Vortex00 
thanks to all who left feedback in the previous post.
http://spiralvortexplay.com/svp/2017/10/12/aria-art-updates-remi-comparison-feedback-requested/
Blow are edits, including picture of discussion topics.
Two and three were close but I went with 2 because it had the most votes at the time I checked it, because of the wider hips, and it was how ttrop drew the hip area initially. Number 3 was an alt edit I figured a number of people might like, and seems many people did, not not as much as I thought.
I did work with ttrop to make minor edits in the arm.
I didn’t see a need to change the face to make the slimmer or change the facial expression. You have to keep in mind I am working closely with ttrop to redesign these characters to fit well with other new characters. You can see the face is on similar size to a redesigned Alma. Also facial expressions can be changed to support the dialogue including the default expression.
Yeah the flaccid penis for Remi is a bit smaller but still will visibly hang down beneath some of her outfits. Also when hard it will resemble the same size as the previous drawings.
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So much that many asked to modify the face and you do not want to change it a little………….disappointed
I liked the body number 3 but the number 2 is not bad
I took into consideration everything that was mentioned, and the reason for it if there was one. Some stuff was changed and some wasn’t.
Some reasons given for the face completely ignored things I found to be extremely important that I explained in this post. Also the face will have different expressions anyway. Including one that more closely resembles the facial expression from the previous art.
i also saw no real need to edit the face myself i do consider the feed back here very important but if i personally can not see the problem it is hard to edit and comparing the face to other girls it looked fine there as well
a question Vortex00 I am somewhat confused with the Remi story. remi born man and then remi changed her gender to futa for an experiment or Remi born futa?.
in the lore Remi is a woman. and alters her body to have a penis to conduct a ongoing experiment. This is explained in The Rookie, during a scene where Yui describes remi’s history to the rookie.
http://spiralvortexplay.com/svp/aria-the-rookie/
and in the post below is where the ideas for Remi was really ironed out in the comments.
http://spiralvortexplay.com/svp/2015/12/22/aria-remi-results/
sorry Vortex00 had not read the answer you gave to Julio
The comments in the Remi results posts goes into a lot more detail about how the lore for Remi was created.
thanks Vortex00 =)
I love her smaller dick. It’ll be great hanging out the bottom of outfits, but I think it could definitely be smaller overall. Not necessarily shota small, but somewhere between the two.
The problem is some find it better smaller, some larger.