I can’t quite explain it, but something looks kind of……off-putting about his face now. Almost unnerving in a way. I honestly prefer the old David to this one.
i see the problem with the face that face is a little too round for someone as fit as him on his right side and his left side seems to have a depth problem and by that i mean it’s very hard to see there is depth to it
Yeah, his face needs a bit of a change but the rest of him looks good.. packs a lot more down there too.
I’m not a fan of the new face either, I’m sorry. 🙁 I guess in my opinion he looks a bit too “cute” for his character. The dude is a jackass, so he needs to have the kind of face you can hate. The new face kinda looks like the face of a kid who is TRYING to be mean but may not really be succeeding. I’m sorry for being so critical, but you asked for feedback! D:
I never said he was ugly. Nor did I say to make him ugly. I just said he needs the kind of face you can hate. Attractive people can have hate worthy faces.
I think everything on the new one is fine… besides his eyebrows. Its kind of weird (in my opinion at least) how his eyebrows start so thick and then get so thin towards the end
Honestly just need to fix the eyes. Right now he’s crosseyed, can be fixed by having him looking up past his brow (menacing) or making the eyes less wide.
Everything else is a massive improvement, he looks like a badass 90s shonen anime hero!
His face looks more immature to me now, I don’t know if its the shape or if the eyes are just bigger in ratio to his face or his eyebrows. He just doesn’t look as badass anymore.I wouldnt expect a face like that to beat someone up lol. He just looks like a mischievous kid. The body is fine, actually its better.
The old one looks tougher and suits more his role in the UMCH. You can clearly read his character from his face and his guard, and new one looks a bit unnatural and dumb, that’s what I read from his face. Hope this helps.
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I can’t quite explain it, but something looks kind of……off-putting about his face now. Almost unnerving in a way. I honestly prefer the old David to this one.
you can’t be serious…
I’m still trying to place what I don’t like about David’s new look, and I’m drawing a blank other than “it makes me a little unnerved.”
I like everything from the neck down, the placement of his shirt/vest and all that, but there’s just something I dislike about his face.
whatever issues you see in the new face, the old face has a lot more problems for sure heh.
i see the problem with the face that face is a little too round for someone as fit as him on his right side and his left side seems to have a depth problem and by that i mean it’s very hard to see there is depth to it
Yeah, his face needs a bit of a change but the rest of him looks good.. packs a lot more down there too.
The pants are just loose.
Honestly I think the only real issue with the newer artwork is slightly incorrect spacing and proportions on faces and hands, rest is good
nothing a liquid tool cant fix. idk if the hands will be adjusted.
I’m not a fan of the new face either, I’m sorry. 🙁 I guess in my opinion he looks a bit too “cute” for his character. The dude is a jackass, so he needs to have the kind of face you can hate. The new face kinda looks like the face of a kid who is TRYING to be mean but may not really be succeeding. I’m sorry for being so critical, but you asked for feedback! D:
new face is stylized for sure. Not trying to purposefully make him ugly though.
I never said he was ugly. Nor did I say to make him ugly. I just said he needs the kind of face you can hate. Attractive people can have hate worthy faces.
not sure how to translate that into this drawing though heh. hate a face or not differs from person to person.
http://spiralvortexplay.com/svp/2017/03/05/umichan-art-updates-david-pt-2/
Remember last time art for UMCH was updated and nobody really cared how the guys looked? Guess some things change
Even the dudes having nipples matters now heh
I think everything on the new one is fine… besides his eyebrows. Its kind of weird (in my opinion at least) how his eyebrows start so thick and then get so thin towards the end
ttrops style, probably due to too much kill-la-kill art heh
Honestly just need to fix the eyes. Right now he’s crosseyed, can be fixed by having him looking up past his brow (menacing) or making the eyes less wide.
Everything else is a massive improvement, he looks like a badass 90s shonen anime hero!
thanks for the feedback. yeah i will have a look at the eyes.
His face looks more immature to me now, I don’t know if its the shape or if the eyes are just bigger in ratio to his face or his eyebrows. He just doesn’t look as badass anymore.I wouldnt expect a face like that to beat someone up lol. He just looks like a mischievous kid. The body is fine, actually its better.
Prefer old David a lot more than new one. :/
Thanks for the feedback. It helps to give reasons why you like the old one better.
The old one looks tougher and suits more his role in the UMCH. You can clearly read his character from his face and his guard, and new one looks a bit unnatural and dumb, that’s what I read from his face. Hope this helps.
Cheers!
Did you see the post with facial updates?
http://spiralvortexplay.com/svp/2017/03/05/umichan-art-updates-david-pt-2/