Vortex00 
which Remi do you prefer?
1. original
2. shoulder area has reduced width
3. shoulder reduced width and hips thinner
4. still something else to edit (comment)
vote!
http://www.strawpoll.me/14132062
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which Remi do you prefer?
1. original
2. shoulder area has reduced width
3. shoulder reduced width and hips thinner
4. still something else to edit (comment)
vote!
http://www.strawpoll.me/14132062
The 2nd one is the best from these, but for some reason her upper arm’s length bothers my eyes.
I feel the same way, something about the upper arm is wrong. torn between 2 and 3, I think I like 3 more
thanks for the feedback, edited the arm a bit.
2
thanks for the feedback
Personally number 2 as the proportions look more natural than 3, its probably just me but there’s something about the breasts that looks slightly off, not sure if its the areola or how they are positioned, but probably just personal bias.
thanks for the feedback, I didn’t notice what you were seeing that was off about the areolas.
#2
thanks for the feedback
I like the number 3 but the face of the 3 girls are still the same I do not like any of the three face. I like more the face of the old remi. you could do something with the face?.
thanks for the feedback, I will have multiple facial expressions for the characters.
3
thanks for the feedback
If I were to choose, then 3. But the neck feels too small. I I were to compare it to the images on the left and right on the background of this website, I would say her neck feels unnaturally short.
thanks for the feedback. I can liquid edit the neck if it doesn’t match up with too many other characters.
I’m sure I’m in the minority, but I like 1 a lot
Even with the wider shoulder area? I didn’t really notice it at first but yeah imo it did need to be reduced with a bit.
I really like her wider shoulders. It gives her an athletic look.
Number 2! ;3
thanks for the feedback, 2 works for me also.
I prefer the third one, but I agree with others that the face should be made thinner, more like the older art of her. Also, I know I’m probably the only one arguing for it, but I felt that Remi’s dick always sticking out of the bottom of whatever she was wearing was really hot, and would hate to see that disappear.
Liking the old is fine, I really don’t have a problem with it myself. However it was difficult for ttrop to continue drawing in that old style as he worked to improve his art style.
All in all, The old art matches the old art, while the new art needs to match the new art. Remi’s penis will still hang from under her skirts for sure.
they all look amazing! pick which ever one and I wouldn’t mind.. If I had to choose though.. maybe number 2
thanks for the feedback, I liked 2 also
I think her having her broad shoulders would be more realistic since she was originally a male who got an operation (and probably hormones) if I remember. I think 1 is the most realistic but give her more slender arms and a slender face to go with her small waist. At the end of the day it’s a cartoon, where men and women bodies are exaggerated and trans women or futas are usually feminine with some masculine features in real life so that’s left to artist interpretation on whether they want them to be more feminine or masculine or androgynous.
Are you sure Julio? I don’t remember that she was originally a man. I think she was born futa and here Vortex00 wrote this comment here: http: //spiralvortexplay.com/svp/2015/12/21/aria-remi-progress/ that says( ““she” just keeps it simple and she was a she originally. So all of the records on Remi have that. but Remi was designed to be a futa character with no specific gender, so with current Remi I don’t mind the word being interchangeable when in discussion. I’m not no expect on the subject matter so can’t really answer. in ARIA Remi has natural breasts, vagina and penis) or changed it now and remi was a man and not born futa?
I think it was mentioned in ARIA that Bri detected a man with pink hair approaching and instead showed up Remi. Also in the character descriptions I believe that was where it talked about remi getting operations to a perfect body.
waaaay back when Remi was first designed, before remi had any real purpose aside from just being a token futa character to have in this game, she was designed as a man with woman parts. But as the character became more refined it made more sense for her to be a woman with male parts.
If you check things like the Dossier, it refers to Remi as a she.
Also in the Rookie, Remi’s history is explained in detail she is a woman scientist doing an experiment.
In ARIA, Bri is unsure of who the person is coming so refers to her as a he. I might change Bri lines on that part in ARIA so the gender of the person she is detecting is unknown or ambiguous.
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Thank you this makes things a lot more clear. I thought she was referred to as she because she was no longer a man. There is a lot of thought going into these games and it is appreciated. Thank you again.
1
thanks for the feedback
2
But since the shoulder width is reduced but the forearm is still at the same spot, the upper arm looks longer.
Also, I prefer the face to be less chubby.
Other than that, looks good.
thanks for the feedback, the face size is in line with several other characters.
I like number 3. the faces I do not like I would like it to look more like the original remi. I also agree (SerketCity) the remi dick should be bigger if it is not large it is not Remi.
thanks for the feedback, I will have multiple facial expressions for the characters.
2, probably reduce a tad on them manly forearms lol. add the extra meat from the forearms to that sweet futa cock and you got a winner. otherwise i like how clean the new art is, making the girls look thick af and the lines are super clean. love it.
oops, said clean twice. thata was not my intentu lol.
thanks for the feedback, flaccid penis is smaller here but the harden size is the same as the previous version. The arm was edited a bit.
2
thanks for the feedback
of body the number 3 seems better but I think it is necessary to fix a little more the arms . the face for me in generally this new art I do not like not only for Remi but also for other girls, before the girls face was better, as someone wrote in a previous comment his faces was more playfulness and and that was a characteristics I liked of old faces but now for it seem to be clones in the faces with very few variations between the girls and as if you saw a very similar attitude as far as the personality.
look for example Lynn who looked like a cheerful girl, something shy with a touch of innocence change now look a much older girl with a attitude more sexy and reserved , lost that something that characterized her just like Riley before it seemed something coquette with something of tsundere in his face. now she looks like a shy, reserved and cute girl who personally his face looks more boring.
I will have multiple facial expressions for the characters. Also if you look at Remi, Lynn and Riley across several games you will find that Lynn is not always shy, and Riley is not always tsundere, and Remi is not always playful.