I know that most of Joey’s hair is covering her left eye, but right now it looks like she only has one. showing the corner of her eye peeping out from under her hair will make her less cyclopes and more human, very emo, but human never the less.
Am I the only one that thinks her head is to big? actually doesn’t she have a good girl student vibe to her along side the slightly depressed outlook? the poking out belt not tucked in pushes her away from that but that might be the point. idk
Ultimately it is her face and head size that is odd. She no longer has that mildly cute look if she smiled. she just looks like a mope. I have noticed that hair and heads in this style have been very big compared to the previous style. This time its jarring.
But to make this as constructive a comment as i can. Her body and posture is fine and works for her though breast size might be a bit large for her though a push-up bra would be a legitimate reason. Shes missing her little black bow and hair pin. Lastly her skin tone is a little grey and makes her look sick.
one last look a small detail that effects her face in a tiny way but makes a massive difference at a glance. in the older model the cheek on her bang side has a slight curve up and in before being covered by her hair. This gave her a thinner look. The new model doesn’t have that and makes it look fat and too big.
Yeah it possible the head maybe be too big. However I haven’t compared it with other characters yet. it needs to generally match whatever size heads other characters have.
yeah she has a push-up bra under her school clothes.
Yep i hav’t forgot about the hair accessories.
on the face keep in mind she is facing a different direction between old and new. Yeah I will make some tweaks though.
Considering her inferiority complex and envious personality i supposed you would make more of an ugly duckling of her.
Oh, well… that’s better. She deserve some horrible rape scene. The mindbreak/guro kind.
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I know that most of Joey’s hair is covering her left eye, but right now it looks like she only has one. showing the corner of her eye peeping out from under her hair will make her less cyclopes and more human, very emo, but human never the less.
It more common to have the whole eye covered than a little bit showing. Hell I had someone in my class who use to cover both eyes.
I agree looks weird without the eye specially because he hair doesn’t cover the area where the eye would be fully
i had ttrop add a small part of the eye. i’m not sure how i feel about it imo. i will post it later.
amazing redesign, took an average character (imo) and made her a lot more appealing
Glad you like it~
Am I the only one that thinks her head is to big? actually doesn’t she have a good girl student vibe to her along side the slightly depressed outlook? the poking out belt not tucked in pushes her away from that but that might be the point. idk
Ultimately it is her face and head size that is odd. She no longer has that mildly cute look if she smiled. she just looks like a mope. I have noticed that hair and heads in this style have been very big compared to the previous style. This time its jarring.
But to make this as constructive a comment as i can. Her body and posture is fine and works for her though breast size might be a bit large for her though a push-up bra would be a legitimate reason. Shes missing her little black bow and hair pin. Lastly her skin tone is a little grey and makes her look sick.
one last look a small detail that effects her face in a tiny way but makes a massive difference at a glance. in the older model the cheek on her bang side has a slight curve up and in before being covered by her hair. This gave her a thinner look. The new model doesn’t have that and makes it look fat and too big.
Yeah it possible the head maybe be too big. However I haven’t compared it with other characters yet. it needs to generally match whatever size heads other characters have.
yeah she has a push-up bra under her school clothes.
Yep i hav’t forgot about the hair accessories.
on the face keep in mind she is facing a different direction between old and new. Yeah I will make some tweaks though.
Considering her inferiority complex and envious personality i supposed you would make more of an ugly duckling of her.
Oh, well… that’s better. She deserve some horrible rape scene. The mindbreak/guro kind.
https://imgur.com/gallery/T1kbk
wait, what? lol
She totally pissed me off in UMCH.
Especially cause of Zytra and Leyah.
I don’t like her either for the same reason.
Eh, I think I preferred the old one. She used to be kinda cute, but now she just looks like a goth.
The was meant to look like one even in the old one. He underwear and stuff all kind of have that theme.
the eye does not fit, if you put it closer to the nose, it would be great.