Vortex00 Feel free to add socialize idea for the pool stuff here.
The scenes take place next to the pool. And the swim team members can be wet or not wet. Scenes take place to the pool using the BG below.
Other student can be present in a scene as seen in below examples.
Generally, Mika will block Male students from going around the Pool. Cain blocks people outright.
Leyah, Pattie and Roise, wouldn’t care much about boys seeing them at all, the other girls would, and would have varying levels of extremeness depending on the guy in question. Luam and Savori are hostile most of the time.
Girls swim team: (ie. not co’ed swimming)
(not all are present in the picture)
Zytra, Leyah, Luma, Roise, Maiko, Lynn, Savori, Pattie, Instructor Mika.
Savori: Maiko, go check behind the bushes on that side. I’ll do this side.
Maiko: What are we looking for?
Savori: Are you dumb!? Obviously we are looking for the pervert friend of yours!
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Kyle: Ms. Mika I have a note from Alma she told me to bring you.
Mika: Oh~! Let’s see it then Mr. Samoshi
Kyle: Oh I must have dropped It around the pool somewhere. I’ll go look for it.
Mika: Hmm? okay, buuuut make it quick.
Savori: Nice try but you aren’t going anywhere Kyle!
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Pattie: Hmm I’m surprised chu.
Luma: About ?
Pattie: I haven’t seem Kyle anywhere around here today.
Luma: He’s in the infirmary.
Pattie: Hehe, how would you know that?
Luma: Stop asking me so many questions!
Pattie: hehe.
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Leyah: Nyaaaa! this water is freezing nya.
Zytra: Yeah we were going to warm the pool a bit first sis, how are you already wet?
Leyah: Leyah-nyan jumped right in and almost froze herself (sniff)
Zytra: Aww hehe. You have to check the water first Leyah.
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Mika: Some reason you are here Mr. Samoshi?
Pattie: To spy on us, chu.
Kyle: What!? I just need to ask Maiko-chan a question!
Kyle: …
Maiko: Stop staring Kyle…
Mika: You can ask her later.
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Cain: No.
Kyle: But!
Cain: No.
Kyle: I just-
Cain: You just need to just get the hell out of here!
Cain: I’m not letting any male students around the pool while Miss Lynn is swimming.
Kyle: You can block me, I’m a student!
Mika: He has the authority Kyle. You’ll have to come back later.
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Joiry: Yo dude! Move! I need to talk to Luma real quick.
Cain: Not happening. Come back later.
Joiry: What’d you say!?
Cain: As long as Lynn is in the pool, run the show.
Joiry: What the hell dude?
Jinru: Joiry, take my advice and sit this one out.
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Joiry: Yo Mika! Need to talk to Luma real quick.
Mika: Talk to her later Joiry, okay?
Joiry: Ms. I don’t care about tits. I see Luma’s all the time.
Mika: What you do in your free time is your business. What you do here is my business.
Mika: So you will have to come back later.
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Luma: Why are you always around the pool Joiry! You’re almost as bad as that pervert Kyle.
Luma: At least you aren’t sneaking around.
Joiry: Yo babe I need some head.
Luma: Like… Ugh! This so why you boneheads aren’t allowed in here!
Luma: Get out of here before Mika’s see you. Come find me later.
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Lynn: You’re getting better at this Maiko.
Maiko: You too Lynn.
Lynn: who me? Nah I’m terrible at swimming.
Maiko: Huh? You have one of the fastest times here!
Lynn: Most of the agents at the academy are really fast thoguh… way faster than any of us…
Cain: You still have a long way to go Miss Lynn.
Maiko: Geez! they must be really fast swimmers.
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Luma: So why do you get to stand here Cain but other males can’t?
Cain: Sure you want to have this conversation Luma?
Luma: Eh… you’re right, probably not.
Cain: You’ve always had good decision making skills Luma.
Lynn: And still does!
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Cain: Miss Lynn, your technique is off and causing you to loose 0.2 seconds on each lap. Don’t forget what I showed you yesterday.
Zytra: I noticed that too actually, if you angle your arm a bit different on each stroke you will speed some.
Lynn: Ok I’ll try it again. I just need a quick break… I’m exhausted heh.
Maiko: (Geez… hang in there Lynn!)
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Luma: So why doesn’t Riley have to swim?
Cain: She is already faster than all of you.
Luma: What!? That has to be bullshit!
Cain: It isn’t.
Luma: Cain! Don’t fuck with me!
Cain: Luma, you and Miss Lynn have a lot of water drag from your breasts when swimming.
Cain: You need to train to overcome that. Riley doesn’t.
Luma: That’s why!? Because my boobs are big!?
Lynn: Even mine?
Cain: Even yours Miss Lynn.
Lynn: Aww poo…
Luma: Fuck that, having boobs isn’t a bad thing Lynn, we just have to work a little harder in this damn water.
Lynn: yeah…
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Luma: Think you can beat me in a race Cain?
Cain: I’d smoke you.
Luma: Oh ho ho! Big talk!
Lynn: He’s really fast Luma!
Luma: Prove it!
Cain: If you can’t beat Phia you have no chance against me.
Luma: Ugh, now why’d did you have to go and bring up THAT little cunt.
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Luma: Yo nerdlet wanna race?
Maiko: Mmm…my boobs hurt a bit…
Luma: Mine’s do too actually ha ha!
Luma: These swimsuits are the worst for support, fuck!
Pattie: Aww so cute chu~! best fwiends~!
Luma: Like, shut the fuck up Pattiecake. You wouldn’t understand.
Pattie: I will massage your boobs for you chu! I am a masseuse!
Maiko: Good idea Pattie!
Luma: Sure if it helps, you better not be just fucking with me.
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Roise: Oh…Whoops.
Pattie: Sneaky Roise pushing people in the pool hehe.
Roise: Who me? I would never do something so childish.
Luma: ROISE! you are dead!
Roise: Hmm. That sounds like my cue to leave.
Pattie: you’re not going anywhere chu!
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Maiko: Pattie! you got us both wet! That water was still cold.
Pattie: Sowwy senpai… yeah it is cold chu…
Zytra: Need some towels?
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Tsugo: Hmm.. I see.. Not bad not bad at all.
Tsugo: But still, all the girls here seem to have ample cleavage.
Tsugo: I was looking something a bit tamer like my darling Joey’s sweet buttery rolls.
Tsugo: alas… I will need to procure a swimsuit for her and-
Luma: Dude what the FUCK are you talking about! Why are you here!? Get the fuck out of here!
Mika: Something you need Tsugo? If not, you you will need to leave.
Tsugo: I wanted to purchase a swimsuit.
Luma: You can’t buy a swimsuit here dumbass!
Pattie: I’ll sell you mine chu!
Luma: what the fuck!
Mika: Okay okay, settle down. Tsugo I will need to escort you out.
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Maiko: Pattie why are you naked!?
Pattie: I sold some guy my swimsuit chu.
Maiko: What.. what? why?
Pattie: To help senpai with money.
Maiko: You didn’t have to do that Pattie…
Pattie: He was sniffing it down there too hehe.
Pattie: I also let him play with my boobs a bit for extra.
Maiko: Too much info Pattie!
About Author
Here’s a few.
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Kyle: All right… new plan. Hiding in the towel cart will give me the perfect place to hide and the perfect vantage point for photos… eh?! What, why are you here?!
Amber: S-sorry I just wanted to see… uh…
Mika: Kyle! What are you trying to do?!
Kyle: Wait I haven’t gotten to do anything yet! Someone already took my hiding place!
Mika: Amber?… I don’t know if you’re allowed in… If you want to join the swim team I guess that’s fine. But I know that Kyle isn’t allowed here!
Kyle: Don’t worry I’ll just go now…
Amber: Actually I don’t want to join I just… uh…
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Roise: Do you want to hear my trick for getting into cold water?
Leyah: Absolutely! Cat’s hate cold water!
Maiko: Sure, what did you have in mind?
Roise: See you just need to warm up a bit before you dive in, jumping jacks are the best way I’ve found.
Leyah: Nyes! Of course! Here let me try!
Roise: Mmmmm yes that’s good, keep it up.
Maiko: Uhhh Roise I don’t think this is the best idea, my breasts already feel like they’ll fall out!
Roise: Mmmmm… don’t worry Maiko that shouldn’t happen. I’d never let something like that happen to you.
Zytra: Roise are you getting the girls to do inappropriate stuff again?
Maiko: Roise!
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David: Oh no! I’ve been decked so hard I’ve flown outside the gym into the girls pool! This is terrible!
Mika: David what are you doing here?
David: I just said it when I was flying over…
Mika: Look I know it’s tempting to come in and look at the girls but you can’t sneak in like this-
Jeni: David! Get the fuck back here! I’m not done with you!
David: Oh man she’s still pissed…
Mika: Ah… you weren’t kidding about that?!
David: Of course! Why would I lie?!
Mika: ….
David: Oh, yeah. That’s right.
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Savori: Maiko! Over here! Look Tsugo’s trying to perv on us!
Maiko: What? Where?
Savori: Over there! Past the fence with a telescope!
Maiko: Oh! Tsugo what do you think you’re doing!
Tsugo: …. …. ………….. …….!
Maiko: What?! We can’t hear you!
Savori: It doesn’t matter the reason Maiko! He’s being a perv!
Kyle: A telescope! That’s brilliant! Why didn’t I think of that?!
Maiko + Savori: Kyle!
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Nice all these seem to work.That last one reminded me I need to make the post about pattie and her interactions with Maiko in some of these.
I liked the one with Amber, but i think before she starts spying on girls, she should start spying on the Boys team… though, unless you come up with a storyline for Maiko to become the Boys’ Team Manager, you wouldn’t be able to see it.
That way Maiko first realises Amber she’s interested in boys, and realises later that Amber doesn’t just like boys (and would very much like to join Pattie, Leyah, and anyone else in their kinds of fun… if only she wasn’t so shy).
Maiko: Savori your top fell off!
Savori: Thanks Maiko. Good thing Kyle didn’t see anything.
Kyle(from a hidden bush): I definitely didn’t see and/or take any pictures of your tits!
Savori: eeeeeeeeeeh!KYLE!
Makio: He got you. hehe
Savori: Maiko?
Well that’s the best I’ve got…. I suck a scripts
The idea of it is enough to be modified to work thanks
Some more
“Tag team?”
Luma: Hey nerd! I heard your pervert friend asked you a favor…
Maiko: What are you talking about?
Luma: Did he asked you to set a camera on the lockers?
(Bushes behind Maiko): I’d never ask that!
Maiko: As he said… Hey!
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“My album”
Pattie: *sigh* It’s a shame
Maiko: Something wrong?
Pattie: My special album got wet…
Maiko: Aww can i help in any way?
Pattie: Can you come to the photography club later?
Maiko: To repair the album?
Pattie: Posing for the replace pictures XD
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“He was never heard or seen again…”
Cain: You again!
Kyle: Wait! I came to see you (for now)
Cain: What? why?
Kyle: How about this? -show a picture to Cain-
Cain: !!!?? Give me that picture!!
Lynn: *snatches picture* Oh my!
Cain: Don’t look!!
Kyle: How about it, can I go in every now and then?
Lynn: … Cain
Cain: Yes?
Lynn: Call the others, we’ll take Kyle for a walk on the mountains
Lyn: A loooong walk
Kyle: … is that a no?
Somehow, Cain’s reaction makes me wonder what’s in the picture. I mean, he probably would have killed Kyle if it was just a picture of Lynn half-naked, or even naked. Judging from Lynn’s reaction, it’s not a picture of Cain secretly peeping on Lynn…
That just leaves one possibility that would explain why she would want to make Kyle disappear, but not be angry at Cain. Any way we could see that picture?
Yeah I’m not quite following on the last one heh.
You also have to keep in mind I can’t do any action stuff like -show a picture- etc. since the the character are not in motion.
and also can’t any character’s thoughts aside from Maiko since you in her pov.
for examples of how socialize dialogue scenes will work check out this demo:
http://spiralvortexplay.com/svp/2015/11/10/umch-socialize-and-dialogue-demo/
To be fair I didn’t like the last one, for once any way to introduce Maiko felt forced but once she was out it wasn’t as coherent as i expected, I’ll think some more dialogues later after re-cheking the demo
As was kidding… half-kidding about the picture. Much as it would be fun to see it. But even without seeing the picture, maybe knowing what’s on it should be part of the Lynn story line?
Other character’s thoughts is an interesting idea. I doubt mind reading is an aspect of the saboteur khalei but if it was it could lead to interesting gameplay mechanics. It wouldn’t even have to be fully realized since Maiko is barely using her hairpin’s abilities. She could just be having an internal monologue and then someone else’s stray thought could enter her mind.
Maiko: “Strange, i haven’t seen Kyle around lately.”
Jeni: “He’s in the infirmary.”
Savori: “Oh, that’s a relief!”
Maiko: “He is? How would you know?”
Jeni: “I put him there myself.”
Pattie: “Hehe! And what were you two doing in the infirmary-chu?”
Jeni: “… You want to join him, right?”
Maiko: “Pattie? I think you should leave… no Jeni, calm down!!!”
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Maiko: “Hey Riley, wat’s wrong?”
Riley: “Oh Maiko! I heard Cain! He said… he said… HE SAID I DON’T HAVE BOOBS!!!”
Maiko: “What? Cain? When?”
Riley: “He said that was why i was so fast! *sniffle*”
Maiko: “there, there… i like your boobs like they are…”
Tsugo (or maybe Kyle?): “YEAH, ME TOO!”
Jeni: “Get the FUCK OUT OF HERE, PERVERT!”
The last one is pretty funny heh. You have Jeni around the pool i’m not sure she would be there that much with the cafe stuff, sex club, and boxing stuff. So I’ll probably just have Savori or Luma saying some of that stuff.
Yeah, but the gym is located just next to the pool, and Jeni could have decided to take a ten-minute break, and either sunbath or take a quick dip for herself. Agreed it shouldn’t happen that much, though.
Another few.
Roise: Since Mika’s dealing with the peepers and Zytra is out. I’m going to start us out today.
Leyah: Nya! Sounds fine to me, what do we do first?
Roise: First you got to stretch your legs out, so just spread your legs out and try touching your toes.
Maiko: Mhmmm, uh?! Roise my swimsuit doesn’t seem to like this stretch.
Roise: Oh that’s fine, here I’ll help you out.
Maiko: Eh?! That’s not helping I can’t concentrate with you touching me there.
Roise: This is a part of the swim team Maiko, you have to learn to handle distractions even as strong as this to be successful here.
Maiko: Eh? Ok… I’ll try.
Leyah: Nya, Roise is such a liar. You don’t pick on anyone else like that, only Maiko.
Roise: Shhhhhh Leyah…
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Kyle: Uh! Roise hey you don’t need to say anything right?
Roise: Hmmm, I might not need to. But you’d have to give me something first.
Kyle: Well, my camera’s worth a lot. But could you let me take the memory card first?
Roise: I don’t care about money, I’ll just take your clothes.
Kyle: Clothes-! What?! You’re some kind of freak aren’t you!
Roise: Maybe, do you want to get dragged to the principal’s office? Or strip down for little ol’ me?
Kyle: Alright, alright! Here I’m doing it…
Roise: Mmmm, good, good. I’ll take those of you.
Kyle: Ugh.. it’s cold here now… wait if I get caught now I’ll really be dead!
Roise: I suppose you would, better not get caught again.
Kyle: …I’m going to die here aren’t I.
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Mika: Tom! Not your too!
Tom: Not me what? I’m just here to tell you that Nathan’s looking for you.
Mika: Oh! Oh I’m so sorry there’s just so many boys coming in here to look at the girls I just…
Tom: It’s fine I understand. Just remember to talk to Nathan later.
Somehow i can totally imagine Roise doing the exact same thing as Kyle… Unlike him, i doubt she’d ever get caught. Probably why she managed to catch him off guard so easily.
Either Mika’s very naïve, or so doesn’t know her coworkers that well, because of course he used that excuse to spy on the girls. Probably didn’t lie too, and he must have been quite eager to “help” Nathan, since this gave him the perfect excuse.
Here’s another few.
Leyah: Nyaaaaa!
Zytra: Hey get your hands off my sister!
Roise: Hmm? What it’s no different from what I usually do.
Zytra: It is when it’s my sister!
Roise: Oh, well can I play with Maiko?
Zytra: Sure…
Maiko: Zytra!
Zytra: Well you’re new to the club so you should be helping out your seniors.
Maiko: Aw, I thought I could get away from this in an all girl’s club…
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Maiko: Roise why do you always pick on me?
Roise: Well you’re much cuter when you’re being played with.
Maiko: But you always play with me, nobody else.
Roise: Luma’s too rough, Pattie’s too willing and Leyah is Zytra’s sister.
Maiko: What about Savori?
Roise: Uh… Savori is special. I don’t play with her and neither should you.
Maiko: What?! I wasn’t planning on that!
Roise: I figured as much, I just wanted to be sure.
Maiko: (She got serious so suddenly, I didn’t think Roise could even have a reaction like that.)
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Savori: Ms. Mika! I found him, I found the peeper.
Kyle: Hey it’s me again.
Mika: Kyle? *Sigh* Let me get the principal again.
Savori: Hang on Ms. Mika, the principal’s office isn’t good enough for him.
Mika: Maybe but what else would we do?
Savori: Well… maybe we can castrate him. Like stomp on his balls until he stops wanting to come here!
Kyle: Uh… I should hate that but it sounds kinda hot…
Savori: Ewwww!
Mika: I’ll just take him to the principals office, if we think of something else we can do it then.
These have been really good thanks. Roise is the “nice” passive aggressive bully heh. I like it.
I wonder what Leyah thinks about her sister’s over-protectiveness. I mean she is almost as much a hentai as Pattie, so Zytra’s “help” might not be welcome.
I wonder how much is Roise aware of, concerning Savori.
finished swim socialize for now. everything posted so far is in the game. some of it was moded a bit but nothing too major.