly sketchy. He is store owner that sells books. Can’t have him looking sketchy 24/7 heh.

  5. He just seems younger looking/ shorter almost as if the age gap between him and Savori got smaller. It’s not exactly a big deal or a bad thing so yeah. It’s a good depiction in this new art style

  6. His new look is way too feminine. He is an adult male – his shoulders should be wider and his waist should be narrower to make him look like one. I think the new Albert looks like a really ugly girl instead of creepy man…

    1. I didn’t want him to have broad shoulders. He was meant to be kinda skinny from the beginning. His waist may still be too thin though. And hands on hips is feminine.

  7. kinda prefer the old look on his face compared to the new one, looking at his new expression doesn’t give of that same creepy weirdo vibe like the old one did

  8. The only gripe i would have is his older design had the square shoulder suit and a more asshole look. But that is digging and i fully like and accept this new one.

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