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Trainer: Yui – Yellow
Captain: Luma – Blue
Riley – Red
Lynn – Green
Rookie – Yellow
A team of special agents in training who attend both Nanako and the Academy. Luma’s skill outclasses Lynn and Riley but a lot, so she was initially upset they were grouped together only because they attend both schools. However she eventually grew to like them over time. After becoming friends, Riley and Lynn began to close to skill gap between themselves and Luma and now all of them are incredibly capable at their roles. With a vacant spot in the group they took on a rookie agent. Yui hopes being on this team will accelerate his training.
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Hmm Riley’s got red khalei? I mean people with red khalei are more aggressive and have strong sex drive like Phia or Roy, but Riley is neither of those. Is there a reason for that?
Red khalei doesn’t effect a persons sex drive. it seems to be some confusion over this, i think because you mostly see Phia or horny characters with red khalei. But it doesn’t really have anything to do the the khalei itself. Also the pert in the rookie where TT talks about red khalei is meant to imply if a person wanted they could thrust in and out fast during sex.
more information on khalei including red khalei can be found here:
http://spiralvortexplay.com/svp/2018/08/07/all-about-khalei/
I see and i read the post too thanks for clearing it up.
Isn’t that the Rookie?
Look like a 12yo overly ripped kid.
Yes that is the Rookie.
At least for the time being.
I think the Rookie looks fine, but have you ever thought of giving the player the hability to choose how the Rookie looks like? I mean, when the Rookie was a main character we never saw how he looked like
I have. however with this engine, it is much easier said than done. Let me focus on getting more of the game done then I can revisit the idea.
Probably not my place to say, but have you considered giving the Rookie the classic hair/shade covers the eyes look to give his appearance more of an open to interpretation aspect? Given that he was originally an undefined protagonist and all.
I’m not super fan of the eyes either but it’s hard to have him totally undefined. This is more of a commander Shepard from mass effect default look. I think at best I can have his appearance selectable. I’ve even had suggestion to have a female alternate version for The Rookie also. I don’t want to over complicate it so we’ll see. But any changes to the rookie will need to be addressed later.
I think the easiest solution for the rookie look is to make a character with a hood or mask covering the face.Mask is more interesting since he or she can be given a back story on why they wear a mask.
I have a tendency to not use characters with objects on the face, so I don’t want to do that for the Rookie. Tbh I’m considering just defining him at the beginning of the game like I did in Umichan Sentoryu. Having a character who’s appearance is open to interpretation runs into a lot of issues when playing as other characters that need to talk to him.