January 3, 2024

23 thoughts on “Umichan Art updates (Holly)

  1. Lovin all of the new designs man. jeni looks a lot buffer which perfectly suits her character. savori looks awesome and similarly to jeni, hollys new look really seems to work for her character. great work. keep on keepin on 🙂

  2. This one looks too manly, the shoulders are too broad, the forearm and the hands are enormous, I went to check pictures of female athletes (weightlifters, olympic wrestlers and boxers) to compare and even there those traits were unusual specially in Asian females. That needs some work imo.

    1. You know? Forget that, I think it just looks weird to me the fact that a muscular woman has such big breasts. The hands still look a little too big.

  3. Mostly an improvement, never noticed how old Holly’s left forearm+hand was so freakishly small till now, still I would prefer the arms to be less muscular and for the hands to be slightly smaller, anyway keep up the good work.

  4. Its only the overly masculine arms. Everything else works so well but those arms betray her approachable warm feel that she gives off whenever she talks. all that’s needed is a small shave down of the muscles and shoulders to match her body size (not counting breasts) then it would be perfect.

  5. I am as everyone a little disapointed about her body… I rly like ure initiative to remake characters and you did great general improvements (light effects, colors..) and it’s understandable that you want the mother strong as the daughter. BUT, people don’t like this drawing, and I may have an idea about it.
    I’m not a great drawer or something but if I can help with some advices that would be great :

    – decrease the size of shoulders
    – increase a little the size of the hips
    – change the hands or create the shadow of her left one, because it looks like it doesn’t sit on her hips.
    – and the strangest thing and maybe the biggest problem is that you wanted her with a point of view 3/4 but here the bottom part is facing you. Same for shoulders…

    I hope you will read this comment and edit her ! She needs it !

  6. Can’t say I’m a fan of the new Holly.

    I feel her arms are too pronounced and should be softer, especially where her shoulder meets her bicep. Her hands remind me of a gorilla’s, looking much too big for her.
    As Holly’s a mother character of two teenagers, I feel her hips should be a little broader. I know there are moms out there that don’t have very big booties, but I feel making it bigger it would complement her body size better and make her ass look phenomenal in those spanx.

    Her redesigned top is cute, but I preferred how on the old one we got to see more of her nipples. 😉

  7. Arms are overly muscular and the face is too round. I definitely prefer the old one to the new one. To be completely frank, I think the old designs of people didn’t need changing in the first place.

  8. no
    NO
    NOO
    WHY THOSE ARMS
    Even if she is boxers’ mother that doesnt mean she should have same bulky hands
    damn why

  9. This one is fantastic. I love her arms; she’d be strong from having so much sex and working so often in the cafe!

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