Vortex00 
http://spiralvortexplay.com/svp/category/text/script/
this is for boxing dialogue ideas. since I am in a bit of a rush I don’t have any to post right now but I will add it later.
For those with ideas these are some things to note:
Boxers include, Joiry, David, Jeni, Maiko, Pattie and Luma
Maiko often practices with Pattie
Luma is there in full boxing attire but doesn’t box, she just wears it to be cute and hang around the jocks.
For Maiko to win in beating Luma in boxing she needs to beat Jeni.
Luma or any other ARIA agent character can’t participate in boxing (Riley, Lynn, Jinru).
Tom is the club supervisor
Tom is humble and if taunted wont accept any bait
Luma can sympathize with maiko when she say her boobs hurt
Joiry and David hang around this club often
Jeni gets duper defensive if the guys are too rough with Maiko or Pattie.
Jeni secretly like that more girls are leanring how to fight.
Savroi hangs around here sometimes to hang out with Jeni (and be safe from Kyle).
Pattie is always playing pranks on Joiry and David
Amber is around be she likes talking to Pattie and Joiry
Joey sometimes comes by to get stuff for the school paper
Jinru is sometimes there because he is bored.
About Author
“Worth a nosebleed?”
Pattie: Hehehe Maiko check this…
Maiko: ??
Pattie: Hey guys come here a second!!
Joiry: What is it?
David: Hi girls what’s up?
Pattie: Would you like a steeeaming special service worth a nosebleed right here?
Maiko, David & Joiry: HUH?!
David: U-umm… maybe?
Joiry: Get real it must be another stupid prank…
Pattie: So it’s a no?
David & Joiry: … no?
Pattie: Hey Jeni!! These two say you look so hot and sexy on boxing attire they get hard every time you punch them!
Jeni:Say what!? Come here you freaks!!
David: RUUUUUUN!
Joiry: I… HATE… YOU…
Thanks for the idea, might have to modify it bit heh.
David: Yo bro co-ed boxing is the best…
Joiry: I don’t know bro, hitting chicks? It just feels weird to me.
David: What do you mean? Seeing them in shorty shorts, sneaking in gropes in the match and hearing their little moans the whole time. It’s the fucking best!
Joiry: Uh… Bro you may want cool it.
David: Why would I cool it man? It’s great I’m up against Maiko next and-
Jeni: What the hell is so great?!
David: Ah! Sis! It ain’t nothing!
Jeni: Sure didn’t sound like nothing, it sounded like you were a fucking creep again!
Joiry: Sorry bro I tried to warn you…
———————————————-
Luma: Hey everybody! *smooch* *smooch*
Joiry: Hey Luma what the fuck! You aint supposed to get flirty with nobody but me.
Luma: I wasn’t getting flirty, you’re just imagining things.
Joiry: Making kissy noises definitely counts as flirty Luma.
Luma: Well I was just trying to get something set up for us later is all…
Joiry: Later with them?
Luma: Yeah y’know, with Jeni and her friends.
Joiry: Oh, Oh! Yeah O.K. that aint so bad after all.
—————————————————————
Joiry: Oh hey smaller girlie, this ain’t no anime library what are you doing here?
Amber: Well… with so many sweaty muscly guys… what girl wouldn’t want to be here?
Joiry: Yeah I can see that. Say could you do me a solid and keep an eye on Luma if you can? I’d ask David but he’s getting his ass beat by his sis right now.
Amber: Sure thing… what do you want me look for?
Joiry: Just see if she’s doing funny stuff with the other guys here, I’ve been hearing some rumors and I don’t like the sound of em.
Amber: O.K. I can handle that fine.
Joiry: Thanks, and if you want a solid you just come find me. You hear?
Amber: Really? I might have something to ask you if that’s the case…
Joiry: Sure anything, as long as it don’t get me in jail or nothing.
————————————————————————————
Pattie: Maiko you’re shaking, what’s up?
Maiko: I’m just nervous is all. I’m getting paired with Jeni and she’s really… scary.
Pattie: Chu, she’s not that scary. In practice she only hits people with the air from her punches.
Maiko: The air?
Pattie: Yeah, her actual fists would cause serious injury. So she has to keep back and just use the air. The last time she actually punched someone they had to rebuild that wall over there.
Maiko: She punched through the wall?!
Pattie: Yeah that was just an accident though, last time she got mad an entire sidewalk got ripped apart.
Maiko: A sidewalk?!
Jeni: Alright Maiko are you ready?
Maiko: Waaaaah!
Jeni: Are telling lies about me again Pattie?!
Pattie: Maybe one or two…
Ten says Amber doesn’t find the guts to “collect”, considering the kinds of “solids” she’s now interested in. She’s way too shy to take te first step. Now if Maiko, Leyah or Roise heard that conversation, they may help her with that. Okay, Leyah and Roise would definitely help her. Maiko might try to keep her “innocent”. Or Leyah may convince her to work in the café, and take part in the “Specials”. Experiment with different “solids”.
adding all this stuff to he game atm. plus some some stuff I will write myself.
it funny because I get the solid joke but I just realized the irony of the whole conversation. He is asking to see if Luma was cheating and in the process he basically offered amber his “solid”.
I will make a few scenes with Roise. Starting to get a few ideas for Lynn, Leyah, and Dizzy especially. Dizzy is always easy to write heh.
good stuff, thanks for the ideas
Maiko: Eugh!
Jeni: Last time I’ll say it Maiko, keep the hands up here in front of your face! Not limp in front of you.
Maiko: Okay, is this right.
Jeni: Better, now get your feet moving! Don’t just stand there and get hit!
Maiko: Okay!
Jeni: And unlock those elbows! Who the hell taught you to fight?!
Maiko: Well Tom and Pattie gave me some-
Jeni: Well they did a shit job! Listen to me and get your stance right!
Maiko: (Wow, Jeni is really intense to spar with. I hope this helps me out faster…)
—————————————————————————————————-
David: I got to say bro, this is without a doubt the tightest predicament I’ve ever been in.
Joiry: Don’t worry bro, were going to get out just fine. We just need to step slowly over to coach’s office.
Tom: Why are you two waddling so close together like that?
David: Coach help! Someone tied our trunks together!
Tom: What? How would that even happen?
Joiry: No idea coach but we can’t even move without almost touching dicks or losing our shorts.
Tom: Why do you need my help specifically? Didn’t you ask someone out there for help?
David: Yeah, all the dames just laughed.
Tom: *sigh* Hang on, maybe I got some scissors or something that can cut you apart.
Joiry: That’s fine coach, just be careful. We’re dealing with sensitive cargo here.
———————————————————————————————————-
Maiko: Wow Mr. Tom, where did you learn moves like these?
Tom: Well I learned a lot of different martial arts in my youth and most of them just kind of blended together. Karate, Jiu Jitsu, Capital H, even some wrestling techniques.
Maiko: That’s alot! How do you remember all those?
Tom: Well in theory most fighting styles work the same, they just have different ideas on how to deal with the problem in front of you.
Maiko: That sounds complicated…
Tom: It isn’t when you get down to it, if you’d like after school sometime I can show you some holds I can’t show you here…
Maiko: Oh! Uh, I’ll have to check about that later. But thanks for the offer.
Tom: Understandable, just remember the offer’s on the table.
Maiko: (The way he said that last sentence didn’t sound right, and whys he trying to teach me holds when I need to box…)
—————————————————————————————————————-
Joey: Mr. Tom I need to get some info on the boxing team for the school paper, do you have a minute.
Tom: Well, we are in practice but a minute should be fine.
Joey: Alright, so you’ve been accepting some new ladies for what is now a co-ed team. Do you have any concerns of the men abusing the girls in the ring?
Tom: Well boxing does have more physical contact than most sports, but it is still a sport with rules and regulations on what can be done in the ring. As long as those are enforced I see no future problems.
Joey: …….. O.K. Well we’ve also gotten some anonymous tips that you’ve been harassing some of the said female students in your team. Is there any truth to that?
Tom: ….Well I can safely say that I’ve never done such a thing to any of my students at practice. What does that-
Joey: Thank you Mr. Tom, we’ve gotten what we need.
Tom: Wait? That was it?
Joey: Yes, you’ll see the results in next week’s issue.
Tom: …Jeez, that’s one shrewd reporter, what kind of report is she running on the team anyway?
good stuff lol. Yeah Joey is vicious.
Maiko: Wow, Jeni you’re good. How is Luma tougher than you?
Jeni: We’re closer than you’d think but I can’t get as rough as I’d like in a boxing ring and that leaves me handicapped enough for her to read me like a book. Last time we matched up I couldn’t even touch her.
Maiko: Seriously!? Not even once?
Jeni: Yeah, she doesn’t try to hit you hard. She just gets in your head and always stays just out reach of your swings.
Maiko: Wow… I don’t know how I could beat that.
Jeni: Well, you both have the same weakness with your breasts. Maybe you could use that?
Maiko: I don’t know about that, it really hurts getting punched there.
Jeni: It’s your beatdown Maiko…
———————————————————-
Pattie: One, chu, two, chu, three, chu-
Maiko: Why do you keep saying that?
Pattie: I always say that Maiko,
Maiko: Yeah but it sounds weird at practice, like my punches are kisses or something.
Pattie: They are your kisses Maiko, you need to give your opponents so much love that they can’t handle it and give up.
Maiko: I actually think the punching option would be a better alternative with Luma…
Pattie: Maybe, Pattie chu heard some rumors about that too…
————————————————————————
Luma: Nehehehe, look at the losers here.
Maiko: Luma we’re trying to practice here!
Luma: Practice what? Getting your face punched in? There’s no way you can punch anyone out, especially me~
Pattie: Just ignore her Maiko, you’re doing good.
Maiko: Yeah you’re right…
————————————————————
Maiko: Mr. Tom, could you please spar with me for a while?
Tom: Sorry Maiko, no can do.
Maiko: Eh? Why not?
Tom: It’s too dangerous for a beginner like you to be fighting someone as experienced as me.
Maiko: Oh, that makes sense. Sorry…
Tom: It’s fine, I can teach you and I can even give you some private instruction but sparring is out of the question.
Maiko: Oh… Alright that sounds fine.
—————————————————-
Maiko: I don’t know Pattie, I think I need some more practice. I don’t think going with you and Jeni is going to be enough.
Pattie: Chu, and Tom won’t spar with you either. Do you think the other guys will be interested?
Maiko: David and Joiry? Probably not, but I do know something they’d be interested in…
Pattie: I understand chu, let me know if there’s anything I can do to help.
Maiko: Thanks Pattie, I just might take that offer.
nice additions~
At first I wasn’t sure about Jeni not being to touch Luma, but after thinking about it a bit, it does serve to explain how she sometimes is left responsible for guarding Lynn when Cain and Yui is unavailable. Not to mention her position on being the team leader. It would be good to eventually be able to finish more of the VN to explain more about that whole setup.
Thanks, I thought to make some to closer to the main plot. Hope I’m close to what’s planned.
Also a couple more while I’m at it.
————————————————————————————-
Maiko: Hey Joiry, do you have any secrets to fighting?
Joiry: Uh, don’t get hit and hit really hard? That’s all I do.
Maiko: Well it isn’t that simple is it?
Joiry: Course it is, complicated shit’s for nerds. Guys like me are the ones punching, get it?
Maiko: I think so…
Joiry: Yeah, don’t overcomplicate it, just hit them hard and don’t get hit.
Maiko: That’s actually pretty good advice, thanks Joiry.
Joiry: Yeah whatever.
—————————————————————–
Maiko: Hey David could you tell me a bit on how you fight?
David: Huh… I guess I could fix up your stance a bit. Here let me show you.
Maiko: David!… That’s too close…
David: Here, spread those legs wide and lean forward for me.
Maiko: David… stop rubbing like that.
David: Shut up, and move your tits out of the way. Here let me show you how.
Maiko: David! Stop it, or I’ll scream for Jeni!
David: Fine, fine, but if you want some real advice from me. You’re going to need to give me some of that after practice.
Maiko: You’re such an asshole David…
——————————————————————————
Amber: ………………
Pattie: Trying to measure them from here?
Amber: Pattie?! When did you start standing here?!
Pattie: Long enough to know what you’re doing, you know I can give you some hints.
Amber: Hints?
Pattie: Yeah, I’m pretty sure that Joiry’s bigger than David but Tom is way bigger than the both of them.
Amber: Bigger? How much bigger?
Pattie: Maiko said she felt him hitting her baby spot.
Amber: Ooo… that must’ve felt amazing.
Pattie: That’s what she said but you can’t get too excited. You have to build yourself up to guys like that.
—————————————————————————-
Savori: Hey Jeni! You kicking ass in here?!
Jeni: The hell?! Course I am, that’s all I do here.
Savori: Good to here, I could use a good show.
Jeni: Well you’re going to get one, but shouldn’t you be at swimming. Why do you have time for me doing this?
Savori: We’re off today, but I don’t feel like heading home yet.
Jeni: Alright then grab some popcorn but you owe me a drink afterward. No show is free.
Savori: Fine but only if you win.
Jeni: No problem, just you watch.
——————————————————————-
Tom: Excuse me are you here for the club?
Amber: Uh… no, I’m just here to watch is all.
Tom: To watch? Well I don’t think that’s against any rules. Just let me know if you change your mind.
Amber: O.K….. uh…. you know you’re pretty h-handsome…
Tom: Hm? What was that?
Amber: Nothing! I didn’t say anything…
Lynn: Be sure to do you’re best Maiko-san!
Maiko: Thanks Lynn!
David: Yo Lynn wanna box? he he!
Lynn: No thanks I’m not allowed to.
David: scared?
Cain: She’s not allowed to because she would probably accidentally injure you.
David: Say what!? Hell No fucking way!
Lynn: T- That isn’t true at all!…
____________________________________________________________
Alma: Maiko, how are you doing?
Maiko: Miss Alma, what brings you here?
Alma: Just needed to speak with Mr. Belvedere about some stuff.
Tom: Ha Alma. Just admit you are only here to check up on Maiko.
Alma: Well that is concern I have also.
Maiko: Hehe I am fine.
Pattie: Don’t worry I am watching senpai!
Alma: Don’t get beat up too much ok?
____________________________________________________________
Alma: Here we are.
Jeni: Mom?
Holly: Jeni my darling daughter~ Why don’t you introduce me to your hunky coach ?
Jeni: Please mom, you know who Tom is.
Tom: Haha Holly what brings you here?
Holly: Just delivery service~
Tom: Delivery!?
Alma: *Ahem*
Holly: Just kidding of course~
____________________________________________________________
Maiko: Know anything about fighting Jinru?
Jinru: Hm. You have a weak left guard.
Jinru: You leave you arm exposed for too long when punching.
Jinru: You have a unstable leg position.
Jinru: A lot of your movement is influenced by your breasts.
Maiko: They they just wont stay still sometimes…
Jinru: That’s not a excuse. Luma and others I know get’s it right.
Maiko: How ?
Jinru: How should I know ? Go ask her.
____________________________________________________________
Maiko: Hey Dizzy, what brings you here?
Dizzy: I got scared and came in here where it is safe…
Maiko: Hehe. Don’t worry we will protect you from the aliens. There’s lots of strong fighters in here.
Dizzy: Thanks.
____________________________________________________________
Dizzy: S- Stay away! I know something comes out of your arm when you punch!
Jeni: What the hell are you talking about ?
Jinru: It is possible Dizzy can see feint traces of Khalei.
Jeni: I ain’t got no damn kah ley or whatever
Jinru: Everyone has Khalei Jeni.
____________________________________________________________
David: Daaaaaayyuuuumn! Who the hell is THAT!
Lynn: Yui? Hehe she is too old for you David.
Yui: Aww don’t worry I have a lot of experience in bed at least~
Lynn: *gasp* Yui!
Yui: I know I know just kidding around.
David: Holy shit no I am horny as hell.
Yui: Ha! Seriously that’s all it took?
____________________________________________________________
Maiko: Pattie!? Why are you naked! Here of all places!
Pattie: It is easiest to sell my dirty gym clothes here senpai.
Maiko: You don’t need to sell your clothes for me Pattie!
Pattie: It’s ok, I get more for free.
Tom: *Ahem* miss Patterson where are you clothes? I will need to escort you to Mika.
Pattie: See senpai?
Maiko: Geez Pattie…
____________________________________________________________
Roise: Hmm hmm mmmmm~ any moment now.
Maiko: What are you up to this time Roise?
Roise: What ever do you mean Umiya-san?
Maiko: I know you are up to something Roise!
Roise: Me? nah.
Maiko: Wait what what’s that sound?
Jeni: DAVID! Who’s panties are these!
Roise: La la la~
David: What the fuck!? I don’t know!
Jeni: you DO know!
Maiko: Roise please tell me you have on panties…
Roise: Maybe I do, maybe I don’t~
____________________________________________________________
Tom: Ah~!… Ah! Maiko you are early. good, ready to p- practice?
Maiko: Roise? What are you doing here?
Roise: Me? Just enjoying the show.
Maiko: Why are you standing in front of Mr. Tom like that?
Roise: Who me? No reason~
Roise: Good luck out there Maiko.
Maiko: …Thanks?
____________________________________________________________
Maiko: Hey Chris. Thinking about boxing?
Chris: Yeah I was thinking about it but I’m not so sure.
Maiko: Why not?
Chris: I don’t have all those muscles like everyone else.
Maiko: Maybe you can just start by working out some then.
Chris: yeah maybe.
Maiko: You can work out with me if you want.
Chris: R- Really? sure I guess.
____________________________________________________________
Savori: Look Maiko, Tom is asleep!
Maiko: Hehe. Poor guy. He is must have been really tired.
Savori: Haha yeah.
Maiko: Savori it nice to see you happy about something. You always seem so mad or depressed.
Savori: Don’t ruin the moment Maiko.
Maiko: Oh… sorry.
Savori: …
Maiko: Hey, want to tickle him?
Savori: Good idea Maiko!
____________________________________________________________
Jeni: What the hell this guy isn’t even awake!
Jeni: Do I have to do everything around here?
Maiko: He looks really peaceful thoguh.
Jeni: You just get to practicing Maiko. I’ll watch the room.
____________________________________________________________
Maiko: Hey Riley. What brings you here?
Riley: Oh, I was just looking for Dizzy. She comes in here sometimes.
Maiko: Something wrong?
Riley: Not to be mean, but there is something always wrong with her.
Maiko: Yeah…
Riley: It’s doesn’t look like she is here, so I gotta run. See ya!
Maiko: Oh ok, see ya.
____________________________________________________________
Tsugo: Hm so this is what girls are after?
Roise: And just what is that?
Tsugo: Dimwitted meat packs.
Roise: Well it depends on the kind of meat packing you are talking about.
David: Who are you calling a meat pack scrub!
Tsugo: So unsophisticated!
finished boxing socialize for now. everything posted so far is in the game. some of it was moded a bit but nothing too major.