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As you may or may not know, mostly all of my games are part of a overall larger story. Umichan, ARIA, and other stuff all makes up a single story when you put everything together. I refer to this as the “overall story” or JLCK, journey of the legendary crystal Khalei. This hopefully will make sense after reading the outline.
If you don’t want to know the general idea of what happens later on I would not recommend reading the rest of this. This post is for those that want to better contribute ideas or ideas for games that fit in with the overall story so this kind of a outline of what happens. Also keep in mind this this is mostly the main story. There are several side story stuff that can be added to this is for various side characters. It jsut needs to fit in with the main story. So that is why I typed a outline of it here so people know what happen in the main story.
This also serves as a timeline you can follow to play game or view content in a linear order. the order is from top to bottom, with top being the earliest thing that happens in the story line.
Crystal Hunter
http://spiralvortexplay.com/svp/2015/08/02/ralamar-crystal-hunter-playthrough/
A very old game I made that is mostly outdated in relation to the newer content. The only relevant things to take from crystal hunter is that the character Samantha had a crush on Donavik. And that she swallowed a ice/water elemental khalei crystal while being trapped in a cave in. Also important is that there it is possible creatures/entities can be born from certain ancient Khalei. A this point no GemCo scientist believes this. However Samantha swallowed a very old khalei crystal where a entity know as a Cia was created and lying dormant. If I get time I will remake this into a small VN story with things changed but the stuff I described that is important will remain the same.
Semitix
http://spiralvortexplay.com/svp/2015/08/02/the-semitix/
Semitix serves to describe some of strange phenomena that is happening in the world/universe the characters are in, and just how little they still know about khalei. on a trip to a Khalei cave it collapses in similar way as in Crystal hunter. Samantha using dormant Cia power unconsciously physically created a entity Annie to protect Donavik from the cave in. Donavik also touched another old khalei crystal that opens up portals to other realms. One being a purgatory realm and the other being the realm where Annie is from. On one of the realms donvaik meets various demons who cast judgement all to come to that realm. He manages live from their attacks and is required to cast judgement on Annie. Donavik refuses and manages to defeat demons with the help of his allies. he realized from the main demon judge aka Semitix, that he is Sixxe, which basically means it is next to impossible to defeat you while you are in company of allies. Since Annie was created form some of Samantha emotions Samantha Crystal inside her began to literally freeze her until she come into contact with part of Annie again. This phenomena is unexplained. Also in Semtiix professor Light get taken into custody by GemCo. he a very prominent professor in Khalei and Futurist who is very outspoken against GemCo and their practices. So yeah basically in semetix a lot of crazy shit happens with demons and other dimensions etc. all created from coming contact with certain old Khalei.
Agent Trainer
http://spiralvortexplay.com/svp/aria-agent-trainer/
This game lightly describes school life for student training to be agents, and shows some of the different areas at Rinoga’s GemCo academy. The new agent recruits are hand picked by Phia. It also shows how some of the trainers and executives exploit female recruits for sex which is something that pisses Rinoga off and one of the many reasons why she wants the school to fund itself.
Amp Side story
http://spiralvortexplay.com/svp/aria-amplitude-story-full-v2-1/
This is a small story on a GemCo raid to disrupt their training of new agents and free them from being sexually exploited by executives or trainers. It is also to steal GemCo weapons to use them against them later. The main thing to understand here is that Amp get captured in this raid. And after that her body was cloned in various experiments to improve their agents genetic traits.
Daughter of Eve
http://spiralvortexplay.com/svp/2014/07/30/daughter-of-eve/
This picks up where Semitix left off. After the craziness of Semtiix is behind the for mow, they set of to look for a odd person the semtiix describes is needed to free it from the purgatory world and defeat the people who unjustly trapped it there. The person is later found out to be Gheist a little lost girl from annie’s realm. She has the ability to create a very rare kind of khalei the the demons needs to break free.
If Donavik doesn’t find her in time it will use his power to break free and the process would kill him. Donavik’s allies and friends meanwhile are looking for the professor that got taken by GemCo. Donvaki finds traces of Ghesit but it is too late and the trails is cold. He also find a dead girl on the ground. The girl is Maiko. Donavik time travel is difficult around Gheist to donavik has a idea to give back far enough and give Maiko one of Annie’s Khalei crystal hairpins, the saboteur Khalei one. Donavik also runs into Tempo looking for revenge for the capture of her sister Amp. She thinks Amp is dead. I am planing to remake this into a small a VN also.
The Rookie
http://spiralvortexplay.com/svp/aria-the-rookie/
The next on the list the Rookie. This and Umichan basically happen at the same time. But if I had to order them, it is important to know that some students at Nanako are also GemCo agents. the rookie also will explain more about Khalei some of which was seen in semitix. The Rookie also introduces various GemCo characters in more detail and various conditions a person can get from Khalei. The condition the rookie has initially is a lighter version of the issue the character Jeo has later. It also school life at the academy. you have classes but also missions and training. The rookie is not yet complete at the time of this posting.
Umichan Maiko Classroom Cheaters/Havoc
http://spiralvortexplay.com/svp/2014/03/23/umichan-maiko-classroom-cheaters-umcc/
http://spiralvortexplay.com/svp/umichan-maiko-classroom-havoc/
This begins where Daughter of Eve left off. Maiko receives a hew hairpin from Annie after annie travel back in time to way before Maiko got shot. these events take place months before the events of Daughter of Eve. Over the course of Umichan serious stuff Maiko lives her normal life. She just so happens to be completing against her rival Luma so she is naturally improving her athletic ability, smarts, combat, etc. And with the help of the hairpin khalei it is boosted further. Because of the nature of the Khalei Maiko has a difficult time learning or understanding something right away. the end of UMCH describes the events that lead up to ARIA stuff where Jeo becomes framed by Natan when he stole a special chemical cream she had that he need for his research experiment. This framing cause the school to be on lockdown for a while until Jeo is found.
Bri side story
http://spiralvortexplay.com/svp/flash/advanced-rogue-intelligence-assault-aria/
This game is part of ARIA and can be found on the title screen. This just goes into the lore of Bri and Phil a bit of GemCo bio experiments and training of certain agents produced from those experiments such as Bri. The time frame for this overlaps Arielle side story.
Arielle side story
http://spiralvortexplay.com/svp/flash/advanced-rogue-intelligence-assault-aria/
The major thing to take away from here is Arielle’s relationship to GemCo executive Harold. She doesn’t like being with him and would rather be with Jeo.
TBA game that happens at the same time as ARIA.
This game is not created yet but in this game Maiko flees the school lock-down with the Rookie and Riley and stays with various friends mostly Jeni’s mother Holly by request of Alma. she still works at the cafe to earn her keep. GemCo agent are looking for Maiko because she was there at the scene when Lynn got attacked. Remi manages to find Maiko and explain to her in more detail about her hairpin and how it can be used to keep her safe. She gives her a history book on Khalei mages. After that Remi goes off to find Jeo/Jinru. Maiko also gets visited by Luma team. Luma, Lynn, and Riely before they go off looking for Jeo also. during this time Maiko is already decent athlete and ant fighting but really hones is mixing this with her hairpin after getting info from Remi on how her khalei works and past B.R.I. experiments. maiko also find out GemCo is suddenly looking for some girl named gheist so is less focused on Maiko at the moment nor overly concerned about committing too many resources to finding jeo.
ARIO/A
ARIA describes the story of the hunt for Jinru/Jeo a highly dangerous special agent on a mission as a student in UMCH. when Arielle’s teams gets to him the decided to help him and they work their way back to GemCo space and find the real person behind the issue. Natan executive at GemCo. During the events or ARIA Jeo also recruits the GemCo agents from Amp’s rebel crew that were in Agent Trainer. Also Jeo runs into Amp who got captured and she decided to also join him. Remi also manages to find Jeo and so does Luma team. Lynn want to set the record straight that Natan attacked her and not Jeo. Jeo wants to take down GemCo so he can be in control of it for himself. Their reason are different, but more and more people are starting to have issues with certain people in GemCo leadership. By the end of ARIO, it is discovered that Natan never left the planet.
Gheist prologue
In this game catches up to the same timeframe as Daughter of Eve but this time Maiko as the hairpin and is trained. maiko is walking from work at the cafe where she runs into Gheist and Tempo is mad because she still thinks Amp is dead and finds a way to blame it on Gheist. Maiko manages to use a lot of saboteur khalei to get to safety from Tempo. But they also bumped into Phil on of GemCo top bio scientists and highly dangerous. Maiko manage to save gheist from that also by using a large amount of Khalei. this leaves Donavik and Annie to use her abilities as a oracle and find Gheist. Donavik is glad to find Gheist and that Maiko manages to survive but goes into Khalei degeneration and starts forgetting a lot of memories. Donavik and Annie place Maiko and ghesit under the care of Chris one of the student at nanako. He has knowledge of sentinels and can hide the from gemco sentinel searches. Chris and Gheist start to romantically like each other.
the rest of JLCK and beyond
Maiko is still being hunted by GemCo agents not only for information because she was on the scene with Lynn when she got attacked but also because she protected Gheist, the rare girl all top GemCo executives are looking for so they can use her to boost profits and for experiments. But Maiko with memory lost doesn’t even know her own name or what she did to becomes hunted by GemCo. Maiko does remembers reflex and instinct stuff like how to fight so still manage to battle gemco. because it is no longer save for maiko to work at the cafe she works at strip club in the city under the name charity. they name was suggested by all of her friends. she meets chris’ sister nari, and time traveler named Ginger, who is looking for her mother. They come into play for side stories. Donavik finally manage to uses Gheist power to free himself of the semitix demon. Gheist no longer has unique powers, but GemCo still. wants her anyways. some of them don’t believe she is powerless or want revenge for her power being wasted. Before the demon leaves to fight her own battles in a different dimension she offers to come back and help with his fight here. The other from Semitix who were looking for professor light finally manage to find him. Luma team gets back from space and visits Maiko who is unaware of who they are at this point. Maiko doesn’t even remember pattie. Hearing new of Maiko on the streets Amp manages to find Maiko, Donavik, the professor and crew and adds her rebels to the team to assault GemCo. certain character like riley, luma, and unsure of who is the correct side. GemCo claims to what gheist for good reasons. Maiko, donavik all end up fighting special agents from GemCo in stalemate. in one battle Arielle team wounds annie and donavik decides to take her away. maiko uses weapon from donakiv and Annie to buy time for their escape. maiko nearly kills arielle if not of phia’s speed from her red khalei getting her out of the way in time. But slowly one by one GemCo executives and directors are taken out. Zytra and a team end up taking out Ace, Harold ends up killing Jeo behind Arielle’s back which immediately upsets Arielle and she puts harold down, kyle and savori deal with her dad, maiko ends up fighting Phil and other special agents with help. Riley and Maiko get critically wounded but survives Donavik leads the fight to take out Phil. Bri goes into khalei degeneration and forgets all about gemco. Alma finally feels it is the right time to revels to maiko she is her mother and it restores her memory. Amp finally gets back in touch with Tempo and Wave who is now restored from semitix possession. Amp, Goo, Donavik, Maiko, Ari find Natan who has completed his research and turn into this khalei infused bio weapon they have to fight. Goo is restored to a person. Last person they need to take out is Sire the mysterious director of division X, all the space related activities. he is also bio khalei infused weapon creature from all the experiments. After taking him out. GemCo is placed under the care of Rinoga who wanted to set things right all along. Maiko is offered to be a special agent under the new GemCo but decided to stay at nanako school. Bri is also at nanako now having not remember ed any from her time at GemCo. Ari having lost jeo also retires from GemCo and becomes a normal student at naanko. With natan gone Tiffany teaches some classes at nanako now in his place.
some quick side stories stuff
When maiko stay at Chris’ house over time and working at the club Zytra and Greel popularity explodes from the small nanako music club. in UMCH Maiko helps boost the initial popularity of the group but forgets everything after her first fight with phil. The group still becomes really popular and Zytra goes under the stage name Demi to hide from Ace and other old contacts. Maiko goes to one of their shows. and zytra recognized her and thought she was ok now. but maiko didn’t know who she was. oddly enough Maiko still remembered the song and hows to play a guitar. Zytra is confident maiko will get her memory back.
Nari visits chris and explain why she ran away from home at early age. She helps maiko fight in some of the battles. Ginger recognized Zytra and Leyah have magical power that is not from Khalei. Ginger is essential in Zytra and Leyah taking out Ace and his goons during that part. nari and Ginger can be found in older version of Daughter of Eve games:
http://spiralvortexplay.com/uploads/view.php?type=game&content=4461756768746572206f66204576652042657461203458
in the current daughter of eve, a woman is seen at the end resurrecting Phil after the semitix cut him in half. Donavik, the semiitx and a few others deal with her during the time the executives are being taken out.
Dizzy recovers from her stage 2 khalei degeneration after leyah calls her by her real name.
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Interesting… This could make an Aria 2 tricky since its not much of an ARIA game without Ari.
Wait ALMA WAS MAIKO’S MOTHER ALL ALONG
‘head asplodes’
Yeah this why I say some stuff just doesn’t really work, but I assume you are looking at a ARIA 2 that takes place after all this. But it needs to take place during this. Arielle eventually stops fighting but there is plenty of games that can surround Arielle before then. Arielle helps looks for natan, help looks for Gheist, fights off rebels, helps Jeo attack GemCo, goes through harold men to get to him. After all that she is tired of fighting and having a military type life. maybe after something can force her to fight again but her team would be different.
yeah it is revealed who Alma is at the very start of UMCH.
I been here since the beginning wow I already know almost everything of the basic plots. heh
Only some more expanded do to new projects. Hopefully you won’t confuse users that try to connect the dots of the timeline.
Yup, and hopefully this outline helps avoid making anything confusing.
This is one crazy and interesting plot. If it has taken you 8 years to get this point about how long do you think it will take to completely finish all of this?
“JLCK and Beyond” looks like it can be one long ass game or a couple; what is your plan, what do your milestones look like?
Not sure depends on the format of the game I guess. I think all of the story actually fits into a naruto style fighting game or something similar maybe a RPG format. yeah the beyond part is easily multiple games.
I imagine that a lot of the side stuff would delve into relationship developments (a.k.a. please oh please pander to our ships please). And people can recover from Khalei degeneration? What about the Cia inside Maiko? Is Annie considered a separate entity or a projection of Samantha while she is in a critical state; and are they able to coexist (I never really understood that part)?
There are still some confusing things. At least to me. But maybe it’s just some of the grammar.
yeah side stuff will be some of that and back story for the character(s). some of the main ship stuff will probably happen while they are taking out a particular person. zytra vs ace, savori/kyle ve albers, ari/jeo vs harold. UMC and ARia stuff sets the stage for those later battles. Yeah people can begin to recover from Khalei denigration by remembering and clutching onto something in their deep past. For maiko is is her mom, for dizzy is before people started calling her dizzy, her real name is Daisy and she used to play with Leyah all the time.
Yeah Annie is entity that is created and exists after Samantha recovers. She is created form sam emotions and memories, and when they are transferred back into Sam, Annie is still there but now has her own emotion and memories instead of Sams.
The Cia is still a part of Maiko and is what allows her to use saboteur Khalei without being killed by it whenever she goes into intense combat like GemCo Hex agents. The Semitix recognized the Cia in Maiko and tells her about it. Mixing the cia with Sabatouer Khalei allows maiko to wield a particular weapon from the planar portal. It is to heavy for anyone to carry. but maiko can use the sab khalei to literally weaken gravity’s effect on the weapon by that point. it gets pretty crazy what she can do heh. She also gets Annie necklace and donaviks razor wheel that is on his back..
So Sam does recover at some point? Or does Annie just give Sam back the memories and emotions? Does that make Annie unwilling to have sex with Donavik anymore, since those were Sam’s emotions, or does she already like him of her own volition? So many questions… But for this to be a fully developed story you need to be able to answer all of them.
…you don’t NEED to answer the questions though if you don’t want to. You just need to be CAPABLE of answering the questions. But you already have a lot planned out, so we have faith in you (or I do, at least).
Annie still likes Donavik after Sam is restored, her memories and emotions she got from Sam are from the past, but she creates her own memories and emotions during her time with Donavik that she still retains. Sam recovers in and becomes unfrozen in Semitix towards the end and her emotions and memories are no longer clashing with Annie’s own memories and emotions that are newly created.
Sam started to freeze in the first place because the ice Khalei inside her tries to fill the void of emotions and memory place in Annie upon creation. but since it is not something that is tangible, the Khalei can’t figure out what to do and freezes her all over looking for the void where the emotion is.
The Demons call Annie enigma, it is because she was instantly created with knowledge to talk and write, etc and have supernatural ability, but she has no past or a fabricated one. Basically she became conscious of her being at a adult age. That is where it can get deep when you really think about it. when do become conscious and does it matter? if you become conscious at say age 20 but can speak and write the same as some someone who becomes conscious at 4 or 5 and spent most of their life learning these things would you still be able to move forward in life? I think so. you would have no past but you would still go make new friends and learn new things. Annie is my description of this process, she does not know how to do most things. Annie never even wore pants before. The same is true with Maiko later as she for a time forgets a lot of her past due to Khalei degeneration.
What?!? You plan to make Harold kill Jeo?
No! Please reconsider this outcome!
Please!
That would be so cruel to make Arielle lose Jeo after everything she went through for him…
Please don’t be cruel…
You made me dream by creating a girl who loves a boy so much that she would do anything for him, even let a disgusting fat bastard fuck her and cum inside her just to get permission to go after him, then become an outlaw wanted by her agency, meaning leave everything behind just to be with the boy that she loves.
Please don’t hurt me by denying her the happy outcome that she deserves.
Please don’t make her lose Jeo.
Please…
You are the one who writes the story so you are the one who gets to choose how it turns.
So please, make it feel satisfying, not feel disappointing.
What’s the point to create something to make feel sad?
Are not there enough reasons to be sad in the world already?
Why would you want to add more pain?
I don’t think that you realize it, but when you create a world, with their inhabitants and their stories, you are kinda like the god of this world.
You are in control of what happens in this world.
Your world is the way you want it to be, their inhabitants are the way you want them to be, and what they experience is what you want them to experience.
Do you want to be a cruel god who creates a world and their inhabitants only to make them suffer?
Would you be happy to live in such a world?
Do you realize what is the point of imagining stories?
It is to imagine how you would like things to be.
Because you have no control over the world where you were born, you have no control over what happens in this world, then you imagine your own world where you are in control.
You imagine a world where every each thing is how you want it to be, where everything is subject to your control, whose you are the god.
You have the power to make everything the way you like.
So do you like suffering?
Do you like to see people sad?
Would you enjoy to go through Hell for someone that you love and not be rewarded at the end, lose this person that you went through so much for?
I reasonably assume that the answer is no.
Then why would you want to give to Arielle an outcome that you wouldn’t like to get?
Is that really the reward that you want to give to Arielle after everything you made her go through for Jeo?
To just deny her her happiness and take away from her the only thing that she wants?
You are not so cruel, are you?
You don’t enjoy making the characters that you create suffer, do you?
After everything you made Arielle go through, she deserves to get what she has always wanted, don’t you think?
Just grant her Jeo please.
Actually, the only outcome which would be fair is that Jeo gets Arielle rid of Harold as he promised her that he’s gonna do, return her the favor for helping him as he said.
This would feel satisfying.
And you actually already set all the pieces in place to make it happen.
Natan is wanted by GemCo for having attacked Lynn who is the daughter of leading GemCo executives and also in order to put an end to his twisted experiments.
Harold is accomplice with Natan.
We know this fact because in ARIA Jailbreak, when Harold learns that Jeo is wanted for having attacked Lynn, his reaction is “Why the hell would Jeo… Oh… Oh oh, so it is how it is. Natan has managed to put the blame on this fool Jeo.”.
So Harold is into Natan schemes from the beginning.
Now all Jeo has to do is to prove this fact, that Harold was accomplice in the attack of Lynn’s scheme, then, like Natan, Harold will become wanted by GemCo.
Meaning that Jeo will then have his hands free to murder Harold without GemCo laying a finger to protect him.
From the moment Jeo will prove to Lynn’s parents that Harold was accomplice of Natan’s scheme to attack their daughter, Harold will lose his position in GemCo, meaning that he will lose his power and become an easy target for Jeo.
Then I’m sure Arielle will express her gratitude to Jeo for FINALLY getting her rid of her nightmare in a way that Jeo will like… 😉
You have already set all the pieces in place for this outcome.
Take out Sire? Why? He is obviously not accomplice with other corrupt GemCo executives, they even fear him, he might actually be an ally to take them out.
In Amp prologue, Harold and Natan worry that Sire might discover what Natan did to his newest assistant.
Meaning that they fear him and they fear his reaction if he happened to discover their deeds.
Meaning that they see him as a threat, not an ally.
Meaning that he is not accomplice with their schemes.
And in ARIA, when Lynn tells him that Natan stole her growth cream, he assigns Cain team to take care of Natan business, to find him and to stop him.
So it definitely would make more sense that he will be an ally against corrupt GemCo executives than an enemy, he is obviously not corrupt.
He might be a great right-hand for Rinoga after she becomes the new director of GemCo.
These are more the general ideas but not totally set in stone. The idea here is that Arielle will be lost and confused at first but she will recover and grow from it. by not being fixated on a single person, and with Harold will be gone, she can actually see other things going on around her and have freedom to do things she wants to do whether she likes that life or not. Also her loyalty to a lover would have already been proven and open up new possibilities for relationships. However if Jeo doesn’t die he can maybe be severely wounded to the point of being handicap.
Then Arielle would take care of him as her loving wife that she wants to be?
Hey that actually doesn’t sound that bad, thank you for this outcome! 😀
When Lynn tells to Sire that it was Natan who attacked her, not Jeo, and that he stole her growth cream, Sire assigns Jeo and Luma’s team to resume their position in Nanako, Arielle’s team to report to Harold except Tiffany that he needs for something, and Cain’s team to hunt Natan.
So it should be Cain’s team, meaning Cain, Yui, Kim and Tony, who looks for Natan in ARIO, not Jeo’s team.
There is an inconsistency which breaks the story here.
Either it is Cain’s team who looks for Natan in ARIO either it is Jeo’s team that Sire assigns to hunt Natan.
First of all, that is not Cain’s team
2nd, he said Cain and Yui. Cain’s “team” was never mentioned by Sire to do anything. you completely made that up then told me it is inconsistent.
“let’s get this Natan business over with” doesn’t mean Cain himself should go out into space looking for anyone.
“back to headquarters.” does not mean report to Harold. It is not known what Ari does, or if she even follows those orders at all, because I haven’t written it. don’t make up stuff then complain about what you made up in your head is inconsistent.
There is very clearly a gap of time between ARIA and ARIO. where the situation changed from what Sire thought it would be at the end of ARIA.
and in that gap of time, TT is obviously already done helping Sire before ARIO happens because she is there. If you can’t figure that out on your own, you can’t just make a claim that the whole game didn’t happen and say I am inconsistent. Yes that is VERY presumptuous.
Bri’s situation in ARIO can be pieced together by playing close attention to Remi’s conversations in various games, including Umichan and non-canon games.
once you stop wasting my time (and yours) trying to tell my my game is inconsistent, and actually separate what happens vs what you completely made up in your head it will start making sense to you.
First figure out how YOU are wrong, or why something is or isn’t, before trying come at me about anything.
Alright, I understand now my mistake, I will stop to fill the gaps with my own assumptions and wait for you tell the complete story so everything will make sense once everything has been told.
However I think there is an inconsistency in the story that you have written above and this time I don’t think this way because I filled a gap with my own imagination but you actually said 2 contradictory things.
Right above, you wrote that Amp attacks GemCo training center in her prologue because she wants to “free trainees from being sexually exploited by executives or trainers” among other reasons.
However, in Amp prologue, she says “Look around you. Every person in here that supports these fucked up experiments needs to die.” then Kim answers “We are saving lives.” and Amp answers “Oh yeah turning people into fucked up GemCo experiments is saving them.”.
She doesn’t mention anything about “free trainees from being sexually exploited by executives or trainers”.
This time I’m not making anything up in order to fill a gap, right? This time there is no gap, you actually said 2 contradictory things, right?
Of course, she could want to BOTH free trainees from being sexually exploited by executives or trainers AND put an end to fucked up GemCo experiments on people.
But then why didn’t you mention anything about the fucked up GemCo experiments on people in her motives above and why she doesn’t mention anything about the trainees sexually exploited by executives and trainers in her prologue?
This is a real inconsistency, right? I am not filling a gap with my own imagination as there is not a gap here, right?
Maxime,
I really don’t want to seem rude but what’s the point in this?
Now it seems like your trying to prove a point. That Vortex has written something wrong and you’re right.
Even if you are right, I doubt he’ll want to go back and make any changes to what has already been done in the story.
You’re probably just trying to help, and that’s nice of you to do so. But he already said he doesn’t want to go back and fourth with this and it’s probably an inconvenience for him to read it all and keep replying.
Again, I don’t want to seem rude but I thought I should say this.
@maximemartyr
As Silver pointed out, I feel like instead of spending time trying to nit pick every little piece and part of my work you can spend that time reading more carefully, and especially spend time trying to understand the character’s thought process a little better.
In the game Amp identified Kim and any agent without helmets as special agents, not new agents, or as you call them “trainees”. and she said those things to the special agent to try to explain her feelings about how bad it is to support gemco experiments.
Understand that Amp was not there to personally free new agents herself. She was there to take out executives. She had her team doing other stuff including capturing certain new agents. This is described at the start of the game. A team lead by Tempo was creating a diversion, along with capturing various resources and equipment as TT described at the end. Part of these resources shows up on the space station in ARIA. including the ability for Jeo to buy some of the agents captured in this raid. and before you say “free” is a inconsistency because they are not free. Amp freeing them clearly doesn’t mean let them walk away. she actually captures them as seen from ARIA. They are prisoners. This is because she needs to first remove any possible brainwashing and reliance on Khalei done by GemCo first.
You need to understand that Amp very clearly has a team of people working for her. For her to do something, doesn’t mean she does it herself. She can make orders to have it done while she does other things. The same thing applies for Yui, Cain, and any others that have a team of people working under them.
Also as a fyi, a description of a game I wrote doesn’t take precedence over what actually happens in the game itself. A lot this written here is very old and subject to change.
Alright, I got it, thank you for the explanations, that makes sense to me now. 🙂